Ok guys here it is! and thanks so much to Orochi Ryuu, BlackAngel20626, kaliAnn, and Fiskmypres for being my very first reviewers i really appreciate it!
Zaks Point of View:
I drifting in a dark void of nothing. I cant feel my body, now that I think of it I can't see hear or anything! All I see is darkness.
Oh wait I think I hear buzzing, oh my God what I have like bees inside of my head! Ok, calm down Zak I probably don't have bees in my head, just relax. After a few seconds I hear more buzzing except its becoming clearer than the bees I think people are talking, hey that's my Dads voice! Ok, concentrate whats he saying. i hear four words "He's in a coma". But wait no im not. I can still hear things, his stupid computers must be wrong, i mean why would he lie like that?
I try to listen some more but all I can hear is heart broken sniffing(i think its mom). I sigh,well now what! Then I hear my mom say something, i try to focus on what she says but all I hear is" Za...plea..move!" I'm guessing she wants me to try to move, but its kinda hard seeing that i cant feel my body. I try anyway just for her. I try to at least move my finger but suddenly i feel like tons of pillows are pushing down on me, im getting tired of just trying to move my finger! MAN ThIS SUcKS!AHHHGGHHH! great now im falling asleep, i trying so hard to keep my eyes open but i cant. I don't wanna sleep I want to see my Mom, Dad, Fisk, Doyle, Zon and Komodo. I miss everyone, I want to go back, suddenly everything go's blacker than before.
Thanks so much for reading i think the next one will be about the family and another about zak waking up really soon!:) i lovee ya'll!(im from Louisana) hahaha i might accidently use Ya'll! hehe!