I got a review and as promised, chapter two.
Disclaimer: Don't own them. Never will.
Also, Italics will be thoughts of whatever character the POV is.
Italics that are underlined is Light Jak in Jak's POV.
Bold underlined is Dark Jak in Jak's POV
"WAKE UP SLEEPY HEADS!" "That just had to be my wake up call?" Ratchet thought, "I already miss Clank's wake up call."
"Good mourning, Ratchet." Ratchet heard his robotic compaintion's voice that just makes him want to smile compared to Daxter's nails on chalk board. "How does Jak deal with that weasel creature" Ratchet thought as Daxter was jumping on Jak's stomach causing the elf to wake up and get a stone grip on Daxter's tail. Ratchet heard insults coming out of Jak's mouth that he would probably never use on Qwark. Probably.
After Daxter had calmed Jak down to get out of his stone grip and get on the teen's left shoulder pad, Clank jumped up onto Ratchet's back and folded his arms and legs into himself as the heroes started going back to the walls of Haven City. While they were walking through the rebuilt city from its attack from the Dark Makers, Ratchet thougt he saw a old billboard with him and Clank on it, but he was in his commando armor frjom the Bogon Galaxy. Those were some good days. Ratchet thought as he had all his adventures flash through his mind in just a few seconds. He was brought back to reality with Jak snapping his fingers in front of his face.
"Are you alright?" Jak asked Ratchet after he had blinked and had a bit of a frown on his face. "Yeah. I'm good." The Lombax replied as he continued walking along the canal. Don't lose him in any crowds! Light said in Jak's head which was immediately answered by Dark, He's a Lombax. HOW DO YOU LOSE A LOMBAX IN A CROWD OF ELVES! HE'D BASICLY JUMP OUT LIKE A CAT IN A CROWD OF MICE! Enough! Jak shouted (mentally) to them.
So, there's the first appearance of Dark and Light Jak in Jak's head. Maybe I should have named this story A Lombax and A Elf that has voices in his head. So, read, review, Flamer's will be thrown into the 24 inch high snow outside of my house that is there presently. See you guys next time!
Jak Cooper the Lombax