alright ppl so heres the second chapter of my fanfic! ihope you like it :)
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Recap: To those not dancing this most likely gave the appearance of a scene strait out of a movie, although i had no recognition of it. I was entranced in the beautiful eyes of the boy, no, the man, that held me in his arms. I guess you could say I had always had a crush on the black haired boy. I have never dated anyone in my entire life because I had always compared them, in one way or a another, to Eli. The boys with the devilishly good looks, like Eli, always had a brain the size of a pea. Where as the boys that matched Eli's intelligence gave off the appearance of roadkill, but now as i watched that same boy pull me around in flawless motion, I couldn't help but feel that i was in love with him.
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Well, I was sixteen when suddenly
I wasn't that little girl you used to see
But your eyes still shined like pretty lights
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Still Clare Edwards P. O. V Age 16
No more than 30 seconds after the dance with Eli I had been dragged around to all the guest to say my hello's and thanks for their attendance. After that it was time for the games. I loved the idea of teenagers acting like 6 year old's, even if we were all dressed in formal wear. So, i had convinced my parents to let us do a bunch of little kid games. Of course we went all out traditional on them.
The first game type activity was the pinata, and everyone knows no pinata is good unless its the birthday girls(or boys) favorite character, so i had a perry the platypus pinata at my sweet 16. After "perry" had been broken open and people as taken all the candy we moved on.
Next, was pin the tail on the perry, of course similar to that of pin the tail on the donkey, but again, with perry the platypus. After that there were various games, perry themed and non-perry themed, so on and so forth. Soon the party was nearing its end and i had still yet to open any or my present. We had, had cake but then became so distracted with mingling that we had all but forgotten about the presents. So within the last 30 minutes of my party i began to open presents.
Everyone gathered around me and watched with intent eyes as I began to open my presents. The present received varied from books to paintings, video games to cd's, ect ect. Over all i enjoyed all of the girts i had gotten and thank each person individually after unraveling their gifts. So with all the gifts opened and the games played the party was over and everyone began to leave.
Now all that was left to do was clean up, then crash into my bed for a good nights sleep. So i began the cleaning of the massive ballroom, but not without help of course. My family, obviously, was helping, but surprisingly my parents had also convince Eli's family to stay and help us as well so we could get the job done faster. As i bent down to pick up some streamers I heard someone walk up behind me.
P. O. V. Eli Goldsworthy Age 18
The party was over and all the people other then Clare's family and my family, that had volunteered to help clean, had left. I stood still contemplating what it was i should do next. After that dance with Clare at the beginning of the party something had just struck me. I was in love with Clare. I mean I had always known that I loved Clare, but i had assumed it was never more than a best friend, or even a brother-sister type thing. Although after that dance...needless to say my thought were FAR from brotherly. Now i am not a cocky person but i swear when i looked into her eyes i saw the same feelings i have for her staring back at me. So, on a spur of the moment idea, i made up mind, which apparently my body knew before my brain did, because it had subconsciously walked me over right behind where she was. I noticed the small twitch of her head in my general direction, indicating that she knew i was there, so i began to talk.
"Hey blue eyes I think you missed a present" I told her, using her childhood nickname i had given her, as she stood up strait and turned to face me.
"Oh I did? Where?" she began to twist her head back and forth looking around me from some type of box.
"Right here" I spoke in a deep husky voice as I gently rested my hand on her right cheek and pulled her in for a tender chaste kiss. I know it was corny, but what can I say? I'm a hopeless romantic...
After first I could feel the tension in her lips. I assumed that meant this was her first kiss. I mean i cant say i am utterly surprised, its not like I had ever seen her with a "boyfriend". After about 3 seconds though, she released her nervous tension and kissed back. Honestly I didn't know if she would or not so I was both surprised and over joyed. After the kiss had run its course we stood still, nose to nose, staring into each others eyes, lost. She wrapped her arms around my neck as I hung mine loosely on her hips.
"That was...um...unexpected?" She spoke with that small smirk on her lips as she continued to look up at me.
"Clare, I know this is cheesy, and may seem really sudden, but I realized I really like you, and after i saw you today, looking so...beautiful, i realized i might just...love you" I whispered the last little part, I didn't know exactly how to word the feelings i had, this was all very new and embarrassing to me.
"Well I figured that much out of the kiss, Eli." she answered back at me, even though her cheeks were flushed bright red. She then tilted her head to the side and kissed me again, this time deeper.
From the other side of the room, our parents stood in bewilderment. Apparently when our dads joked about us being a couple when we were younger they were kidding, cause this was definitely a shock to them.
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And our daddies used to joke about the two of us
They never believed we'd really fall in love and our mamas smiled
And rolled their eyes, and said "oh, my-my, my"
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So thats it for this chapter! Sorry it was so short but i wanted to get you guys opinion on what to do next, i was thinking of doin the next chapter that might be the last, if not second to last and i was wondering if i should take it Rated M? what do you guys think? and as a small note the next verse mentions them in the back of a truck at 2am, so i was gonna change the age again and put em in morty not a truck, but should they be out that late on a graduation day or birthday? cause i cant decide :( so pllzz inbox me or comment with ur thoughts! Anything helps! thx!
love,
Freakxlover
