Author's Notes:

Shout Out to all those who reviewed my first chapter

Ivory: ( your name reminds me of my friend (: ) thanks for being my first review

Hi, like i promised i believe this is a much better chapter on the book than the first one. But i am not hopped up on kool aid. Now I'm going to let you in on a secret. I love writting with my own ideas. So there will be some things that are a little wild but dont worry. I make sure that they seem like they're probable. now i won't keep you any longer except for this last thing. Thanks for reading my book.

Wildfire

Lionblaze padded into the medicine cat clearing. Leafpool was asleep in her nest. Jayfeather sat next to Snow and her brother. They were sharing tongues when Lionblaze padded in. "What." Jayfeather snapped. "Hollyleaf wants to see you." He mewed, looking at the three cats strangly. " And why can't she come here herself?" Jayfeather said standing and stretching. "She's at highledge. She has kinda become the temporary leader of Thunderclan until you get a message from Starclan." Lionblaze said, jealousy in his tone. "The reason Hollyleaf is acepted by the clan is because she's not a stuck up jealous mouse brain." Jayfeather grumbled. "What! Don't read my mind!" Lionblaze yelled, steping forward to Jayfeather's face. "Oh, did i make the kitty mad. Aww." Jayfeather mewed in a mocking voice. The two growled, their noses only inches away. "You better remember who you are talking to Jayfeather." Lionblaze taunted. Leafpool had opened her eyes and were now watching the verbal skirmish. "Your right. I'm talking to flea bitten, sour tongued, dog breathed, hot headed, bile pelted, dull fanged-" "Stop!" Leafpool yowled cutting off Jayfeather. When Jayfeather turned to her Lionblaze raised his paw, his claws unsheathed. As his paw flew through the air Jayfeather pushed his paw to the ground, kncoking Lionblaze off balance. Jayfeather swated his other forepaw, triping Lionblaze. "You can't sneak up on someone who can read your mind." Jayfeather mewed, padding past Lionblaze. He laid on the ground, his embarrasment flowing off him in waves. Jayefather padded across the camp, the claw moon high in the sky. Jayfeather made his way up to highledge, tripping on the last step. Slowly he peeked his head in at Hollyleaf. "You wanted to see me?" Jayfeather mewed, padding into the den. Hollyleaf looked up quickly and smiled. "Yes. I was wondering if you had heard anything from Starclan?" Hollyleaf asked, gesturing for Jayfeather to sit. Jayfeather sat down next to Hollyleaf. "Hollyleaf, I've been thinking and, well, Starclan not going to send me a message, or anyone a messgae." Jayfeather mewed, looking down slightly. "What are you saying?" Holly mewed, looking at Jayfeather, Panic in her eyes. Her face softened and she turned to Jayfeather. "I think your right. As much as it hurts to admit it, I don't think Starclan is watching over us anymore." Hollyleaf mewed. "Jayfeather!" A cat yowled from outside.

Jayfeather ran out of the den and into the clearing. Laying there in the middle of the camp was Berrynose. Jayfeather could smell blood and vomit from him. When Hollyleaf came out she gasped. Jayfeather made his way down from highledge and over to Berrynose. Poppyfrost let out a caterwaul and ran to Berrynose's body. "Don't touch him." Snow yelped, coming from the medicine den. "He's my mate, why not!?" Poppyfrost snapped at Snow. "If you touch him you get the same sickness." Snow mewed, padding up to Poppyfrost. Standing next to her Snow looked like a kit. "Trust me, I know what it's like." Snow mewed. By now, the whole clan was standing in the clearing. Poppyforst spoke out. "No, you don't know what it's like. This clan is tearing apart! Ever since Firestar and Brambleclaw died everything has gone down hill. Birchfall ran away, foxes have moved into our territory, lionblaze and Jayfeather have been at each others necks, and now this." She mewed, causing a wave of murmurs throughout the clearing. "Don't forget Cinderheart's kits. If you ask me they look an awful lot like Jayfeather." Squirrelflight mewed, glaring at Jayfeather, who had shrunk back at the glare. As murmurs of agreement echoed, Cinderheart and Jayfeather disapeared from the clearing. "And what about the time when Lionblaze let that Windclan she-cat into our territory." Mousewhisker yowled, sending several glares to the golden tabby. "Why don't you shut up kittypet!" Lionblaze roared glaring back at Mousewhisker. "Look who's talking." He retorted. " At least my mom is actually useful to the clan." Lionblaze yowled, baring his teeth slightly. "Yeah, a horny medicine cat is real useful to the clan." Mousewhisker mewed sarcastically, rolling his eye to the side. "Shut your mouth carrion breath." Jayfeather yowled from the crowd. Him and Cinderheart had returned a few moments earlier. "Oh, so now the code breaking, blindy is going to talk to us." Poppyfrost yowled, her tone showing her forced anoyance. "And when did Jayfeather ever break the code?" Hollyleaf retored, jumping donw from highledge. "Why don't you ask Cinderheart." Poppyfrost spat, making the name 'cidnerheart' sound like mouse bile. "We did nothing!" Cinderheart yowled, growling at her sister. "Oh did you now!" She yowled back. Cinderhearts voice choked, but she swallowed it. She walked slowly toward Poppyfrost, mischief in burning in her eyes. The crowd parted letting her pass. "Oh Poppyfrost, my dear sister, don't accuse me of something you dream about doing." She mewed cheekily. The crowd went silent. Poppyfrost's let off a wave of nervousness that swept through the camp. "All those nights when you woke up with wet fur." Cinderheart mewed with a devilish smile, padding slowly toward her. "Jayfeather, oh Jayfeather, Jayfeather." She mewed in and imitating voice. Poppyfrost's ears and paws began to get hot. Jayfeather was kneading the ground nervously. Poppyfrost looked at Jayfeather and smiled nervously. Cinderheart smirked. "That still doesn't answer the question. Who's the father of your kits?" Squirrelflight mewed, questioning Cinderheart again. "And why should I answer to the cat who lied about having kits without even telling her mate." Cinderheart countered, sparking up yowling from the crowd. Daisy came out of the nursery and looked around at the arguing cats. "Stop!" some of the cats looked, and others kept arguing. "Hey, useless, Shut up and go back in the nursery." Lionblaze yowled. "Watch yourself!" Mousewhisker yowled, padding up to Lionblaze. The two glaring at each other face to face. Cats began parting to either side of the the camp. Some supporting Poppyfrost, Mousewhisker, and Squirrelflight. Some supported Jayfeather, Lionblaze, and Cinderheart. Poppyfrost, Squirrelflight, and Mousewhisker stood face to face with Jayfeather, Lionblaze, and Cinderheart. Leafpool steped in between front of Lionblaze and Mousewhisker. "Move!" Mousewhisker mewed pushing Leafpool down. She landed with a surprised yelp and a thud. Jayfeather and Lionblaze pounced on him. Everyone broke out in fighting. Yowls rang around the clearing as cats rolled in balls of fur and claws. Daisy, Leafpool, and ferncloud tried to stop the sprawling but to no avail. After the fighting cats seperated to different sides of the camp. Hollyleaf was the last cat left in the middle. "How can you guys let something this simple break us up, we are a strong clan." She said, looking at both sides of the camp. "You call my mates death, simple." Poppyfrost growled. "As if you actually cared for him. You just wanted Jayfeather." Cinderheart mewed, challenging Poppyfrost's complaint. "Hollyleaf, your not going to get through to anyone. Just wait until morning, let them cool down." Leafpool said, nodding to her. Hollyleaf nodded back and padded to highledge. As she made her way up the steps everyone settled in and found a place to sleep on their side of the camp. Hollyleaf didn't sleep in highledge, she slept at the top of the stairs.

Jayfeather padded up to her when the moon was three fourths across the sky. He laid down next to her, nearly falling off the ledge. Hollyleaf looked up from her sleep and smiled at Jayfeather. "Starclan sent me a message." He said, licking down a few tufts of hair that was sticking up. "What did they say?" She asked, leaning forward in anxiousness. Jayfeather put his tail on her shoulder. Four cats, Thunder, Shadow, River, and Wind all came to talk with me in a clearing..." Jayfeather sighed "They said that...

Another cliff hanger. Now I'm not sure if you were that interested in this chapter, I hope you were because i have a question for you. To get you in a thinking mood so that you can think about the things i could change to make this story better. Now, without looking back at the story, who was the first cat to question Jayeather's loyalty to the code?... Do you have it. Don't worry I'll wait... Okay. So, if you go back and read the chapter you will find out that the one who question Jayfeather's loyalty was Squirrelflight.

So, I know this chapter seems rushed but it's not suposed to. As the cats argued you were able to see that lately, things haven't been good, which has put Thunderclan on edge. But they're not the only clan having trouble. And before I go, can you tell me, without rereading (though if you want you can). Where was the last place Snow was?

Tell me if you found these little question interesting or not and remember please give me some feedback. Thank you in advance.