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Izuku opened his eyes and squeezed them shut again when a bright light stabbed at his eyes. He kept his eyes closed for a little while longer groaning at the fact that he was getting up this early before slowly stretching out and dragging himself out of bed.

He felt there was something different about today but he couldn't tell what it was. His eyes were slightly sore and they felt like they were trying to desperately escape his head by clawing out of their sockets. He rubbed them until there were black spots dancing at the edge of his vision then got up and got ready for the day ahead.

He could hear his mother in the kitchen already making breakfast it was still pretty early so why was she up? Was it because she thought he was trying to avoid her yesterday? When he got home yesterday he did go straight to his room without so much as a hello to his poor mother who was in the middle of cooking dinner. Izuku felt a twang of pain in his heart feeling bad for stressing out his mother. He would be sure to comfort her later but right now he felt as if he had to get out. He could feel that something important was going to happen today and he just had to see it his inner fanboy would not accept him missing out on what could possibly be the perfect chance for him to glance off more information about being a hero.

After taking his shower Izuku walked out and greeted his mother who started fussing over him the instant she saw him walk out into the dining room. Smiling at her antics he assured her he was fine and was just tired, that's why he went straight to his room. Tears were rolling down her cheeks as she still continued to worry about him.

"Mom, I going to head out again today, I didn't really get to do what I went out to do yesterday because of that villain." Izuku said his mother looked up tears still rolling down her face as she gave him a wavering smile signaling that she heard him. He got up in an instant and moved to comfort his mother again. " I promise I'll be careful mom, I won't go anywhere dangerous."

Finally out of the house Izuku walked to the train station looking to catch an early enough train to the next city over.

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It was still pretty early in the morning but he could still get some groceries from a nearby store. Toshinori Yagi wore a baggy white shirt and some military grade pants with four pockets big enough to hold a bottle of soda in each pocket his normally perked up strands of hair hung on the two different sides of his head limply. He walked out of the store in his weaker form as to not be noticed and swarmed by fans on his early morning run. He looked up at the sound of a woman screaming and a store owner running and yelling after a large green sludge with abnormally large eyes and an huge mouth that seemed to just float freely in the dark green sludge. Toshinori noticed that there was money also inside of his "body" If he could call it that. The people in front of him just watched with disappointment as the sludge villain quickly made away with the cash he nabbed.

"Man the Hero's have really been off their game these days, huh" one of the people said, his voice showing more signs of disappointment.

"Yea, yesterday I heard there was a lady who was attacked by a villain and she would have been dead if it weren't for a quirkless boy who intervened," a lady said. "The hero's didn't get there till later and the boy apparently held his own against the villain by himself."

This caught Toshinori's attention and he made a mental note to find out the name of that boy. He was searching for a successor, and thinks that boy could be a good option, but right now he had to capture that villain and restore the faith in the heroes that was wading sightly.

Toshinori entered his bulk form and put on his famous smile before letting out his boisterous laugh scaring the two civilians in front of him.

"Do not worry citizens, for justice will be served to that villain today!" His voice boomed all around reaching everyone that was close enough to listen. He smiled even wider at the smiles he was seeing among the faces as they all began to recognize him "Why? Because I am here!" His well known catchphrase was the last thing everyone heard before he dissapeared after the criminal.

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Izuku had his notebook out as he muttered to himself lost in thought he had already lost his way because he was trying to track down the store that was robbed earlier.

Flashback

He heard the scream of a woman and hurried over but he got there a few minutes late because everything seemed fine on the street. He stopped a passerby and asked what the scream was about.

"Aw, sorry kid you just missed it. The villain got away with the money but he should already be caught, All Might appeared and went after him. Can you believe it? The Number One Hero was here!" the man squeaked before running off.

Izuku was instantly jealous, 'The number one hero? Really? no fair, Izuku shook the thought away but his intense jealous feeling creeped back up on him again because his inner fanboy wouldn't let go of the fact that he missed his Idol All Might. While Izuku was busy chastising himself he didn't realize he walked down a road he didn't recognize.

Flashback End

Izuku continued to criticize himself while walking under the overpass up ahead blissfully unaware of the dark green sludge seeping through the manhole cover.

Izuku didn't notice that the morning sun had disappeared from behind him being replaced with a oddly moving shadow before it was too late. Before he knew it his whole body had been submerged in the horrible muck. Its scent invaded his nostrils while it shoved itself down his mouth. A grating voice racked his ears,"Thanks kid, you'll make the perfect body suit for me to get away from that huge oaf." Izuku couldn't breathe let alone tell where exactly the voice was coming from.

Izuku grabbed and yanked at the slush that was enveloping his body trying to find someway to pry it off of his body but it just slipped through his fingers. He started to panic

'I'm going to die here, he thought. I'm going to die and I'll never be a hero. I was lucky to be saved from death once why would I think I could get away a second time?' Izuku's thoughts suddenly became louder in his head 'Maybe I should just give up, maybe I'm not meant to be a hero" tears shimmered at the edge of his eyes as he began to let himself fall victim to to suffocation and the feelings that were dragging him down.

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Getting lost in the sewers was not apart of today's plan but then again when had things ever go to plan. All Might sped through the sewers still searching for the villain who had slithered down there the instant he saw the number 1 hero after him.

All Might almost passed by another man hole until he heard a strange sound from above and noticed that the cover had been moved. Blasting through the hole he expected the villain to attack him as soon as he jumped out but the scene that greeted him was something much more horrifying to him. He saw a young teenager with messy green hair that overshadowed itself, his limbs hanging loosely at his sides not even trying to stop the invasion of his body. What scared All Might even more was the look in the boys large green eyes, They seemed glassed over like the boy knew what was happening and was okay with it. The boy seemed to have come to terms with dying which scared him more than anything. The boys eyes focused its glossy gaze at him before slowly closing. All Might instantly jumped into action determined to save the boy before his fears could come true.

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Izuku woke up to an annoying feeling. It felt like someone was tapping his cheek nonstop, not hard enough to hurt but enough to drag his mind away from its dark chasm it was trying to fall into

He slowly forced his eyelids up and looked into the smiling face of All Might. His eyes widened in excitement "ALL MIIIIIGHT!" Izuku screamed scrambling backwards in surprise. All Might simply laughed his boisterous laugh with an even bigger smile, The sludge villain from before was stored in two soda bottles and both of the bottles were tucked safely in All Might's pockets. "Sorry for getting you caught up in my justicing young man" All Might said letting out another laugh while striking a equally ebullient pose. Izuku started looking around for the hero to sign something; anything it didn't matter finally his eyes settled on the notebook he dropped during the attack. He scrambled over to it and picked it up while stuttering over his words

"A-All Might uh P-please sign my notebook" Izuku held it out hopeful but it fell open in his hands revealing the man's signature already.

He was sure his heart was going to fly out of his chest at this point. Izuku started bowing rapidly word vomiting his thanks to his idol. He was feeling a mix of emotions that flowed through him like a circuit without a breaker and tears of joy seemed to make their place on the edge of his eyes. He rubbed at his face in a futile attempt to dry his face. As he tried to calm himself down All Might let out a small smirk and turned to leave. Izuku took notice of this and with his heart leaping into his throat again, yelled out "Wait! Please I have so many questions."

"I'm sorry but I can't crime waits for no one!" All Might said squatting down. He was preparing to jump away and Izuku would never see him again except on tv. His eyes widened and he began to try and stop the hero from leaving. He had just one more question he desperately needed answered.

Without thinking Izuku launched himself at All Might in some hopes to stop the hero but instead he found himself in the air attached to the hero's leg his face being contorted into one that you would usually see in a a manga or child's show. Tightening the grip he had on the hero's pant lag he tried to force down the overwhelming feeling of fear threatening to overcome him.

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Toshinori didn't notice the feeling of extra weight that seemed to latch itself specifically to his left leg until it was too late. While he was in the air Toshinori felt something that made his trajectory feel a little off, he looked down and his sight was met with the young green haired lad he saved only a minute ago.

"Hey Hey, now I love my fans but this is too much!" he said scrambling to try and push the kid off of his leg " Hey come on let go" he struggled some more.

"I can't, If I let go now I'll fall and die!" the boy exclaimed fear becoming imminent in his voice at the thought of letting go now.

"Oh, Right... Well then just close your eyes and your mouth" The boy did as he was told but Toshinori could feel the boys grip on his leg tighten. Looking around for a suitable building to land on blood began to leak from his mouth; He quickly wiped the blood away with his arm and cursed himself for not paying attention to his time limit.

Finally he found a building with a flat roof and no one on it, the buildings surrounding it were too small to be able to see the roof that towered over them. Landing on the rooftop Toshinori looked down and saw the boy already disengaging himself from his leg. He briefly heard the boy mutter something about his life flashing before his eyes before he turned to leave again. Taking a few steps away from the boy Toshinori had to make sure there wasn't a repeat performance of the kid attaching himself to his leg. As he prepared to jump again he heard the rescuee ask him to wait for a few more seconds. Normally that wouldn't have kept him from jumping but for some reason it did this time, maybe it was the way the boy's voice cracked during his little outburst or the tense way he was standing but something kept Toshinori there even though his time limit was coming to an end.

"All Might; Please I just have to know…" the light in the boy's eyes seemed to die again as he looked down and tears started making way out of his eyes. "All my life I've been told I couldn't do it because I've been quirkless all my life." This sudden reveal caught him off guard because these days people without a quirk are rare " P-please I j-just need to hear it from someone…" more tears streamed down the boys face and it looked like the dam he was trying to keep from breaking seemed to just fall apart on him. "Can I- Can I be a hero? Even if I'm quirkless can I still be a hero like you?" the kid had his head down and his eyes shut tight and tears still making their way down his cheeks He was overwhelmed with so much emotion his voice cracked at the end. Toshinori opened his mouth to say something but at that moment his body exploded into that of a shorter skinny blond man with blood shooting out of his mouth like a fountain.

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With his body coiled like a spring Izuku almost shouted his question at his hero. He tried to keep his feelings in check but he was getting so overwhelmed that his own voice betrayed him and crack with emotion at the end. He kept his eyes shut in in attempt to stem his tears but it wasn't working and when his question was met with silence he dared to open his burning eyes and look up at his lifelong idol.

His eyes widened in surprise and disbelief when he looked up instead of seeing his hero he just saw a skeletal man with bright blue eyes that were shadowed by his face. The human skeleton spewed more blood from his mouth and quickly wiped it away while Izuku continued to freak out " W-W-What happened? Where did All Might go?" Izuku questioned, his eyes felt like they were going to burst for some reason.

"Don't worry kid it's still me" the man said huffing a little. "I'm still the same All Might you know and fanboy about.". Izuku couldn't believe what he was hearing, he felt like someone had dropped a 5 ton lead weight on his eyes and they felt like they were going to explode inside his head.

" Hey kid calm down I'll explain everything." The man said while sliding down to sit on the floor. He slowly lifted up his shirt showing off a grisly purplish scar on the lower right side of his abdomen. He went on to explain to Izuku what happened.

"You know those guys at the beach that hold their breath to look better for everyone else sake?" All Might asked. Izuku nodded his head in understanding what he was talking about he usually saw people doing it all the time.

"Yea well I got this about 5 years ago in a battle with a villain. I managed to keep it under wraps but the surgeries wore me down, now I can only stay in my muscle form for about 3 hours a day." He finished.

Izuku held up his hands while doing the math in his head "5 years ago… hmmm, That would be your battle with the villain Toxic Chainsaw right?" Izuku blurted out randomly.

All Might laughed before more blood made a surprise appearance. Quickly wiping away the blood again All Might beamed up at him

"You must really know your stuff fanboy, Most people don't even know about that battle."

Izuku's face turned slightly red from the compliment received.

"So Toxic Chainsaw did do that to you?" Izuku asked worry still gnawing at him in the pit his stomach. Thinking about a villain being able to injure All Might kind of scared Izuku the blush faded away as he thought more about it, but before he could go on a muttering spree All Might stopped him with a laugh/ huff.

"As if that guy could do something like this to me" All Might laughed at the ridiculous idea before his eyes suddenly darkened.

"No kid he didn't do it. It was another villain, One you haven't heard of and one you will never hear about. Got it?" His tone suggested that he was trying to assure Izuku that there was just another villain put behind bars but there was an underlying meaning in his words that made Izuku's heart beat just that much faster.

All Might slowly pushed himself up from his seat on the floor and headed towards the stairs keeping a wary distance away from Izuku in case he tried to jump on him again. He opened the door.

With his Idol leaving him again Izuku's fear was replaced with a sudden desperation again."Wait All Might please… I just need one person to tell me I can.." his voice oozed all the emotions he felt up until that point.

"Can someone like me become a hero?" He was letting all of his feelings out now. Guilt, Fear, Excitement. It was all coming out in his question. The tension in the air seemed to grab ahold of All Might and hold him in his spot on the stairs.

"So you want to be a hero, huh?" All Might sighed while pinching the bridge of his nose " You know… everyday heroes put their lives on the line everyday to protect people and some villains quirks are very dangerous." All Mights sunken blue eyes didn't meet Izuku's hopeful emerald ones instead he looked at a spot just ahead of the sun finding it very interesting all of a sudden " You said you are quirkless right? I don't know how else to say this but villains are just too dangerous for someone without a powerful quirk." All Might turned and finally looked Izuku in the eyes. his look held sadness in them "I'm sorry without a quirk you can't be a hero"

Izuku's mind went completely blank. He stood there as a fog enveloped him completely drowning him in despair. All Might walked towards the door and started down the stairs he stopped on the second step and turned to look at the boy one more time and said " It's fine to have dreams young man, Just make sure they are realistic"

As soon as All Might disappeared down the stairs Izuku collapsed to his knees and let more tears fall freely. His idol didn't believe in him no one did. Izuku could deal with the kids his age who told him his dream was useless, it didn't mean anything to him, but, having All Might himself tell Izuku to give up his dream was just too much. It pierced whatever emotional armor he had managed to build up from the years of bullying.

A loud explosion and screams from far away blew away all the fog that had blanketed his thoughts. Izuku snapped his head up to look around and scan his surroundings. He saw fire and smoke reaching for the sky a few blocks away and his heart jumped into his throat. Wiping away his tears Izuku mentelly waved away his harrowing thoughts and bolted down the stairs almost tripping on his way down.

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It may have hurt but he had to do it. Toshinori's heart felt like it was tearing itself apart for telling that boy he had no chance at being a hero, "but it had to be done" he repeated to himself " It was all for his own good. Heroes face such dangerous villains everyday and from the way he acted when he was captured by that sludge villain earlier he would just freeze up. Right?" for some reason it just didn't sound right to him. He shoved his hands in his pockets and kept walking down the street brooding a little. He pushed the thought away and continued down the street trying to steer his mind away from the thought that he might have just ruined a kid's life. He as about a block away from the building he left the kid on when a sudden explosion rocked the floor beneath him making him stumble into a nearby wall. He looked up and saw a tower of flames about 4 blocks away. Toshinori's heart began to beat faster as he glanced down at his pockets.

Empty.

He inwardly cursed himself for not noticing earlier, the bottles were gone. He started towards the source of all of the commotion continuously scolded himself for being so neglectful. By the time he got there his breath was labored, in his less buff form he had little to no stamina which is one thing that always bothered him. A crowd was surrounding the safe area just outside of the burning buildings watching in fear as the sludge villain from earlier lashed out at other heros. Backdraft was busy keeping onlookers and reporters at bay as Kamui Woods ran in and out of burning building pulling out more civilians who were unfortunate enough to be caught in the destruction. Death Arms was in the middle of the destruction backing away from the villain.

"Damn it, I can't get near him. If only I was stronger" he cursed

"I wish we had All Might here I bet he could have ended this already." Another hero said while gritting his teeth.

" MT. LADY DO YOU THINK YOU CAN GET TO HIM?" Kamui Woods yelled as he ran away with more survivors.

"I-I can't reach him I need at least a two way street in order to walk through." she said panic rising in her voice a little. The heroes were at a serious disadvantage and they knew it. They were starting to panic since none of their quirks were seemingly strong enough to stop the villain before them.

Another explosion rang out blasting away a chunk of the villain to reveal the face of katsuki bakugo screaming profanities at the sludge while trying to free himself. A collective gasp escaped the crowd when they saw him struggling to free himself from the grasp of the sludge which began to gather itself over his mouth again. Fear ran through the crowd as the new revelation of a hostage being in his grasp sunk in.

"He has a hostage!" Death Arms raced forward in an attempt to grab the boy but a slimy whip flew through the air with a crack knocking him back

" Death Arms stay back there is nothing we can do against this guys quirk we just have to hang back and try to keep everyone else safe until someone with the right quirk can show up!" Slugger called out

Toshinori brought his hand up to his scar again cursing under his breath.

This was his fault.

If he had just paid more attention while in the air then he could have caught the bottles before they fell, no this all could have been avoided if he had been faster in catching the villain. If he had only been fast enough to grab him and stuff in in a bottle before the villain lost him in the sewers. He was no longer in his prime he had gotten even worse these past few days of course the people didn't notice. To them he was still fast and strong as ever, but he could tell he wasn't moving as fast as he could before. He had to hurry up and choose but he still hasn't found a suitable successor yet.

A woman's screams and a startled yelp from one of the heroes brought Toshinori back from his train of thought.

When he looked up his bright blue eyes lit up in fear as he recognized the green mop of messy hair running into the flames stumbling over himself.

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This was all his fault. If he didn't latch himself onto All Might's leg then the villain would have never gotten free, but he did and now he was causing untold damage and hurting anyone who dared get too close. Izuku watched while the heroes tried to find a way to subdue the muck but he just kept on slipping through their grip and smacking them away while laughing. A sudden explosion and curses from a familiar sounding voice sent Izuku into a mini panic attack as Bakugo's face appeared in the hole that he blasted in his liquid like prison.

"DAMMIT LET GO!" his face was contorted in anger but Izuku could also see the slight hint of fear in Bakugo's glowing red eyes as a mouth with a wide toothy grin covered up the bottom half of his face.

It might have just been him looking around at the scene that had finally been opened up to him but bakugo's red eyes seemed to lock onto Izuku's emerald else faded away and before he knew it Izuku was already pushing through the crowd and under Backdrafts arm towards bakugo his bright red sneakers squeaking on the concrete.

A yellow eye floated up to the surface of the gunk and stared in Izuku's direction before the slime recognized the kid from his earlier attack.

"You again!?" he said raising up a slimy green tentacle "DIE ALREADY YOU BRAT!" he brought it down trying to crush the little nuisance.

Izuku kept running while memories of his hero notebooks flooded through his head, He recalled a page on Kamui Woods special move Lacquered Chains Prison; 'Making your opponent flinch in combat it very helpful as it creates an opening for attack'. Izuku slid off his bag and threw it at the villain in an attempt to make him flinch but instead it only pissed him off as he smacked the bag away.

Izuku felt something shift behind his eyes before a small shockwave freed itself from his face nearly knocking him over. He managed to keep his eyes open and on the villain in case he attacked again but instead he saw that both the villain, Bakugo and the flames all had a bluish light around them and weren't moving at all. No… they were moving but really slowly. The flames seemed to wave from side to side instead of flickering like they were before. Bakugo's eyes were closing. It was nearly imperceptible but Izuku could was sure he could see bakugo starting to lose his will to fight. Tears started forming in Izuku's eyes again and he blinked to get rid of them.

That's when the effect ended. Everything seemed to return back to normal in the instant Izuku blinked. The flames lost their blue hue and reverted to flickering instead of waving and the villain blinked obviously confused at how the little welp before him had seemingly moved closer in an instant.

Izuku jumped into the slime aggressively clawing at the slime that had covered his childhood friends face. Another explosion was let loose and bakugou's face reappeared, his eyes gazed at Izuku with surprise and apprehension.

"Deku? What the hell are you doing here?" he questioned his voice was hoarse from yelling.

"I-I-I don't know. My legs just started moving..." Izuku had tears falling down his face again. He looked up and his watery emerald eyes met fearful red ones." Kacchan… I couldn't just stand there and watch you die." he stopped to stare up at bakugo who had closed his eyes again from the painful grip the villain had on him.

"Look kid I'm done playing with you" His slimy hand came bearing down at Izuku for the finishing blow.

"Quick save the boy, he'll kill him!" Death arms and the rest of the heroes rushed in seeking to at least save one of the kids caught up in the danger

Izuku cowered in fear expecting the worst of the pain to come but it never did. Slightly confused he opened his eyes and took in the image in front of him. He saw the towering form of All Might next to him holding off the attack with one of his muscled arms.

"I really am pathetic, I told you the traits to make a great champion..." He pulled his arm free of the entanglement. "...But I see now that I wasn't living up to my own...IDEALS" Blood spewed forth in copious amounts from his mouth, he grabbed onto both Izuku's and bakugo's hands as he continued his speech"Pro's are always risking their lives, THAT'S THE TRUE TEST OF A HERO!" he yelled as he pulled back his arm for a devastating blow.

"Damn you All Might!" the sludge cursed already throwing another pitiful attack at the hero.

"DETROIT SMASH!" thrusting his punch forward All Might completely decimated his small time enemy while pulling both boys into safety.

A whirlwind of air blew through the area blowing out the fires and clearing out the smoke. Mt. Lady braced herself on the ground protecting the civilians from the force of the blast the rest of the pro heroes held each other for support to avoid being whisked away by the small tornado that had formed. The tornado lasted a few seconds longer before dispersing in the air around it. All Might stayed crouched down trying to catch his breath while everyone tried to comprehend what just transpired. Rain droplets fell from the sky breaking the silent trace and causing some people to flinch.

"Huh? Rain?" one voice was heard, then another " Don't tell me all the wind just now was…" another person voiced out his thoughts " Wow look at the clouds their moving!" The crowd was starting to get excited.

Death Arms looked up at the clouds then back down at All Might in complete awe 'Holy crap' he thought 'He just changed the weather' All Might stood up wiping away the blood that still stuck to his chin his smile still present. The crowd went ballistic cheering while the rain lingered. Still tired out from going beyond his limit All Might almost fell backward but managed to catch himself before anyone could notice. He threw his arm in the air as a symbol to the people that as long as he was there, no villain will ever get away.

All Might took a quick glance behind him at the two unconscious boys behind him but his focus was solely on the green haired kid that rushed into danger supposedly without a quirk but from what his saw the kid had slowed down time itself around the villain not to mention the villain himself. He felt as if he had just found the perfect inheritor for One For All.

All Might turned to face the oncoming onslaught of reporters and fans completely oblivious to the pair of beady red eyes watching from the rooftop of a nearby building. This stranger had witnessed what Izuku did and wanted to have a quick talk with the kid to see if he wanted to train under him for this kid had peeked an unusual interest from this person.


So uh... yea it has BEGUN I'm introducing a character earlier than the show did like way earlier and uh yea we are going to so how this goes. It might make or break the story.

Sorry about the awkward POV switches it was a little difficult for me to switch from POV to POV seamlessly like other authors so if its a little jarring I'm sorry Also I know I left out probably A lot of important dialogue but it's either because I forgot it and was too far to go back and fix it which would have force me to most likely go back and change what i already wrote or I'm going to try and fit it in in the next chapter with the new person that has entered the scene.

Again I wanna thank HankFlamion18 for being a constant pillar of support and constantly egging me on to continue writing this please if you haven't already found it go check out his story "To See the Past and the Future" it's really good I promise you will enjoy it. I also wanna thank my friend who isn't on this website for going through and editing this chapter when it was about halfway finished he didn't have to but he did anyway so big thanks to him for also being there to help me keep this slow moving train going. That's all I have to say right now I guess so...uh... yea I'll be going so I can get started on The third chapter for you guys. of course review, flame me I don't care as long as I can at least gain some healthy criticisms from it and favorite and follow if you haven't already. cya