A/N- Damn, I wasn't expecting this much love and yes, I did realize the first chapter was a bit rushed, so I'll try and slow it down a bit. I wasn't going to post the first chapter but I got permission to upload it, so I said stuff it and decided to continue from there. In this version the academy starts and finishes on January 1st. I answer Reviews at the end of the chapter, anyway, hope you enjoy chapter 2 of Human Scum
Disclaimer- Me no own Naruto
H.A.J.I.M.E
(Year 1, Day 1)
After setting up a mental link with Kurama, she directed him to an uninhabited training area.
"That's it. That's where we will be training for the next 5 years in preparation of the ritual."
In front of Naruto was a gargantuan fence standing at an impressive 10 meters with warning signs hanging from every possible space to fit. One of the signs mentioned the training grounds' name, Training ground 44 – the forest of death. Behind the fence the trees were even taller than the Hokage monument, with dense foliage covering every inch of the forests floor. Animalistic growls and screeches could be even be heard 20 meters from the actual training ground.
Intimidated, Naruto gulped, "A-are you sure?"
"Yes, now get in there!"
Scaling the fence was quite easy, once he did he fell spectacularly… on his face.
"OW!"
Blinking the blurriness away he looked around. Up close the forest is even more terrifying, trees loomed in front of him as far as he could see. It was then he heard a rustling in the bushes, his heart pounded in his chest sounding like a drum.
"Shut up, I'm trying to rest here!"
A cute little rabbit bounded out of the dense foliage, it's cute little ball tail shaking behind it. Naruto instantly calmed, "Aww, that's so cute."
"Augh, I'm gonna throw up." Sounds, sounding suspiciously like gagging, were heard in his mind.
Another rustling was heard in the bushes before a giant 4-meter tiger snapped up the cowering animal in its jaws. Quickly devouring the rabbit, it set it eyes on the blond. Wasting no time, he ran as fast as his little legs could carry him through the dense forest.
As the tiger was gaining on him, a warm feeling pulsed through his veins as they dodged trees and any obstructions of their path. The warm feeling increased till it felt like he was burning on the inside, looking behind him, he was surprized to find that the tiger was long gone.
He looked at his hands, "Wh-what was that."
"That was about half a tail of my chakra you stole. When you're in trouble, because I know you will be, ask me before forcefully ripping it from me. Got it,"
"Yes, Kaa-sama," He replied quickly not wanting to anger the most powerful bijuu. He then set out to find a suitable cave and field to train at.
…
After a good hour scouting, Naruto came upon an area with an exceptionally tall tree. He saw a patch of unnatural grass and decided to approach it, bending down to touch it his hand, but it encountered no resistance and passed right through, to the other side.
Looking at it with wide eyes, he punched his whole arm through. "Fuck it," with that said he jumped through the intangible grass. He fell, and fell… and kept falling until Cold hard stone met Naruto's family jewels with a sickening crunch.
"AHHHHHHHH!" he screamed as rolled off the dull spike that stuck up from the cave floor and promptly fainted falling face first on the ground.
…
"K… ki… KIT!"
Jerking his head up so fast it could have snapped anyone else's neck he looked at the unfamiliar terrain in panic.
"What was that!? Where am I!? WHY DOES MY BALLS FEEL LIKE THEY'RE ON FIRE!?"
He quickly grabbed his precious and curled into a ball on the floor, rocking back and forth slowly as the pain subsided. Checking to make sure he was ok he looked down his pants.
"WHY IS IT SO BIG!?" he screamed to the heavens.
A melodic laughter echoed in his head, "Hahaha, oh my. Hahahah… (Snort) Hahaha, That, haha, was… PRICELESS, hahahaha!"
"Kurama! What happened?"
After the laughter died down the kyuubi answered, "That patch of grass from earlier was a genjutsu or an illusion if you will. When you jumped through it you fell onto this really dull spike that absolutely vaporized what makes you a male and then you passed out from pain."
Naruto observed his surroundings until he saw that he ended up in a massive cavern that was easily 3 kilometres in every direction.
"Kit, you're either extremely lucky or are terribly cursed."
"What, why?"
"Well you found the perfect place to train but… it'll be awhile till you get out."
Naruto looked up and saw a faint ray of light coming from the ceiling… 500 meters up.
There was only one word Naruto could describe this situation with, "FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-"
(Year 2 day 1)
After a year Naruto has grown tremendously under Kurama's tutelage, wearing weights of 20 kilograms on each limb and 40 on his chest while also have a gravity seal set at 2X gravity that was applied by a Kage Bunshin under Kurama's close watch.
The reason he is wearing so much weight in so short of a time was due to Naruto's, kyuubi enhanced, natural regeneration. Every time his muscles tear they repair themselves much stronger than they were before. Oh, did I mention that he wasn't allowed to use chakra to strengthen his limbs.
He has been building up his already Kage level reserves and has increased his abysmal Chakra control to just below Jonin control. He completed leaf sticking, wall walking, water walking (There's a small lake and waterfall in cavern), kunai spinning, waterfall walking, and was currently listening to the explanation of Chakra hops.
"Ok, so this is a forgotten and forbidden form of chakra control, because of the chakra usage. You will probably be able to perform this for 2 hours before you get heavy chakra exhaustion. So, what you must do is jump up and expel a large portion of chakra to your feet, compress it to create a stable platform and then rupture it to launch you upwards. Now, I must stress how careful how careful you need to be or your feet will explode instead of launching you got it?"
"Yes Kaa-sensei."
Naruto got into position and jumped up as high as possible and applied chakra to his feet and tried to do what his sensei instructed… only to fail to compress it and fall to the ground. As he was coming close to the ground he instinctively kicked his leg out and try to expel the gathered chakra there. He kicked the ground with the force of a meteor, cracks formed on the ground as a 50 meter wide and 10 meter deep hole was created in the previously flat ground.
Naruto was stunned be what he just did. "That… Was… So… COOL! What did I just do?"
While Naruto was still trying to come up with an answer Kurama was already piecing together what happened. 'He accidentally gathered chakra into his leg and kicked as hard as he could while at the same time released the chakra at the perfect time. Simply ingenious.'
"Naruto, again, you're either incredibly lucky or terribly cursed."
"What do you mean that was amazing, I was falling and then I was like WHAM and the ground shattered!"
"(Sigh) Naruto… look up."
Naruto did as he was told and look up at the ceiling. A pebble fell on his nose as he realized what he had done.
"SHIIIIII-" He forced chakra into his legs and ran as fast as he could. Sadly, it wasn't meant to be as a large rock hit him in the temple, knocking him out cold.
(Hokage office)
"Hokage-sama!"
"What's wrong?" hearing the panicked voice of his secretary he immediately stopped work, stood up and paid attention to her.
"A blonde haired boy was spotted painting the Hokage monument but got away." She stated calmly but stepped back in fear as Minato instantly bristled and was leaking killing intent when he heard the claim.
'Naruto, What the hell do you think you're doing disrespecting the village after what you have done!' He thought furiously. "ANBU!" four ANBU agents kneeled infront of the yondaime Hokage as they received their orders, "Find Naruto and bring him here immediately!"
With that said they shunshined out of the room to find the Hokages son. Minato sad back down and thought about what happened that night.
F.L.A.S.H.B.A.C.K
"AHHHHHH!" A female cry of pain and exertion was heard as she gave a final push and the third and final baby joined the group of triplets. They were instantly scooped up by the doctor that helped deliver the newborn children and wrapped them up tightly.
"Kushi-chan you did it, you gave birth to our triplets." Kushina's and Minato's tears of happiness fell from their eyes as they saw their cute little baby bundles.
"Would you like to hold them?" the doctor asked politely.
"Yes pl-" They were interrupted by the doctor coughing blood and a baby getting grabbed by a man in an orange spiral mask. They stared horrified at what happened to the doctor before Minato ran and caught the other 2 children Natsumi and Menma.
In a deep and distorted voice, the masked man pulled out a kunai and threated Minato, "Step away from the Jinchuuriki or your son will die." He tossed the child up and held the kunai to where he would fall.
Minato acted quickly and grabbed Naruto while putting the children he had in his hands onto the bed before Naruto fell, inadvertently leaving Kushina undefended. The masked man ran to her and disappeared in a portal to another location. Minato looked back to his wife to see a bed empty, panicking he looked around and found no one. He picked up the children and ran to Konoha.
(Time Skip)
Minato finished the long string of hand seals only to yell, "SHIKI FUUJIN!" An eerie cold spread over Konoha as the ghastly form of the Shinigami appeared behind the Hokage.
"WHAT IS IT YOU NEED DONE?" The Shinigami Boomed.
"I ask of you to please seal the Kyuubi into my three children, two with the chakra and one with the soul," Minato asked politely. The Shinigami noticed something odd, by separating the soul the chakra become uncontrollable but didn't make a comment on it.
"IT SHALL BE DONE!" Two ghostly hands protruded from the Shinigami and travelled towards the Kyuubi at a fast rate. The fox noticing the Shinigami gave a mighty roar and tried to retreat but the hands attached themselves onto the kyuubi and ripped it in two, a dark half and a light half. The dark half got sealed into Natsumi and the light half in Menma. A single glowing yellow core remained as another ghastly hand grabbed it and sealed it into little baby Naruto.
"I guess this is it, huh?" Turning to the Shinigami he waited for it to take his soul, "So, I guess you're going to take my soul. I had so many things I needed to do but I guess you have to take it." Minato closed his eyes and waited for pain.
The Shinigami on the other hand had different ideas, 'So, this is the child of prophecy,' he turned to Naruto, 'hmm… I guess I could interfere a little bit, it may prove to be interesting.'
Turning to Minato he boomed, "I WILL MAKE AN EXCEPTION THIS ONCE IN EXCHANGE FOR SOMETHING ELSE!"
Before Minato could comment the Shinigami placed something into Naruto, he placed a hate bead on his chest that got slowly absorbed into his soul. A hate bead causes your family and people close to you to hate you from all the bad experiences that have befallen because of you or that have been blamed on you. If they do something bad to you they will then forget about it or accept their actions as right.
Only a strong emotion from someone who is under the influence of it to make it destroy itself, snapping every one of its effects. There is a way to bypass this though a complete reconstruction of the body would do it, But then again, you would die before you could even complete the process.
'I kinda regretting that I did this but hey, at least it won't be boring, so why not?' The Shinigami promptly faded into nothingness.
(After the Battle)
"Citizens of Konohagakure no Sato, I give you your heroes, the protectors and the containers of the Kyuubi!" Everyone congratulated the two children. Little did they know they had forgotten Naruto in his crib crying.
E.N.D.F.L.A.S.H.B.A.C.K
(Year 3 day 1)
"So, I guess this is it then." Naruto said as he stood in front of the academy, "Well then, may as well get inside." He stepped through the double doors of the academy and to the counter with a lady that was working on paperwork.
"Umm, excuse me miss but may you be so kind to direct me to the class numbered 205?"
She looked at him in surprise, she didn't even know he was there which was unheard of considering she was an amazing sensor that had decided to work at the academy.
"Yes, it's up the stairs and down the corridor, you will see the class number on the sign." She answered.
Following the directions, he came across the classroom numbered 205, walking in he was greeted by the loud noises of children conversing. Since the Kyuubi was sealed in him he had advanced senses multiple times more sensitive than an Inuzuka, so to the normal person it might be considered loud but to Naruto it was considered deafening. Covering his ears, he sat down on a chair next to the window.
Lady luck must have been shining down on him because a Chunin came in and addressed the class as they instantly quietened.
"Ok class, my name is Iruka and I will be your personal instructor for these next few years. I just wanted to say how..." And that's the point where Naruto stopped listening and started to think on his training these past two years. Naruto is now wearing 60 kilograms on his limbs while 120 on his chest gravity seals on 3X and restriction seal set on 2X (1X makes you feel like you are walking through water, 2X is double that), so he is walking around with 360KG with 3 times earth's gravity (this also effects blood flow and other stuff I forgot) and is encountering resistance that is double the denseness than water.
He has been using the secret of Kage Bunshin to read on elemental manipulation and other subjects that are necessary for life as a ninja. He currently had 300 of them training in his cave at the moment and 15 Henged reading in the library.
One day he found a book on seals and was amazed at what you could do with them, the possibilities were endless. He is currently at the novice level considering he just started and sealing is a complex are that requires no mistakes.
He finished his super strength technique and chakra hops but was a bit bummed out that Tsunade the slug sannin had already invented the technique. He had near perfect Chakra control and chakra reserves equivalent to all previous and current Hokage combined besides the Shodaime Hokage, Hashirama was equal to the Ichibi in chakra reserves.
Since he has such large reserves he wears 3 seals on his body that limit the chakra that can be sensed and used.
He snuck into his Minato's office once and found the scroll for the Rasengan lying on his desk that had recently been opened. When he saw it he instantly realized that they had already started to teach Natsumi and Menma the jutsu. He quickly copied it and left it in the exact way he found it.
He mastered the Rasengan and is trying to learn elemental manipulation to complete the technique. He has a high affinity for water and wind so he had already named the techniques for when he finishes them:
Rasenuzu (Spiralling Vortex or Spiralling Whirlpool) - Rank S - Description - Dark blue, teardrop shape with the point towards the ground. It rotates quite violently inside and only gets more intense the further to the centre it is. In the centre it's black due to the water pressure from the rotation of the water. It also emits the roaring of a waterfall - Effects - The Jutsu is thrown up into the air, once it reaches its peak the teardrop shape expands rapidly creating a massive vortex of water trapping everything within and pulling everything into the bottom and drowning any living thing.
RasenShuriken (Spiralling Shuriken) - Rank S (same as canon so not going to write)
He gushes just thinking about them.
(Year 4 day 1)
Not much has changed since last year except training has gotten harder and has completed the techniques he had set out to do.
Naruto now wears 125KG on each limb and 250KG on his chest, 4X earth's gravity and 3x resistance seal. 3000KG including the 4X gravity and is walking through water 3x as dense.
He completed the two Rasengan variants and is now working on elemental manipulation for lightning to complete a new Rasengan.
Rasen Kaminari Todoroki (Spiralling Thunder Roar) – Rank SS – Description – A glowing blue almost white rounded octahedron (3D diamond shape) that surround the hand if the hand is flat (Like Raikiri except is spiralling around hand). If any source of Lightning is nearby the lightning gets sucked toward the Jutsu, surprisingly no lightning arks to the ground from the Jutsu due the rotation of it. –
Effects – if you cup your hand lightning will ark towards the sky onto the clouds causing a thunderstorm to occur allowing your technique to absorb natural lightning absorbing it.
If you have found a singular target, ball your hand in a fist and imagine their chakra signature, the jutsu will follow the intended target for as long as it has enough chakra to remain stable. Once it has reached the target it will destabilise and explode frying every nerve connection in the body causing extreme pain if not fully enveloped in the attack (will have connection with brain, frying it).
If you spread your fingers while the Jutsu is in your hand the technique will destabilise and flow through the fround destroying everything in a range of 20-100M range depending on the power (it will kill you if you don't apply a coat of raiton chakra on your hand and your feet to avoid connection to the lightning chakra).
Naruto was so giddy when he developed this attack, it was SO perfect for very condition, well for him and his now Nibi sized chakra reserves. He also now has 5 chakra limiting seals.
His chakra control is good enough to perform medical Jutsu so he had learned a few minor Jutsu, since he wasn't a healer.
(Year 5 day 1)
This year for Naruto mainly focused on developing Naruto's Taijustu and finishing his elemental manipulation.
He finished his self-created style called the Raging elements. Each element has its own attribution of attacks, for example; Earth has strong hard hitting punches, kicks and blocks while mainly not moving and staying grounded, Water has smooth flowing strikes and redirections instead of blocks, Wind was fast and swift, it's usually in the company of a weapon if not it has lots of fast and airborn kicks and strikes but not hard hitting.
Lightning was fast and unpredictable, it hits hard and strikes fast, while fire focuses mainly on counters, then takes advantage of the weakness to barrage your opponent with strikes that get faster and stronger.
This style was based on the advice Kyuubi gave him once.
F.L.A.S.H.B.A.C.K
While working through elemental manipulation, Naruto had a thought.
"Hey Kaa-sama, what happens when I become a Bijuu? Do my elements change?"
"Once you gain a tail your attributes will change and your elements will be changes to others every tail."
"But wouldn't that effect my jutsu?"
"We Bijuu don't necessarily use jutsu but I guess once you learn a jutsu you will retain that knowledge, it just becomes less effective but still usable."
E.N.D.F.L.A.S.H.B.A.C.K
So, he designed this style to accommodate to the changes of elemental affinities.
Naruto has finally advanced to a Seal master from the constant abuse of Kage Bunshin.
(Year 6 day 1)
It has officially been 5 years of constant training and the academy graduates in 50 days, but today is a special day. Today is the day of the ritual.
…
Waking up Naruto felt a sense of fulfillment and unending excitement, he's been waiting for this day ever since his birthday 5 years ago. He bounded out of his makeshift bed in the cavern he had been in for his training.
It's been awhile since he went home, roughly two weeks and he hadn't heard a single thing about himself other than pulling pranks, which of course wasn't him, (cough) Menma (cough).
He's been watching his sibling's reaction to him lately and noticed that they borderline wanted to end him. They hate him, whether it's due to him being weak and untrained (Natsumi and Menma), or being able to have lots of freedom (Menma).
Banishing these thought from his mind, he promptly fell into a mediation stance and entered his mindscape.
Opening his eyes, he was greeted by a lush forest and a modest 2 story house, standing at his door he noticed Kurama had a snug formal white kimono that reached her mid thighs and showed an abundance of cleavage.
'Keep your eyes on her eyes, keep your eyes on her eyes, keep your eyes on her… damn that's some large jugs- No, bad Naruto, keep your eyes on her eyes, keep your eyes on-,' his internal chants, unfortunately could be heard by the kitsune.
"Ara, Ara, does Sochi like his mother's body," she leaned forward seductively. She the sashayed toward Naruto and whispered in his ear, "Well, incest is common with demons after all."
Naruto's face could rival a tomato in the department of the colour red. Kurama stepped back and her expression instantly became serious.
"So, I assume you want to start the ritual? Well follow me inside and we'll start."
As she was walking inside Naruto was hot on her heels ready to finally become a Bijuu like his Kaa-sama.
E.N.D
Well this was a massive chapter for me so I had to sit in a chair for continuous hours over a keyboard. My back is fucking killing me.
R.E.V.I.E.W.S.
Dementia found paranoia- I hope I have answered some of the questions you might have had in the story and yes, I did rush the beginning to get to the training and other important plot points.
Wonderweed420- I hope I manage to get past 10 chapters, it'd be a shame if I quit before then because of the amazing idea this fic has.
Thor94- I'm not going to get Naruto to forgive them, even though it's not all their fault the damage has already been done. I don't like those endings either.
readingAngel- I really have no idea. I'll just get to it once I get there. I was thinking something like Kyuubi or if I like this story so much I'll write a fanfiction where he is sealed inside of someone. If you have any ideas PM me and I'll gladly consider them.
Hikari Nova- I think I answered your questions with this chapter. Now I'm not too sure if I should change the prophecy because remember it says something about the child of prophecy could also destroy everything, so I don't know.
Scoob96- I don't plan on forgiving his family ever and since he hates humans why not add some Hinata bashing as well (Never bashed before, just a warning). Yeah, Kurama does sound male name but remember all bijuu are genderless and just assume the most comfortable gender which in Kyuubi's case it's a female. I just added the nose bleed for shits and giggles and yeah wasn't gonna use it much anyway. SPOILER IF YOU HAVEN'T READ ORIGINAL, yeah, I was still going to put him on the team with Orochimaru but he just works with them not really getting attached to them. I could make Orochimaru part demon so he feels a type of connection but I'm not sure. I will include character death in story.
Lara5170- Opps, I completely forgot to put in a character description for Naruto, just assume regular Naruto in a white shirt and black ANBU pants with standard ninja gear.
NeroSyrix- Sorry but I don't think I'll do that. He hates humans, so being around them makes him disgusted, but I'll probably make Naruto force them to grovel at his feet maybe? Not sure.
Hope that answers any questions
Raven out