Well I got Great reviews, not a whole bunch, but they were nice and they ecouraged me to continue. -clap- Nice going readers
"Hey! Spitting is disgusting and rude." Balthier hollers while glaing at the little spit wad about three feet from him.
"Stop wasting your breath" Penelo mocked makeing a little mouth with her hand and moving it as she spoke.
Balthier rolled his eyes slightly. That girl is so annoying, what draws me to her? Sighing he scooted closer the the blonde girl.
Glaring at Balthier as he got closer, Penelo thought she would be sick. She'd love to be sick on him, then maybe it would keep him away. I know! I'll draw a line, and if he crosses it, then I hork on him. Hahahahahahaah! Victory! Grabbing a stick, she drew a line in the dirt about a foot from where Balthier was sitting. "You stay on that side of the line. If you cross it, I'll do something horrible to you!"
"Oh I'm shaking in my armor." Balthier said giving a sarcastic shake.
"I'm serious Bunansa!"
"Ohhhh, I am sure you are. Sooo sure you are, soooo serious. What'cha gonna do, beat on me with those tiny fists of yours, or maybe maul me with that twig?" Balthier mocked pointing at the small stick Penelo used to draw her "border line".
The young girl puffed her cheeks up and turned the other way. Easily put, she was pouting.
"Don't worry 'Penny', I won't cross your 'border line'."
The light became dim in the cave and Balthier gathers sticks and some brush from in the cave to make a small fire. Penelo had stopped pouting and started looking for twigs for the fire.
Penelo dreaded the nightfall. She had been all day. Here it has come now, and it was mocking her. I'm gonna freeze to death if I don't take Balthier's body heat. No I cna't let him win, but I don't want to die...
Short, I know. But I have only small bursts of thoughts so deal with it and don't complain! If you complain I'll stop writing so, HA! Review and tell me if you like it. Continue? k thx bye - Yuf