Nobody get any ideas from this chapter, ha, ha!
It was the middle of the night, but Dimentio was still awake.
He quietly walked down the hall to Mr. L's room and tapped on the door.
"…who's there?"
"It's Dimentio. Time for idea one."
Mr. L opened the door and Dimentio went inside the room. Mr. L had his laptop turned on and Internet Explorer was running.
"Are you sure this will annoy Dawn?" Mr. L asked.
"Of course! And she'll never guess we– Internet Explorer? Really, Mr. L?"
"What's wrong with Explorer?"
"To be honest, it sucks. Download Firefox tomorrow; you won't be sorry."
"Fine, whatever. Let's just get over with; I'm tired."
Dimentio went to Fanfiction and did a search for Dawn's pen name.
"So, how many reviews should we leave for each story?"
"Oh, it doesn't matter as long as we do more then ten per story." Dimentio answered while making his own laptop appear in his lap. "I'll do half and you do the other half."
"Should read them first? You know, see how bad they are?"
Dimentio sighed. "Go ahead, it'll make it easier to say bad things about them, I guess."
The two worked for hours reading and leaving reviews that no author would be pleased to get.
Finally, four hours later Mr. L yawned.
"It's four o'clock, Dimentio. My fingers are getting sore and we should get some sleep."
"I suppose you're right," Dimentio said, yawning.
"Of course I'm right. Now, kindly get out of my room."
After shooing Dimentio away, Mr. L turned off and put away his laptop, then lay down on his bed to get a few hours of sleep. As his started to drift off, he wondered how Dawn would react to all the new reviews she had.
Early the next morning, Dawn loaded her e-mail to see if any of her favorite fanfics had been updated yet.
Much to her surprise, she had over one hundred e-mails saying her stories had new reviews.
She grinned happily.
"This is as cool as getting my first review!" she cried.
Quickly she opened a new tap and went to Fanfiction to read all her wonderful new reviews.
Her smile quickly faded as she read the first few:
"Don't you have anything better to do then write s*** like this?
Get a life!"
"Dis story suckz!1!11!"
"Did you ever think that maybe you're evil and not your Sim?
You're such a bad person, Dawn!"
"Were u drunk when u wrote this crap?!111?!"
"This is so lame! I've seen babies write much better stories than this!
F*** you and your so called 'stories'!"
"…"
Dawn called Star.
"Star? We have to meet up somewhere. There's something strange going on here…"
The two girls met up in Darkland Forest, much to the annoyance of Midbus, who now lived there.
Hey, he couldn't stay frozen in Peach's Castle forever you know!
"What's up, Dawn?" Star asked as soon as Dawn walked up.
"This," she answered holding up her laptop.
Star looked confused. "Did you break your laptop?"
"No…"
Dawn opened it then went to Fanfiction (Don't ask how she found wi-fi in the middle of a forest.) and loaded all the new reviews her had gotten over night.
Star looked through them.
"Whoa! The trolls be trolling," Star laughed. "Or someone really hates your writing."
Dawn sighed. "Don't you notice how some of them are written properly and some aren't? It looks like one's a troll and the other one is a real hater. But, the two never review the same story!"
"So…?"
"So, do you know what this means, Star?"
"Um…"
Star thought about it while Dawn looked at her hopefully.
"…"
"…"
"…no clue. What does it mean?"
Dawn did a facepalm.
"Seriously? No thoughts on what it could mean?"
"Nope."
"It means, there are two people," Midbus said suddenly.
Star turned to him. "What's makes you say that?"
"Twenty reviews per story? Most of Dawn's stories have only one chapter."
Star did a sweatdrop. "I could have figured that out."
"Yeah, in two hours from now maybe."
"What's that supposed to mean?!"
"Would you two cut it out?" Dawn said. "The bigger question is: who left those reviews?"
"I KNOW!" Star yelled. "Dimentio and Mr. L probably did!"
"Why would they…" Recalling what she and Star had done the week before, Dawn did a sweatdrop. "Oh, yeah. I guess that would give them a reason for trolling me like this.
"And I know how to find out for sure." Star stood up. "Let's go pay them a little visit, Dawn."
"Okay, I'll take my laptop home then meet you there."
Dawn walked away. Star started to follow her, then thought of something and turned around.
"Um, Midbus? How would you know that most of Dawn's fanfics have only one chapter?"
"Where do you think she does most of her writing?"
"…make senses." Star shrugged then walked away
Dawn and Star were both at Castle Bleck, sitting on Dimentio.
"Now, tell us the truth: Did you and Mr. L leave those rude reviews on Dawn's stories?" Star asked.
"I'll never tell!" Dimentio growled.
"They did," Dawn said, getting off of him.
"What?! How do you— I mean, what makes you think so?' Dimentio asked nervously.
"Well, if you didn't, you wouldn't know what Star was talking about. Then you would have asked 'What are you talking about'?" Dawn smiled.
"Fine, you got me! Yes, we stayed up most of the night writing those review. Happy now?"
"Not yet. Tell us why." Dawn said.
Dimentio sighed. "I guess we'd tell you sooner or later anyway. We're making a list of ways to annoy a fangirl."
"Why?" Dawn sounded slightly irritated.
"Because, there are so many fangirl who do the same to us fandoms. So we're fighting back!"
"Whose idea was this?" Star asked, looking very infuriated.
"I've said too much already, I won't tell you!"
Star glared at Dimentio.
He gulped. Star was rather fearsome when she was really angry.
"F-fine, it was Mr. L's i-idea."
"Anything else you want to say?" Star asked teasingly.
Don't hurt me!" Dimentio cried.
Star nodded. "Much better."
She and Dawn left, their work being finished.
Ten minutes later Mr. L found a traumatized Dimentio hiding in his bed.
"Uh, Dimentio? Aren't you a little old to be hiding in your bed like that?" he teased.
"Star's scary when she's upset," was the reply.
"Well, what did you do to her?"
"I, um, told her everything." Dimentio admitted.
"E-everything?"
"Yup."
Mr. L sighed. "Great, that means this isn't a one-sided war anymore."
"But, it'll be more exciting with them trying to fight back," Dimentio pointed out.
"True. Oh well, ready for idea two?"