A/n: Okay guys here chapter two. Now I heard…read your review. I understand it a bit sloppy and unorganized. I will work on that. As for my grammar and my spelling, it not going to get any better, but I'll try and work on it. So sit back, relax and enjoy chapter two.
Tori's point of view
So here I am; in jade house, with the girl who would become my girlfriend. I love jade. Being with her was…is the best. "So, what do you have in store for me Jade?" she pulled me onto her bed and we started making out. It was magic just like the first kiss. I loved every second of being like that. It was sad when she pulled away from me.
"As much as I love kissing, even though we just started this, we should get working on our book." I hated when she said, but it was true. We had to work on our book. It was the reason I came over with her in the first place…no it wasn't. We were here, and it something we had to work on. So we hit her computer and got to work. "Wait, we don't even know what we're going to use. We can't just have a romantic mystery." "Well… first I know that our two themes are romantic and mysteries so that kind of what were supposed to write. But I know what you mean."
"As for what we could write tori, I was thinking it could be about a woman who is married but unhappy, and then she meets a girl who excites her life. So maybe we could have them be secret lovers." Wow, I never thought jade could be good at writing. She proved me wrong right then and there, and every day after. "Wow jade that work, but you think that will work for the mystery side of the story?" "Ohh…now here's the kicker, the woman a cop and her lover is a serial killer she's hunting down."
She went at me again. Proving that she is the best when it comes to writing, she still is. "Great… Let's do it." I turned on her computer and was about to start writing when she took her computer away from me. "We can work on this later….first I need to have a talk about us." I got scared. "What…please don't say you don't want to be me after all…or that this is all some prank?" "Again…if you think I'm going back to that Jade with you, then we shouldn't be dating."
"But no that not it… I was thinking about telling everybody, about us, and how from now on we're going to be dating." I had sat there quiet for a moment. Jade face had a look of worry on it, I know she was scared. She was most likely thinking that I was going to say no, and leave her or something…but I wasn't. "I would like that…but do you think we should do that now? I mean we just got together today."
She looked up into the sky. I thought I made a mistake, by saying that. I should have just said yes. "Hey, I know that look… I'm not mad at for saying that. Your right, we don't even know if this is going to work out." We sat there for a few minute before she spoke again. "Hey about out this; go home, get changed into something nice and come back." I didn't ask why I just did what she told me to.
When I got home, my mom and dad were there. "Ohh, hey honey, what are you doing here? I thought you were with you friend Jade?" "Ohh yea, I just came to change, maybe bring some extra outfits with me." I was about to go upstarts when my dad spoke up. "Wait minute Tori, you aren't dating this girl are you?" I froze in my tracks. I didn't know what to say. I could have told them I wasn't dating her, just like I could have them I wasn't dating her. So I pick one of the two and told them
"Yes, I'm dating Jade. We just started, so I'm spending the weekend at her place." I looked at my parents, who were sitting with a look of…approval. "Wow, that a no. I mean you can date this girl but staying the weekend with her is out of the question." My farther told me with a clear voice. I had no idea why I got so upset. I love jade…but did I love her more than my own family? If you asked me that now I would say yes…but you ask me that then, I'd say I don't know. "I HATE YOU!"
I ran upstairs, went into my room, jumped on my bed and started to cry. After half an hour my special phone went off.
Jade: If you didn't want to spend the weekend with me you could have told me that.
Tori: Please…it not like that, for some reason, when my parent's asked about you…I told them about you, about us.
Jade: What…why…never mind, you didn't can't change that. So what did they say?
Tori: They said I could date you, but spending the weekend with you is off limits.
Jade: No, that not going to work, I need you here.
Tori: I would love to be there, you know that, but there no way my parents are going to let me spend the weekend with you.
Jade: well… then I'm coming over
Tori: I could ask them but I don't think they're going to let you come.
Jade went quiet; it wasn't ten minutes later when my parent called me down. When I got down stairs jade and me farther were have a stand-off. "So here what going to happen: I'm taking Tori, she going to be spending the weekend with me. If you're worried that I'm just trying to get in her pants, then don't. That not why I'm dating her, I'm with her because I love HER." Things stayed quiet in the room for a moment. "Tori can go"
"Really I can go?" my farther nodded. I ran upstairs as fast as I can, got a nice outfits and ran back down. I garb Jade and ran out the door with, waving back at my parents.
When we were about half way there Jade spoke up "Omg, I didn't think that would work. I'm glad it did though, I don't want our plans ruined." When we finally got there, I opened the door and siting there was candles with two plates of food and my favorite movie.
I could tell it was going to be a great night. My parents weren't the mistake… the mistake is much worse…and would nearly tear us apart…but we have a way to go before we get there.
A/n: so there it is chapter two. To be honest, I thought it wasn't going to be good, but when I reread it, I sounds a lot better and fits a lot better than I thought. So Tori parents know about her and jade. What is this mistake that Tori talked about? See you next time. Review…review…review…
