jack's POV
I'm nervously waiting at the waiting room in the hospital, and I can honestly say that I'm freaking out! I was pacing around this little room, and I didn't know what to do. "Jack, calm down!" I heard jerry say. I ran my fingers threw my hair before I spoke. "Sorry man, I just don't know what to do and it's my damn fault she's in this situation" I said. "no it's not." Jerry said. Before I could speak a doctor came out and jerry stood up. "Kimberly Crawford?" he asked. "Yes!" Me and jerry said. "She's alive.." He said. His voice was cracking and it doesn't sound that happy, but enough to make me and jerry dance around. "I'm sorry to tell you that she's in coma" he said. We stopped dancing instantly and looked at him in shock. "How long?" I asked. I was afraid of that answer, jerry just patted my back. "Maybe days,months, years..."he said. "What?" I said and ran to her room pushing the doctor to make way,jerry was there to catch him. "I'm sorry, he really love her." I heard jerry say. I walked into a room it was kinda large, but what really caught my eyes was this beautiful blonde girl laying in the bed. "Kim.." I whispered. I took her hand and held it in mine. "please answer me kimmy!" I said. "Okey, if you can hear me move your hand your nose or whatever just move eom thing in your body!" I said "so I know your okey" I said. she didn't move. "Nothing?" I asked. I felt a tear streaming down my cheek. "are you okey?" I heard jerry ask. "This is all my fault!" I said and hit a chair. "Jack,calm down." He said. "she's in coma, and it's my fault." I said "and we don't even know how long, if it's longer than 1 month, I'm going to go insane!" I said.
Jerry's POV
"Jack cam down! She's going to be okay" I said. I seriously didn't know what to do, my best friend is freaking out infront of me. "How jerry, how ?" He asked me. "my love of my life is in coma, and I just found her and got her back!" He said. "Jack, she was a brave girl, and she can survive that attack from Ricky" I said. "Ricky" he said in disgust. "I'm gonna kill him!" He said and stormed out of the hospital, but I just followed him. When I finally caught up to him I saw him fighting 5 vampires, including Ricky. I know jack is strong but he can't fight 5 of them. And he's not at his strongest he is at his strongest only if Kim's by his side. "Jack we gotta go, they are to many!" I yelled. "Not a chance I'm gonna get revenge!" he said. Before I knew it all the guys jumped at jack at one time, I panicked and thought of the only way to help jack, waking up Kim. I ran as fast as I could to the hospital and in to Kim's room. "Kim wake up, jack is in trouble and he can die!" I said. I tried waking her up about 1hour or so and I fell asleep. when I woke up I realised I slept a hour, I hit Kim once and I was shocked to see what happened. Kim sat up breathing heavily. "Oh my god,oh my god!" She said. "God Kim thank god you're awake!" I said and took her hand. "Jacks in trouble." i said. Her eyes went wide and she stood up and took on some clothes. "where?" She asked p. I turned around and pointed at my back. She knew what I meant and hopped on my back. I used my vampire speed and ran to the location jack is.
Jack's POV
I was fighting Ricky, but the others keep coming and the last time they got me. They took my hands behind my back as Ricky came with a sharp piece of tree. I waited to die but then I heard this beautiful voice. "Jack!" I Heard someone scream I opened my eyes, to see Kim. Jerry ran to Ricky and fought him. Kim ran to me but those vampires ran up to her. "Kim don't just run!" I screamed but shockingly she took down those vampires, she can't do that, unless "jack, god are you okay?" she asked worry in her voice. She hugged me and stared at me. "How?" I asked, I was so happy, Kim's here with me. she took my hand I looked at her smiled but my smile disappeared right after she held my hand. "Kim, why can't I feel you?" I asked. She looked at me and kissed me. "Kim! I can't feel you kiss me, I can't feel your lips!" I said. I saw some tears streaming down her face and I didn't know why. "Jack..." She said. I looked at her but she just looked down the ground. Finally after a moment she looked at me right I. The eyes. "Jack, I'm dead."
soo sorry that it took so long, my computer is wrecked and I'm getting a new one next week... i just borrowed my cousins computer. But I hoped you like this. Just that you know I took the ghost thingy from the vampire diaries. But I hoped you liked it, relieve if you think it's good, tell me what's bad and what's good. And tell me how I can do it better.
-cuutiepai