"Lack of reviews is the greatest killer of fan fic writers out there. We at the institute wish to let the public know of how they can pitch in to save our dying writers.

Drop a review every other chapter. It may not seem like much, but reviews are actually what many of us want to see. That, and hits. Hits do make us happy but we don't really know if people like our story or not.

What you call being "too lazy to review" is what we call "a flame to the pages" as the writers. That one minute or two that you felt "too lazy" to review is another minute of creeping discouragement that all writers feel as they begin to think...

"Why am I even here…?"

"What's even the point of continuing?"

"My skills must be terrible…no one cares for my story…"

"I'll never be a good writer...I quit."

These are only a few thoughts that go through every writer's head- that go through MY head- when we put out a chapter / story with all our heart and soul within, and we sit there…and sit…and wait…and not a single person says even a word. If you're not a writer, you have NO IDEA how much that hurts…

If you ARE a writer, then I'm sure you know just how great it feels when someone is kind enough to leave a heartwarming and encouraging review, and you read it, smiling while thinking…"Wow…fuck...I did it…" So, why not give fellow writers the same luxury here?

Jack POV

I was currently in a forest at an altar made out of wood that was covered in flowers and two aisles with regular chairs were out for people to sit in wearing a tuxedo. A few feet to the right aisle there were tables set up and in the middle was where the food was at with a white cake with some strawberries on top in the middle. On the left of the altar was piano.

Today I was going to marry Artemis and I was excited that I was finally going to have sex with her tonight. In the aisles on one side was Artemis's hunters some seemed happy at the idea of being able to get married while others appeared to have mixed feelings about it. There were also some of them who simply ignored me. On my side was my entire harem with the exception of Cortana who was too busy to come, Bova, Raf, Hermes and Dionysus who had helped plan the wedding, Shiva much to my surprised decided to check out the wedding, Saji who is my best man, and Fowler who had arrived with my mom.

Then the piano started to play and Artemis appeared wearing a white wedding dress with the veil covering her face. Escorting her by her right arm was her twin brother, Apollo. Several falcons suddenly appeared above her and started dropping flowers in front of her as she walked towards the altar.

Once Apollo and Artemis arrived at the altar he released Artemis to me but not before whispering.

"I don't care how powerful you are or how important you have become you better take good care of my sister."

"Don't worry I will," I whispered back before Apollo left to sit next to his wife Britomartis.

Break

Some time had gone and I put the ring I got for Artemis on her finger.

"You may kiss the bride."

And with that I removed Artemis's veil and slowly our lips approached each other and soon we were passionately kissing.

Break

Jack's room

The wedding had gone off without a hitch so far and now there was only one thing left to do. Claim Artemis virginity.

Artemis then appeared in my room wearing nothing just like me. I could tell that she was nervous but also excited. Artemis then got on top of me and started to kiss me.

I had a feeling that Artemis wasn't sure what to do based on her expression.

"How about I take the lead on this Arty?"

Arty was a nickname that Apollo came up a while ago, and had shared with me when I was brought to Olympus and told about my engagements to Athena, Demeter, Aphrodite, and Artemis.

"I was hoping you would ask," Artemis replied, rolling off me and lying beside me.

I climbed on top of her and started kissing her, taking the lead. Her auburn hair splayed out all over the bed as I continued kissing her, and Artemis felt more confident in letting me take the lead, which was good.

"Shall we do this, Jack?" Artemis asked, grinning at me.

"Sure, but one thing," I replied as I rolled onto the bed beside her and started slowly stroking my dick.

"Suck it, so it fits in you better."

Artemis nodded, and moved herself so she was in between my legs. I guided my dick into her mouth, and she slowly started sucking it like a vacuum.

"Oh, fuck that's good!" I cried out, throwing my head back. Artemis glowed at the praise, and continued sucking, making noises with her mouth with my dick still inside it, that got my libido raging harder than ever.

"Arty, fuck… I'm cumming!" I shouted in warning.

That only seemed to encourage Artemis even more, as she just descended her mouth until it was completely wrapped around all of my dick, and I let all my cum out, which she swallowed whole.

"That was so nice," I panted, before getting up and placing Artemis on the bed below me.

I then took hold of my dick and positioned it at her entrance.

"You ready?"

"Yes, I'm ready. Now do it!" she called, glaring at me. I just smirked in response.

"As you wish," I replied, and slowly I pushed inside her, breaking her hymen in the process. Artemis took a sharp breath from the pain of it, but her face melted into a look of pure pleasure.

"Fuck... this is great, Jack!"

"Thanks," I whispered to her, and began slowly thrusting inside her, "Your pussy is so tight."

"Well, I was a virgin!" Artemis was still sassy, even when overcome with pleasure.

Classic Artemis.

"Key word: Was," I replied and continued thrusting inside her. Artemis continued moaning loudly as I kept thrusting, slowly getting faster.

"You're so good," I said before leant down to kiss her neck.

"Oh, shit! Jack, keep going!" Artemis shouted, closing her eyes tight in pleasure. And I did, putting my hands on Artemis' shoulders to keep me balanced. I then felt myself building up in my dick.

"Artemis, I'm gonna cum, okay?"

"I am too! Cum inside me and make me yours!"

I smiled, and then released everything I had inside her. I counted at least five ropes of cum that I shot inside her.

"That was... amazing," Artemis panted, as she came down from her own high. "I don't think I can go again."

"Heh." I slowly pulled out of her and lay beside her. "We can work on that in the future."

Artemis' face split into a wide grin.

"I'd like that."