Edit: Strange this one had less mistakes but it was more confusing odd.

chapter 2 she said what!

StarlightBreaker: hi again sorry if the name is to random

Estelle: i think its cute it adds mystery to whats going on

RIta: no it doesn't

StarlightBreaker: i have to agree with Rita for once i don't think it does ether

Estelle: oohh you two are mean i know it makes a perfect title i know it

StarlightBreaker: oh i know i can make Estelle say something that will make you say WHAT!

Estelle: L like what or are you actually going to make me do THAT!

StarlightBreaker: oh like a swear or a bad joke that will make everybody look at her weird

Estelle: NO! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! I WILL NOT DO THAT!

Starlight&Rita: o.o

Estelle: um well StarlightBreaker does not own tales of vesperia bandai namco does

StarlightBreaker: yeah if i did Estelle would be a Whole lot more violent and possessive

Estelle: no i wouldn't

Starlightbreaker: yes you would anyway on with the show

Estelle was skipping down to the exit of zaphias while holding Duke's left hand and Ioder's right but then she stopped when she noticed that she was standing right in front of the lower quarter. "Yuri." Estelle quietly mumbled. "Anyway!" Estelle shouted that so loud that it broke a nearby window.

"Oh fiddle sticks." Estelle said that with such a polite manner it wasn't even funny. "Run for it!" a bit before she said run you could hear the sound of knights coming Estelle knew that sound from when she first met Yuri.

"Run run run." Estelle said those words with panic and enjoyment in her voice as they ran out of zaphias. "ha-ha-ha I think we made it." Estelle was barely able to get those words out of her mouth so she sat down on a patch of grass.

"I cant believe you actually said that though it was very exciting ha-ha." still breathing heavily Ioder sat next to Estelle and started to talk about something but it was barely heard by Duke.

who then wandered off into the forest "I wonder where he's going." Estelle questioned then turned away to face Ioder and continue the conversation.

Duke's P.O.V

"I know I heard something." Duke wondered even deeper into the forest then he planed but luckily for him that forest wasn't that big it was actually quite small.

"Ooh where is it?" a females voice was heard in the distance a quite familiar voice indeed, one Duke was quite fond of. "Who's there." just to make sure Duke yelled then slowly peeked behind a tree and there he saw the krytian women and the dog, it looked like they were searching for something Duke walked up but stopped when the dog turned and started to growl at Duke the krytian noticed and turned around the smile was gone in an instance.

"Duke." the krytian said his name in a ready to fight tone

"I'm not here to start a fight with you." Duke calmly said this In hope of making her put away her spear brionace

"Then explain why you're here." Judith commanded.

"I came here with The child of the full moon." Duke explained expressionless.

"Estelle." Judith calmly said looking a bit worried. "I'm sorry Duke but I cant trust you." Judith said this while drawing her brionace

"I should have expected outcome." Duke said than drew his Dein Nomos.

"Please stop." Said a voice from behind Duke.

"Estelle." Judith called out still looking quiet worried.

Estelles P.O.V

"Duke Judith what are you two doing." Estelle cried out as they were about to engage in battle. "stop it!" Estelle ran and grabbed Duke's arm.

"Child of the full moon on hand me." Duke Demanded.

"That's not my name!" Estelle pouted with a sweet innocent look on her face that cried for attention Duke made some sort of sigh with a slite blush creeping up on his face.

"Miss Estellise sido heurassein please un hand me." Duke said again except the blush was growing stronger much stronger

"Estelle." Estelle complained.

"Estellise." Duke responded.

"Estelle." she complained again

"Estellise."

"ESTELLE." the fight went on and on until Duke finally gave up.

"Estelle." Duke said her name and his blush finally went away,

"Okay I'll let go." Estelle let go and then walked up to judith, "Judy your hurt." Estelle said with a worried look

"Judy?" Judith questioned,

"Hm what is it?" Estelle questioned

"Oh its nothing." Judith responded.

"Ah! I left Ioder all alone." Estelle said and got up and tried too run to where she had left him but Judith stopped her. Judith. "what are you doing." she asked.

"I'm sorry but I can't let you go." Judith exclaimed with a sad look.

"Damn women!" Estelle said this with a very deep ton of voice "Judith let me go!" Estelle cried out as she broke from Judith's clutches.

"Estelle you oh my." Judith said with shocked expression,

"I'm sorry I just." Estelle then ran for Ioder but saw something un-expected.

Starlightbreaker: well well did you like it did you did you if you did review please

Estelle: I can't believe you made me say that

Starlightbreaker:oh come on you pronounced it D.A.M not damn so there's nut in to worry about

Estelle: but still and why was I so out of character

Starlightbreaker: didn't you read the dog-on chapter name

Estelle: yeah but still I don't like this chapter

Starlightbreaker: then you can go get hit by a meteor for all I care

Rita: well that's kinda mean don't ya think

Starlightbreaker: no! so yeah i hope you all liked ch 2

Yuri: when am I going to appear

Starlightbreaker: never if you keep that up who told you, you could speak outside of the story anyway

Yuri: Karol said you said that everybody could speak

Starlightbreaker: next time you see Karol tell him I said beep off

Yuri: as long as I can stay sure

Starlightbreaker: oh and im going to try to at least make this have over 10 chaps so R&R