Authors Note- Thank you much for the review Krikanalo it means a lot that somebody reviewed. I also saw the guest who reviewed review but I'm sorry that I can't properly say thanks to you. Before I forget dragon speak is going to be in italics and Max's Voice is in italics plus underline. Max's thoughts are bold and in italics. Enough of my rambling though let's get on with the story.
Chapter 1
Max POV
As I start to get up I am extremely confused and I don't understand what's going on and there is two extremely scaly creatures right above me. So I do what every bird kid would do in this situation.
"Don't eat me," I say while cowering in fear.
I know what you must be thinking the great Maximum Ride cowering in fear that's impossible, she's not scared of anything but if you were me you would be to. These things are at least 20 feet tall and don't even get me started on the length of these creatures, they also had wings and a very spikey looking tail. The first one was a very dark green color while its wings were a silver color, with pine needle green eyes, and a very triangular shaped head. The second one was shaped exactly the same way but was a shiny silver color with ivory white wings and dark gray eyes.
"Why would we eat you little one?" the first one said in confusion.
"Um because your huge terrifying beasts that look like you could swallow me with one bite" I said.
"We won't eat you," they said simultaneously "What's your name?" the silver one asked.
" My name is Maximum Ride," I said proudly surely they know who I am.
" It's nice to meet you maximum," the green one said.
" And what's your names" I ask them as nicely as possible.
"My name is Lydia" the green when said while the silver one said, "My name is Luna."
" Okay Lydia and Luna why did you interrupt me trying to kill myself," I ask rather annoyed with them.
"We need you to save our world Alagaesia from destruction, the mad king Galbatorix is trying to enslave he last free rider by torturing him at this moment to learn his true name." The green one said.
The silver one picks up the story from here "If he takes over Alagaesia then nothing will stop him from taking over every other world, laying destruction to every land whit nothing left for the different peoples. No one would be safe from his wrath not even you Max." This is why we stopped you from killing yourself, we need you to save Eragon from the prison, to help the Varden, and play your part in killing Galbatorix.
After thinking about it I tell them I would help them. After I told them that they seemed really relived.
"Okay Max before we take you to our world we are going to take away your memories. Just remember you need to save Eragon, help the Varden and overthrow the mad king." The green one stated.
"I'm ready to go," I say to them.
"Good we are going to teleport you to the others who are trying to break Eragon out, they won't trust you at first so wear this pendant I am giving you and will trust you enough to let you help Eragon okay. The silver one said while giving me a necklace with a strange design on it.
"I have one question before I leave though." I say "What kind of creatures are you?'
"We are dragons," the silver one states, before I black out again.
Max POV
5 hours later
"Murtagh she is waking up" a mysterious voice said after I had groaned and started to get up, then realizing I couldn't I stopped moving and just opened up my eyes.
The sky was pith black so I assumed it was pretty late. Turning my head to the side I saw two men over by campfire. Huh, seems like whatever has happened to me has made me a prisoner. Searching through my thoughts I tried to piece what had happened together, and to my horror I could not remember.
"Who are you?" the one who looked older asked. "And what are you doing here" the other one asked.
"Untie me and I might consider telling you the answers to these questions," I said sarcastically
"Fine, untie her please Murtagh" the old one said. During this exchange though I noticed a couple things first I was wearing black leather armor with two swords on my belt. In my leather boots I could feel daggers hidden in there.
"Okay since you guys untied me I'll tell you what you want to know I replied. My name is Maximum Ride but you can call me Max for now." I said calmly.
"As for being here I only have fragments of memories, like first of all I can here voices in my head telling me to save Eragon.
When I said that I could see them jump when I said that kids name.
Max you need to be nice to these guys these are the ones who will help you save Eragon.
Who are you and why are you in my head?
Just call me voice I am the thing that will guide you through your journey.
Fine Voice I'll be nice to them for now.
Good to know Max and make sure after you tell them the next thing you show them the pendant.
"The other reason I am here" I said taking the advise from the Voice "is that I am going to join the Varden and help Eragon overthrow the mad king."
For a moment they only looked shocked then they demanded how could they trust me, so I showed them the pendant and then they said they trusted me for now and gave me a backpack that had apparently landed next to me.
Okay guys here's chapter two I tried to make it longer than the last one and tried to incorporate Krikanalo's advice with their speaking. My update schedule will always probably be later in the days because I'm not much of a morning person and I will try to upload everyday possible.
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