Story Preview 2
Hi guys. Thanks you very much for all: 2 reviews, 3 favourites and 5 followers. Really, i'm amazed. Thanks again. Feel free to PM me if you want and leave me a review. English is not my first language. The story may not be perfect, but I'll try to improve my writing. I'm looking for a beta. If anyone is interested PM me.
This is a second preview to introduce my story. In this preview there will be the point of view of "The beast". I had great fun writing it. I hope you like it
Gordon519: Thank you fo your review.
Watcher321: For now traslate 400 words is quite easy but when i'll load real chapters i'll start to make many mistakes, I'm sure of this. Thanks for your suggestion but I already have a plan for this story. Anyway, thank you very much for your review
Enough. Now, i just leave you to story.
- "All I remember was the captivity and slavery ..."
The whole village trembled at that shrill whistle, terrifying and that could only mean death
- "For the rest I do not remember …anything else"
A ball of blue fire struck a house in the village and razed it to the ground
- "Evidently someone had enjoyed to playing with my memories ..."
Women and children fled to the shelter
- "Fortunately i remembered one thing very well ..."
And the men were trying to break down the threat with weapons
- "I remember perfectly my position in the food chain ... the summit"
But could not this time ...
- "I remember perfectly my higher power ..."
They could not fight something with such power and monstrosities
- "And my goal ..."
With something, or rather someone, who had been one of them ...
- "Delete all people who get in my way ..."
Another fireball blue strokes a group of people. They looking for any weapon. They were incinerated on site
- "And now I would have enjoyed myself with them ..."
From the village he could not be seen, but the beast was smiling to their suffering ...
- "I do not care if they are dragons or human ..."
Even dragons intent on stealing food from humans could not believe their eyes
- "The important thing is going to kill ..."
With a quick shot the beast cut the throat of a dragon that was stealing the fish from the warehouse. In the distance the beast spotted a man who was giving orders to his soldiers. Strangely the man looked familiar, so the beast decided to approach ...
- "But now that I'm in front of this man, with the clear intention to end his miserable life as a human ..."
The human was obviously surprised and scared, but also sad (?)
- "I'm getting some doubts ..."
He was face to face with the beast. The most dangerous dragon in the world, but that once was the most humble person in the world ...
- "I'm doing a few questions ..."
- "Why does this man seem so familiar? It reminds me something or someone ... "
The man tried to talk ...
- "What I'm doing is right? ... "
The beast pounced on him ...
- "And I still wonder ..."
Making a big gash in his right leg ...
- "I am really like that?"
How about it? It was good?
These are short preview but only because i would like arouse your curiosity.
Next chapter will be longer and i hope you like my idea of "prologue"
All for now. See you next time.