BLU LOVE will be continued as soon as I find the notebook it was written in.
This is a response to a reviewer here because there was a reply option.
From: Iz ()-Very nice story so far (hope you continue), but the only thing that bugs me isthe use of French. You cannot say the phrase "before moi could return yoursoap". That's just...no. 'Moi' is 'Me', not 'I', and it's one of the easiestwords for French people to use. They rarely use 'moi' in regular 's usually harder words, or words that sound very similar in both languages,like Ingénieur (Engineer), or Docteur (Doctor). If you go by Hollywoodstandards, then French people are incapable of saying 'Yes' and 'No', andinstead always reply 'Oui' or 'Non'. XD Obviously not true, but easier toaccept as a reader.
To: Iz
First let me start by thanking you for the review, and yes I will be continuing this. I do know quite as bit of French (I've taken classes) but I'm using stereotypical French sayings or Hollywood style as you call it because it's easier for reader's to understand (and to write, I hate writing French) and because it's fit's the videogame's view of Spy. Thanks for the suggestions on engineer and doctor though , I'm going to start using those.