PLEASE REVEIW, I NEED TO KNOW IF I AM DOING OKIE. ;~;
December 6, a Saturday, 3:21p.m.
The Winter Dance is going to be on December 12th Friday at 7:00p.m. I'm in Adventure Bay's best mall. They have soooooo many cool stuff. My mom, Snowflake, only wants to buy me a dress, ONLY. Which is sad, but I also don't want huge hoop earrings so I accept. I have been walking around the mall which was mostly filled with humans. But, I FINNALY found a section for pets, with food. I kept walking until, I saw Marshall! THE MOST POPULAR BOY IN SCHOOL IS HERE IN THE SAME LANE AS ME! I immediately went to the next lane before he saw me.
He was with his mom looking for a tux since he was right in front of a, good looking, tux. Right behind him was the most bueatiful dress I have ever seen. It was a blue, short, poofy, I like saying poofy instead of fluffy cause it sounds cuter, glittery, and... JUST AMAZING. I'm picturing myself in my school dancing with the
music and wearing that dress. I NEED THAT DRESS. Oh. My. Gosh. Why is SHE doing here. Princess, the most annoying, meanest, and popular girl in school was staring at that same dress. She said hi to Marshall's mother and started jogging to the dress since she didn't want anyone to take it.
She was getting closer, I have to react before it's too late. Good thing I'm closer. I went to the edge of the lane, then jumped on the dress grabbing the handle with my teeth. Princess was happy to see me so she could come and bully me like she did before. Well not this time. I ran to my mom so she can take me to the fitting room. Good thing she did or else Princess would have started fighting me. Once she actually almost broke my ribs. Now the test to see if the dress fits.
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OMG GODH IT FITS! I can't wait to where it at the dance!
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