I'm baaack, lol. YOU GUYS R AWESOME!! I got reviews so fast!! Sorry it took me so long, but I was reading Max, the 5th book in the Maximum Ride series by James Patterson(it actually only took me 1 day 2 read, but i wanted 2 chill 4 a few days, so yea. Lol), n I was rllly side-tracked. That entire series is awesome, n i highly recommend it to anyone who hasn't read it yet and is willing to. But, anyway, back 2 the fic. Ok, so here's where it might start to get a little weird, but bear(bare??) with me. When I write stories, I tend to put little songfics in em, but I rarely ever use all the words to the song, just bits n pieces that make sense with what I'm trying to get across. N that's what I'm going 2 do now. So, here's chapter 2 for u, enjoy it in all it's wierdness, xD. Oh! And, as I keep forgetting to put a disclaimer, here it is: I DO NOT OWN THE SISTERS GRIMM!(or the song I'm going to use now) I mean, really, if u haven't figured THAT out yet, then i think u need to b at a hospital, not on fanfiction.
Sabrina's POV:
I slammed my bedroom door loudly hugging my diary close to my chest. Thank god, Puck hadn't gotten ahold of this, thank GOD. Puck. Just thinking his name made my face feel like it was on fire. He kissed me. KISSED ME. This was absurd. He was Puck. And that meant annoying, messy, sloppy, greedy, immature...but also, caring, considerate, understanding, loyal and encouraging (A/N: any1 notice that thier lists of good things about each other are always longer than the bad? Lol, well, u do now). No. No. What am I thinking? Forget those last five things. But when he kissed me, I thought I was going to die, I swear. I was ever so slowly melting into him, and then I went all postal and smacked him. But he had no right doing that! Even though it was pretty awesome...NO! No, it was not awesome. It was horrible, terrible even. I suppose I hadn't learned my lesson becuase I wrote this all down in my journal. Then I put it away to think. Later, I thought, this
will all make sense. I hope.
Neutral POV:
Sabrina walked through the forest shuffling songs as she went. She had never thought she could sing, but people had always told her so. Puck followed Sabrina as she sat down on a rock and began to sing. He told himself it was only because she shouldn't be out so late alone, and the old lady would be very angry if anything happened to her on his watch, and he would loose his deserts(A/N: but we all know its cuz he's half in love with her...Well, actually he's fully in love with he-oh, you get what I mean.) But he sat dumbstruck, as the sound of her surrounded him.
" I'm going through the same day, same place, same way I always do. Then I saw you from the corner of my eye." Sabrina poured herself into the song, not realizing that anyone else was there.
" Hurry up and save me,
Hurry up and save me,
hurry up and save me,
hurry up and save me,
I just wanna feel alive,
and I do when I'm with you." Puck's head spun. She is beautiful, he thought. SABRINA GRIMM, is beautiful. Sabrina was only thinking of Puck, his bright blue-green eyes, so hypnotising. He could make me do anything he wanted, if he ever found out what his eyes could do.
" My window's opened up,
tonight I'm going down,
will you be there,
are you waiting,
will you be there,
will you save me."
Puck could only stare.
" I just wanna feel alive,
and I do when I'm with you.
Save me,
Save me..."
Sabrina trailed off.
" Puuuck," she groaned. The boy jumped up, a retort on his lips, thinking she'd spotted him. But she only sighed and shook her head, muttering about writing in " that little death trap of a book" again. Puck's ears perked up. Now he REALLY had to get his hands on that diary! Sabrina rose and walked away, back toward the house. Puck could tease her forever about this, but for once, he stayed hidden, and left her alone. But what scared him the most, was that he didn't know why.
okay, so, there it is. Tol ya it waz wierd, but what can u do? Now, since i got
so many reviews so fast, i'm gonna ask for...10 more reviews for the next chapter? Yea, I think that's a good number. 10 reviews for more! As always, huggles to reviewers!!
~GrimmGurl4Lyf3
p.s.
im sorry i keep ending like that, like, "and he knew it was right", or, "he didn't know why", but that might change.
p.p.s.
ive noticed that ppl on fanfiction like to put R&R at the end of thier fics, which, if im not mistaken, means read and review. But if ur at the END of a fic, and u c READ and review, havnt u already READ the fic? Really? But, juss for the heck of it,
R&R plz!! Lol
p.p.p.s
god, this is long, lol. And i got a comment that this is too rushed(thank u 4 the critisism, btw). Its kinda supposed to b, cuz i want this to have chapters, but not be, like, a novel or something. If it seems rushed, its supposed to b. Juss so u all know.