Hey everyone I am back with the next chapter. I was like overwhelmed with the response so far for the story mainly due to the fact that I am new to this. One of the guest readers had stated that it was difficult to state who was saying what so I tried to minimize that. Please do review and point out the mistakes and I will try to improve myself. Thanks for reading the story. I do hope you like it. Well onward with the story.
Disclaimer: I do not own One Piece or any of its characters
Previously:
"It's the whole of the straw hats crew!"
"Even Jinbei and Crocodile are here"
"Those people are the prisoners from Impel Down"
"So that is Ace's brother"
"Kind of like Ace right?"
As Ace looked at Luffy's crew he bit his lip in worry hoping that his brother would survive this war.
"Luffy…."
Crocodile looked beyond the straw hat crew towards the Moby Dick. He glanced towards Edward Newgate aka Whitebeard. He had a sinister smile and he turned into sand to go towards Whitebeard with an intention to kill him. His hook was near Whitebeard.
"Long time no see old man"
"You never learn do you?"
The hook was near his neck when someone hit it. It was Straw hat.
Luffy intercepted Crocodile hitting some old guy with a really awesome mustache that was like a banana. He hit crocodile's hook who proceeded to tell him that the old man was Whitebeard.
"So this ossan is Whitebeard. Then don't touch him. Ace really likes this guy."
Luffy felt Whitebeard glancing at him.
"Brat that straw hat of yours looks like the one which red hair shanks used to wear."
"Old man you know shanks? I am holding it onto shanks"
"Have you come here to save your brother?" whitebeard asked him
"That's right"
"Do you understand who you are up against?" Whitebeard slammed down his bisento "Someone like you doesn't stand a chance here"
The whole battle field was silent. The straw hat crew looked towards Luffy who was silent for a minute. Was he scared by Whitebeard?
"SHUT UP! THAT'S NOT FOR YOU TO DECIDE"
Everyone was stunned by his reply to the strongest man in the world. Nami, Chopper, Ussop, Franky and Brook were really tensed. Ussop Chopper and Nami were especially sweating at what Luffy had said. Robin was simply amused. Zoro and Sanji just smirked.
"I know perfectly well. You want to be the King on the Pirates don't you?" Everyone was making shushing sounds now
"I AM THE MAN WHO WILL BECOME THE PIRATE KING!"
The whole war field was stunned by Luffy's proclamation. Straw hat was insane to challenge Whitebeard. The silence was suddenly interrupted by the straw hat crew.
"THAT IDIOT!"
The whole crew rushed towards Luffy and Nami and Ussop started hitting him. Robin was giggling, Zoro and Sanji were still smirking while chopper and brook were crying and Franky looked simply stunned.
"Stupid captain do you realized what you just did?" Ussop yelled.
"Luffy, you just challenged Whitebeard who happens to be Ace's captain!" Nami yelled loudly.
"So what?"
"So what you ask?"Both of them were yelling now "you could not beat Ace how will you beat his Captain?"
"Luffy it is too early to challenge Yonkos so please say sorry" Chopper wailed.
"Nope"
"It's over" Ussop, Chopper and Brook were crying now "we are going to the new world just to die…"
"Well if we do something wrong he can crush us using his devil fruit power" Robin stated giggling slightly which had the weakling trio crying now.
"What's done is done right" Zoro stated.
"The marimo is right…"
"Who are you calling marimo huh shitty cook?" and they both start fighting again.
"Do you think Whitebeard-san will forgive us because Ace-san is Luffy-sans brother?" Brook asked the crew.
"I don't know that bro. But what Luffy did now was SUPER-CRAZY!" Franky stated.
"ACE!" Nami, Chopper, Ussop and Brook were crying together now "Please ask your captain to forgive Luffy!"
All eyes turned to Ace now.
"Um…. Pops forgive Luffy" he asked awkwardly
"Gurarara…he is such a cheeky brat. Why are you asking that Ace? I like your brother already. He has guts…gurara..."
"So this is the straw hats crew?" Marco asked landing beside Whitebeard while Thatch came behind him.
"Wow he is like a mini-ace right Marco?" Thatch stated grinning and remembering the good old hundred attempts by Ace.
"Ace came with a hundred attempts. Do you think straw hat will do that Marco?"
"He won't join our crew Thatch. Ace already told me about his kid brother" Marco stated looking at Luffy who was staring at Marco with a blank expression "Um…is something wrong?"
Luffy was still quiet for some time. He stared at Marco which had everyone confused.
"OMG YOU WERE SOOO COOL JUST NOW. YOU WERE ALL BLUE AND YELLOW AND YOU HAD WINGS. THAT IS SOOOO COOL. ZORO DID YOU SEE THAT? THAT IS SO AWESOME. HEY I KNOW JOIN MY CREW! I NEED THAT BLUE THING BECAUSE YOU ARE AWESOME AND I KNOW I AM AWESOME SO JOIN MY CREW PLZZZZZ!"
Everyone was stunned at what Luffy had just stated.
"LUFFY" Ace roared suddenly "YOU CAN'T HAVE MARCO IN YOUR CREW LUFFY. HE BELONGS TO THE OLD MAN'S CREW. BESIDES, HE IS MY BROTHER YOU KNOW!"
"WHAT PINAPPLE IS YOUR BROTHER? I HAVE ANOTHER BROTHER. THAT IS SO AWESOME. NICE TO MEET YOU PINAPPLE-ONNICHAN I AM LUFFY THER MAN WHO WILL BECOME THE PIRATE KING!"
"Um…nice to meet you and my name is Marco"
"Nice to meet you too Marco-niichan now come with me we have to go and save Ace. So you come with me and we will save Ace together"
"…Okay"
That was laughing behind Marco now and the rest of the Whitebeard pirates were just stunned at what had happened. The straw hat crew was trying to process what had just happened.
"Oh by the way old man I have to tell you something important" Luffy stated seriously again. He quickly told Whitebeard about the marine's plan to execute Ace ahead of schedule.
"I see" Whitebeard stated "it is really important. Sorry about before"
"Don't worry about it"
"THEY ARE TALKING LIKE EQUALS NOW!" Every one yelled.
"Yosh…Ace stay put. I'm coming to save you"
"Alright let's go" Zoro stated.
"Right" all the straw hats said before jumping off the Moby Dick along with Luffy.
Zoro and Sanji went behind Luffy while Robin, Franky, Chopper and Brook went as one team to help the Whitebeard Pirates. Nami, Ussop and Franky were near the Sunny to protect the ship. And fight as well.
"Luffy, Pops, Every one….." Ace muttered.
Well that ended well. I was stuck on how to show what the straw hats felt when Luffy challenged whitebeard. Any way I do not want to show this story sad and with anguish and I am going to fill it with humor.
Please do review and do give suggestions on how you want the story to be like. BTW I was wondering should I include Sabo. Please do tell me if I should.
Thanks for reading and wishing you a happy day ;-)