Well here goes the first real chapter.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but this plot line and my oc's. Some of the characters are a bit ooc.
- Galbatorix's castle
Restricted Third person point of view
"Bonjour misouier," said Jolesa as she approached the kings throne at the end of the immense hallway.
It was decorated with gruesome tapestries of the fall of the riders. As dark as any evil kings castle would be of course.
"What do you want child," demanded Galbatorix, as he was already in a fowl mood.
"Oh nothin, I just came to say good night," said Jolesa in the most innocent voice.
"Well go to bed and let the bed bugs bite."
"Ummm, okay" sighed Jolesa as she turned and walked out of the throne room. Knowing better than to argue with the king. Who had once broken all her limbs then repaired them the last time she had disobeyed. She walked up two flights of stairs and past an open door and yells, "Goodnight Murtagh, goodnight Thorn." It is good garrow baldy let them stay in the same room again, cause them both got really angsty when the where apart for too long; them being bonded in the mind and soul.
"Goodnight Jolesa," they replied. Murtagh aloud and Thorn in her mind.
She continued on down the hall to her room. She entered the room and walked over to her bed and pulled out Shaboca ( a dark purple woven sword that her mother had given her) .
" You ready to go," said a voice in the dark corner of her room.
" You bet I am, " she replied " How many times have I told you stop standin in the corner, Stephany?"
"I told you to stop calling me that, Jellybean," he retorted, "it's Stephan, and let's get going."
" You remember where they are right, Stephan -eeee." she said with a grin.
"Ugh," he sighed and rolled his eyes,"Yes, they just attacked Feinster, we should have a couple days before they move on." He informed her as he climbed out the window.
"Cool, let's go," said Jolesa as she climbed out the window after him. They both scaled the castle wall and ran to an outdoor wash house(outhouse) and entered it. They then jump down the dark hole and trudged along in the sewer heading south for about 6 hours. This was all done in silence. When they finally arrived at the end of the sewer and clamored up a hole about 100 miles outside the city of Urbaen. They looked at each other and laughed, they were covered in sewage, some of which had fallen on them as they ran from Urbaen.
" I don't think we have ever been that quiet for that long," said Jolesa wants she recovered from laughing so hard.
" Yeah," agreed Stephan, "oh hey, there's a lake over there we should go wash off."
" Yeah," agreed Jolesa, "it's starting to smell."
" Starting. Now. It's been smelling since we went in the outdoor wash house," said Stephan as they started towards the lake. When they reached it they both jumped in, swam all the way to the bottom, turned right side up and rocketed up to the surface.
" That was fun," said Jolesa as she swam towards the shore.
" Yeah," replied Stephan as they reached the shore. He climbed out and just lay on the ground next to a sister then all of a sudden there was a rumbling noise.
" Looks like somebody's hungry," teased Jolesa, for the rumbles had come from Stephan's stomach.
" Yeah, let's go catch dinner," said Stefan as they got up stripped off their clothes (except for their under garments{under wear} and unsheathed their hand blades) and walked into the forest. As soon as they got there Jolesa spotted a raccoon and pounced, and sliced its throat.
"We be eatin good tonight," said Stephan excitedly.
They started towards the lake and sat back on the beach. Then Jolesa skinned the raccoon and turned it into a hat with the tail hanging off the end.
"What should I call it," asked Jolesa as she fit it on her head.
"What about Natasha," offered Stephan, his voice muffled from being filled with raccoon.
"I like that name," replied Jolesa, "why are you eating that, we haven't cooked it yet."
"Like that's gonna stop me, I'm hungry," stated Stephan sarcastically.
"Oh well, "Jolesa shrugged it off and picked up a bloody piece of thigh that Stephan had cut off for her and bit off as large a chunck as she could.
"Hey, what should we do with these bones? " asked Jolesa.
"I don't know, throw them in the lake, " stated Stephan as he finished his half of the raccoon.(it was a small raccoon)
"No that's littering. " stated Jolesa matter of factly.
"How bout we put them in our hair, " offered Stephan.
"Ya, then maybe you can actually tame that crow's nest," teased Jolesa.
"Ha, ha, very funny, " replied Stephan.
"Hey, Stephany, what should we do when we meet the Varden?" asked Jolesa, "I mean we can't really just walk up and say Hi, you know what I mean."
"Why not, we're just little kids, what threat could they think we pose to them?" asked Stephan.
"I'm not little, I'm fun sized," retorted Jolesa indignantly, "You! are a little kid.
"Yes, yes I am, and I'm taller than you shorty, "replied Stephan, "and you are a little kid, because, as you seem to have forgotten, and I will hurt you if you don't, we're twins."
"So!" questioned Jolesa, shrugging her shoulders, "what's your point?"
"Ugh," sighed Stephan, as he lay back on the sand with a thud, "Go to sleep."
"Fine, but you never answered my question, " said Jolesa as she curled up with her brother for warmth.
"We'll talk 'bout it in the morning," said Stephan as they closed their eyes and fell asleep.
Like I said my first story. I was listening to Wobble by VIC while writing this and the things that popped into my head were hilarious.
Btw I'm sorry if the conversation are weird. I only have a few friends and that's kind of how our conversation go. Well anyways, I hope you liked it and there is more on the way. This will be a super long story and I already have the most of it outlined. So go ahead and click that little comment button and tell me what you think. I don't care if they're flames or constructive criticism. But I must warn you that if you do leave a disrespectful comment I will hunt you down and give you my opinion with my fists of adamantium. (any Wolverine fans catch that). R&R.