Irken Invader Kim
(AN!) I honestly dont expect reviews, but DO IT ANYWAYS! lol. If it's convenient. ^-~ BTW I have the entire story done, Im just wanting some feedback so I can change it if I need to..
Disclaimer: I honestly don't own Invader Zim, though I'd like to. But, alas, it belongs to Jhonen Vasquez. (I do hope I spell that right.) I own Invader Kim. For the most part. And Pur.
After a mere three day's flight Invader Kim came upon Earth. "Oh wow! Pur didnt tell me it would look so nice!" she did a little pompom swoosh and a little dance. Her recent candy high had worn off for the time being and she was feeling a little more normal. "Computer!" "Yes? I was playing solitare." "Locate..ZIM!" "Right away." After a few bleeps and bloops the computer printed out his location. "I want to land at his house." "Of course, Mistress." The computer refigured the landing coordinates and resumed it's game of solitare. Kim searched through a smaller computers memory as she looked for a suitable costume. "I need a S.I.R. unit...it says here human's have...pets." She quickly turned to a compartment and tore it open. There was a small S.I.R. that Tallest Red had given her once, so that she would leave Purple alone. She retrieved the small computer chip and popped it into the S.I.R.'s head.
The small units eyes glowed a light purple, then reverted to a bright red. "Mistress!" "Hello. I'm Invader Kim." The S.I.R. processed the information and looked back to her. "Now, I'm not much for naming so, what name would you like?" "PUR! Mistress." "Oh! that works so well!!" The S.I.R. now PUR looked at his mistress oddly.
"PUR, Have you ever cheered?" "No, Mistress." She handed PUR a pom pom and quickly loaded data into the robot. While Kim and PUR did a small cheer she was making for Zim, PUR tripped. "PUR, are you alright? What..oh silly me. Like, Duh, you're a robot." But it turned out PUR wasn't alright, The fall had damaged his data disk... "WHEE!" PUR did a small break dance on the floor while Kim watched happily. "That's the spirit PUR!" So the two danced together for a little while until Kim was quite worn out. "Okay, PUR. It's time to work. Computer, Get me an Earth costume for PUR. " "Right away." Kim waited impatiently as the computer put together a costume. "Mistress, PUR's costume will be ready momentarily. Have you picked yours?" "Quite. Number three." As the computer ejected PUR's costume it pulled up Kim's. It was much like Zim's in comparison. It was a light red colour, with sleeves and gloves, but where Zim's shirt quit, Her's trailed to the floor in pleats. She had artificial skin colouring and contacts that made her eyes a nice humanly blue. (AN: Humanly..eh. is that a word?) Her wig was brown and blonde, highlighted. Kim looked over the outfit. "Humans arent very cute are they." She looked over at PUR. PUR's outfit left him as a giant rat. "Oh cute!" "Mistress, Landing in 5 minutes." Kim put on the new disguise and held PUR in her lap as they approached their landing coordinates. "I hope Zim got the transmission I was coming..."
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(AN!) I honestly dont expect reviews, but DO IT ANYWAYS! lol. If it's convenient. ^-~ BTW I have the entire story done, Im just wanting some feedback so I can change it if I need to..
Disclaimer: I honestly don't own Invader Zim, though I'd like to. But, alas, it belongs to Jhonen Vasquez. (I do hope I spell that right.) I own Invader Kim. For the most part. And Pur.
After a mere three day's flight Invader Kim came upon Earth. "Oh wow! Pur didnt tell me it would look so nice!" she did a little pompom swoosh and a little dance. Her recent candy high had worn off for the time being and she was feeling a little more normal. "Computer!" "Yes? I was playing solitare." "Locate..ZIM!" "Right away." After a few bleeps and bloops the computer printed out his location. "I want to land at his house." "Of course, Mistress." The computer refigured the landing coordinates and resumed it's game of solitare. Kim searched through a smaller computers memory as she looked for a suitable costume. "I need a S.I.R. unit...it says here human's have...pets." She quickly turned to a compartment and tore it open. There was a small S.I.R. that Tallest Red had given her once, so that she would leave Purple alone. She retrieved the small computer chip and popped it into the S.I.R.'s head.
The small units eyes glowed a light purple, then reverted to a bright red. "Mistress!" "Hello. I'm Invader Kim." The S.I.R. processed the information and looked back to her. "Now, I'm not much for naming so, what name would you like?" "PUR! Mistress." "Oh! that works so well!!" The S.I.R. now PUR looked at his mistress oddly.
"PUR, Have you ever cheered?" "No, Mistress." She handed PUR a pom pom and quickly loaded data into the robot. While Kim and PUR did a small cheer she was making for Zim, PUR tripped. "PUR, are you alright? What..oh silly me. Like, Duh, you're a robot." But it turned out PUR wasn't alright, The fall had damaged his data disk... "WHEE!" PUR did a small break dance on the floor while Kim watched happily. "That's the spirit PUR!" So the two danced together for a little while until Kim was quite worn out. "Okay, PUR. It's time to work. Computer, Get me an Earth costume for PUR. " "Right away." Kim waited impatiently as the computer put together a costume. "Mistress, PUR's costume will be ready momentarily. Have you picked yours?" "Quite. Number three." As the computer ejected PUR's costume it pulled up Kim's. It was much like Zim's in comparison. It was a light red colour, with sleeves and gloves, but where Zim's shirt quit, Her's trailed to the floor in pleats. She had artificial skin colouring and contacts that made her eyes a nice humanly blue. (AN: Humanly..eh. is that a word?) Her wig was brown and blonde, highlighted. Kim looked over the outfit. "Humans arent very cute are they." She looked over at PUR. PUR's outfit left him as a giant rat. "Oh cute!" "Mistress, Landing in 5 minutes." Kim put on the new disguise and held PUR in her lap as they approached their landing coordinates. "I hope Zim got the transmission I was coming..."
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