I don't own FMA, just some of my characters. I read a lot of FMA stories so I decided to do one myself. I will change the plot A LOT, so I need to know what you think. It too hard to say what will I ACTUALLY do with the characters, but I guess I will take Sloth form the original series. The rest is still unknown...to me:3
Alphonse
I just hope you are alright brother. I really do.
It was still raining when all of Hughes family felt asleep. It was strange to sit in such darkness and to look through the window. I was all alone now. And it scared me. I knew, that brother is somewhere not far away, that he's in some kind of danger AGAIN, but what could I do? He said me to wait here. So I have to trust him and wait. Even if he's in a fight with Scar I'll just be in his way.
The lightning appeared in the sky.
Brother…
Edward
It was very dark but I was able to see the silhouette which was approaching. Thin, dark figure with a long coat. Is that Scar?
'Hey' I said but it didn't answer. Suddenly the human (at least I think so) jumped higher and attacked me with his leg. The boy tried to kick me but I jumped away and used my alchemy. I turned my auto mailed arm into a weapon.
'Well, what's now?' I said with an obvious grin on my face. I ran to the boy yet he was too fast and I got kicked into face. 'Y'know' I started when I began to clean blood from my face. The boy was quiet. 'I needed I good fight. I need a cool-down. The question is why you are attacking my?' I said. He didn't answer. Just stood and waited for his attack. It was an interesting battle style. He didn't have so much strength as I did but he was very fast and thing, also, he was somehow able to hide in those shadows and even to predict my moves. 'Who are you?'
The boy disappeared. I was so confused that I began to spin in circles, trembling from that cold rain and darkness
Alphonse
I can't just let brother die there. Even though I know that when he'll come he'll probably kill me, that doesn't matter now. Scar will kill him immediately, especially when he's so hotheaded. So now I headed straight to the Central, to Colonel, hoping that he'll help me out.
'Al' I heard Lieutenant's voice. She was standing next to her car, in the middle of the street.
'Lieutenant? What are you doing here?' I stopped.
'It's a long story' I heard Colonel's voice as I saw him already sitting in the car. 'We have some new news about Scar and his whereabouts. He's in the Central…' he started but I interrupted:
'Colonel! My brother is in danger then and…'
'I know' Colonel folded his arms. 'Don't worry. I gave him some special treatment. Now, get into the freaking car.'
Edward
I saw darkness and nothing else. I felt like a blind-man. And the other thing I saw was my auto mail. Scattered into tiny parts, all falling apart.
Damn, Winry's gonna kill me.
The boy punched me into the neck and I felt. He sat on my belly, still holding that tiny foot on my neck.
'The hell?' I tried to stand up but I was not able to. 'Go ahead and finish me. In my condition and with your techniques, you'll do that in no time.' The boy looked away, into the sky.
The rain has stopped.
'Who are you?' I asked again and he looked directly at me. Those eyes… They do look familiar. Just like…
I heard a car and I saw the lights.
'Brother!' I heard Al's voice and the boy let me go. 'Are you OK? You met Scar or what?' he said when he saw my arm.
'Not exactly…' looked into the boy which was walking towards us.
'Good work Shadow' Colonel said. Wait… Colonel?!
'The hell he's doing here Al?'
'Just picking up some trash' Colonel and sighed. 'Get into the car Fullmetal'
'Wait, you just called my 'trash'? I will devourer your soul you beast… I will...' I began to squirm. Al tried to hold my away from the Colonel because if…
The boy stood next to me and all. He took his coat off.
Alphonse
The girl with long dark hair and brown eyes began to speak with a sarcastic tone:
'I heard a lot about Edward Elric, the Fullmetal Alchemist. I had no idea that he'll be so...' she stopped. '…bad at martial arts. Maybe next time I'll test your alchemy skills.' She smiled with the same sarcastic look on her face.
'Wait you're a girl?' Ed asked.
'Apparently' she closed her eyes. 'Anyway, I must be on my way. Colonel, Lieutenant' she nodded and began to walk into the mist.
'Wait, lady!' I shouted and I could feel how he armor cheeks began to burn bright. 'Wha-What's your name?'
'It's Ahri (pronounced as A-r-i)' she said after some time. 'We'll meet again pretty soon.' And a little dark shadow melted in the mist that rose from that damn rain.
So the new chapter. As always please review, say what's good, what's bad and etc. Thanks for your time. HOPE that I'm not so HOPELESS:)