A/n: Here it is, the final chapter of this, not so little, Valentine's Day fic. Thank you so much for all the support and feedback so far, especially from NikkiB1973 who was good enough to beta this for me. Thanks so much! :)

A tiny, but still irrepressibly impatient sigh left Seven's lips as she again shifted awkwardly on the uncomfortable metal bench. "These constant delays are highly inefficient." She muttered under her breath, not intending to be heard, but Chakotay, as attentive as ever, reached over and placed his warm, steady hand over both of hers which were clenched in her lap.

"Larsen tried his best to speed this up at his office, but apparently some of that paperwork was unavoidable." He reminded her, gently tightening his hold around her cybernetic hand and pulling it onto his knee, his fingertips absently tracing the veins of cool metal. "After today everything should be over with." He murmured reassuringly, allowing himself a small smile when Seven relaxed a little, her upright frame leaning into his shoulder. He very much doubted that anyone outside of their tiny Voyager command circle, it might only have been him who'd realised, but Seven of Nine was a persistent, if silent, worrier under her Borg veneer of detachment. How touched and relieved he was to see her rely on him still surprised him even after all they'd been through since Admiral Janeway had decided to change the path their lives would take.

"Yes, it should be." Seven couldn't help but put a dark emphasis on 'should', so many things in her life 'should' have been simple but weren't. "It appears that Dr Henriksen's lecture is running late." She commented, glancing down the empty corridor in which the bench they sat on stood, the flow of Gothenburg University students they'd seen flowing smoothly out of classes had slowed to a lazy trickle now that the time had slipped past 1700 hours. Most of the room and buildings visible around them had already wound down with the Sun as the daylight, still a treasured few hours in a Swedish February day, drew to end and the darkness of evening descended.

"We'll just need to book a later transport then." Chakotay replied easily, "We could go back via Stockholm if you want, go and see Irene for a while?"

Seven smiled at him, astounded by his generosity. He had been a model of calm for her to follow during this long day, a day which should have been a break for him. First he'd joined her for a dissection of the convoluted collection of assets in Sweden which were now hers, including not only what she had inherited from her parents but what her paternal grandparents had optimistically left to their lost son. Considering the fact that, incomprehensively to her efficiency focused mind, the legal situation here was entirely different from what Mr Platt had already explained to her in San Francisco then to describe the day's discussions as 'complicated' would've been an understatement. Now, after all that, Chakotay had willingly accompanied her to find a former colleague of her parents who apparently had the only key to their old lab here in Gothenburg. She couldn't quite believe it, especially since today was Valentine's Day. She didn't even think her aunt, with her dismissal of the holiday, would've deemed how this day had turned out as appropriately romantic. Yet Chakotay seemed totally unperturbed, to the point where she fretted over her exploitation of his accommodating nature, surely to his detriment. "Actually, when I spoke to Aunt Irene earlier she offered to arrange a hotel for us…" Seven began awkwardly, her stilted tone speeding up too much as she felt herself begin to blush at her presumptuousness. "Of course, if you need to return to San Francisco immediately, then…"

Chakotay squeezed her hand that he was still holding on his lap to stop her, looking into her blushing face affectionately, he'd been learning to anticipate when she would overanalyse things. "Not at all, your aunt's definitely got the right idea. We can head home tomorrow at our own pace if we stay the night, we haven't had a chance to explore the city yet." He sighed ruefully.

Seven's stiff shoulders dropped as she acknowledged the proposal, giving him a tentative but happy smile in return. "You're right." She admitted softly, shifting position on the bench again to retrieve her phone, just a little bigger than the comm. badges she was familiar with from Voyager. "I will call her now and ask her to arrange it for us." Chakotay gave her an encouraging grin as she rose and moved away slightly to make the call, his mood improving further when he heard Seven conversing easily with her aunt, quietly but gratefully accepting whatever comforts Irene was providing to smooth over this stressful day.

"Mr Kotay?" Chakotay's eyes were dragged away from watching Seven as he heard Larsen addressing him, "Is Miss Hansen being called away?" Larsen asked, eyeing Seven, still on the phone with her back to him, apprehensively.

Chakotay shook his head quickly, trying to smile at the young lawyer, who while following Platt's professionalism to a tee, also seemed to wear a frown of perpetual anxiety. "No, she's just calling her aunt, she won't be a moment." He stood up from the bench to extend his hand to the older man Larsen had brought with him, "Dr Henriksen?" he asked.

"I am." The man confirmed in a booming voice that perfectly matched his impressive physique. His wide shoulders were barely confined within his lab coat and the thick beard he had twined with his silver head of hair made him somewhat reminiscent of a polar bear. "Call me Lars please, I won't have any friend of the Hansen family stand on formalities with me."

"Thanks." Chakotay responded warmly as the two firmly shook hands, "I'm Chakotay, it's nice to meet you."

Lars looked pained for a moment as he saw Seven finish her phone call. "I only wish our meeting was for a happier reason." He replied mutedly as Seven warily approached.

She exchanged glances between Chakotay and Larsen, the latter wasn't much help, he'd worked hard on her behalf and was flawlessly polite but Seven had been free of the Collective long enough to recognise when someone was uncomfortable around her, they'd both been glad of Chakotay as a pleasant buffer between their shared awkwardness. Chakotay was regarding the unknown arrival in a friendly manner though, so she guessed who she was. "Dr Henriksen I presume?" She cringed slightly as a minute flinch passed over the man's face at her unintentionally terse tone.

"You don't remember me then?" he asked, his voice feigning light-heartedness for a moment before he took hold of her shoulders with a surprisingly gentle touch considering his intimidating appearance. "You've grown to be as lovely as Erin and Irene both Annika." He told her, swallowing as his voice thickened with grief.

Seven normally corrected everyone except her aunt in favour of her designation if they used her birth name, but the genuine sorrow and regret on the man's lightly lined face stopped her. "Thank you." She answered quietly, truly appreciating the compliment.

Henriksen gave her arm an awkward pat as he let go of her. "It's the truth." He said simply, "I held quite a torch for that aunt of yours when I met her at your christening, even though her husband was a good man." He smiled to himself, "As for your mother, well, that goes without saying…"

"My aunt did mention you." Seven assured him, causing him to chuckle.

"She would have." He replied wryly, sighing as he studied her face, "I'm glad I could help you in some way, I never really did anything else in my role as your godfather."

Chakotay felt, rather than saw, Seven start beside him. "You were…" He corrected him awkwardly, "…are Seven's godfather?"

Henriksen's eyes clouded for a moment, lost in memory. "Yes, Magnus and Erin did me that honour, I was best man at their wedding too. They were two of my closest friends, we worked together for over ten years." Sensitive to Seven's pensive, conflicted expression, he moved onto business, "I helped them build their lab, so I suppose it makes sense that they left it in my care." He turned to move down the hallway, "Shall we head over there?"

Seven nodded gratefully as she too moved forward to walk in step with him. "Thank you." She murmured, glad that he didn't feel the need to push his memories of her parents on her to replace the ones that wouldn't return to her, or those she would never have.

He gave her a supportive, but suddenly wan, smile in return and then proceeded to guide her to the lab in near silence.

The Hansen's lab was outside the University's grounds but within walking distance in a non-descript municipal building. It took Henriksen only a moment to open the door for their small group, but he lingered in front of it, shooting Seven an apologetic and guilty look, "It's not in the state I would've liked it for you Annika, but I've kept the equipment maintained and cleaned it…" He took a deep breath, wincing, "Otherwise it hasn't changed since your parents last worked in it twenty six years ago, so prepare yourself."

"Well, lying unused for so long will have affected the value, but at least we'll be able to clarify the contents…" Larsen remarked, scribbling on his PADD more frantically than even Platt had. He fell silent as he caught Chakotay and Henriksen's frowns of censure, but Seven, thankfully, seemed deaf to his tactlessness and stepped through the door as silent and unobtrusive as a shadow.

Despite Henriksen's well-intentioned warning, one full step into the unnaturally cold room was enough to freeze Seven to the spot. The aged lights, lazy from lack of use, began to splutter into life but Seven's ocular implant meant she had no need of them. The bile green hue that infused her 'night vision', as Tom Paris had termed it, picked out every single piece of the multitude of Borg technology that was littered across the room in excruciating detail. Claustrophobia closed in on her, suddenly she was back on a Cube, standing in an assimilation chamber, malfunctioning implants strewn among amputated limbs deemed inferior to cybernetic replacements, the screams of insignificant individuals ringing in her ears but still overwhelmed by the mighty voice of the Collective…

Chakotay's hastily suppressed but still audible gasp of horror brought her back to reality, a reality where bright lighting now banished any real resemblance to a Cube, but the clinical nature of the space still made her shudder. Robotically, she drifted between the rows of once sterile but now neglected exam stations. Henriksen hadn't been lying when he said nothing her parents had worked on had been disturbed, the Petri –dishes of nanoprobe samples were still sitting carefully catalogued, one such sample even remained in position under a microscope. Larsen stood standing near what her all too knowledgeable eyes recognised as a partially dismantled cortical node, but his stricken expression was wholly directed on a cybernetic arm and leg set laid neatly out on one table, the assimilation tubes built into the arm half extended. He moved away in relief as Seven approached, the spell broken, but it was cast even stronger over her. She stared at it vacantly, taken in by the monstrous skill by which the limbs had been built for their purpose. Papa had commented on their 'near perfection', an ironic choice of words. She could remember the spoken words as she read the dog-eared handwritten note written in her father's distinctive hand resting innocently on the table. Her own hand reached out, but she jerked it away as she realised it was identical to the dead limb laid out on the table, a nauseated shudder running through her as she numbly watched her own hand flex powerfully, the hidden assimilation tubes ready to take life at her command…

"I think we've seen enough now." Chakotay's quiet voice, concerned yet authoritative, resounded in her dulled ears enough to bring her back, her gaze skittishly roaming around the lab until he took a firm grasp of the maligned hand she was still unconsciously clenching and unclenching and so forced her to focus on his face. "Larsen says he has all the data he needs, we can go now."

Seven could only nod, letting him guide her back towards the door. Lars Henriksen cleared his throat unhappily when he saw his goddaughter's ashen face. "I'm sorry." He murmured honestly, reaching out for her other hand, "I know that, seeing this, you'll find it hard to accept but your parents had nothing but the best intentions. We knew so little of the Borg then, some even doubted the Collective's existence, but your parents truly believed that if we understood them properly we could help them, perhaps even free drones…" He paused and swallowed hard, his gaze misty, "I supposed you've proved that it is possible for drones to regain their lives…" He paused again as Seven looked down, but persevered, "Although I know that Magnus and Erin never wanted anyone to have to take the lonely path you have Annika, but I know they'd be proud of you now." He squeezed Seven's hand when she didn't answer and looked around the lab thoughtfully, "You know, the University needs more lab space, I'll buy this place from you right now." He said determinedly.

Seven's pale face coloured rapidly, "I do not require remuneration…" She started, well aware of the fact that the lab, weighed down with technology more than a quarter of a century old, would be worse than useless to the University.

"Don't be ridiculous Annika." Henriksen cut her off sharply, "Your parents left this to provide for you, let me deal with this." With that, he summoned Larsen in as a legal witness and began the process of purchasing the lab using his own personal funds, distractedly saying that the University would in turn buy it from him later.

Evening had truly settled on Gothenburg by the time Seven and Chakotay remerged together onto the city's streets, having had a casual dinner with Dr Henriksen and his wife at their joint insistence in a small restaurant serving traditional fare, deep within the streets of wooden buildings that made the city's bohemian Haga district famous even more than 500 years after the neighbourhood's construction. "They're a sweet couple." Chakotay remarked as they found a central shopping street and started along it.

"Yes, it was a pleasant evening in the end." Seven replied as she looked around curiously, her mood having lifted after an hour or so of peace from her legal entanglements and time together with Chakotay. It was getting late in the evening, most of the little boutique shops were closed up for the day but a few were still busy with late coming couples, excited women and patient men, weaving from jewellery stores to flower stands, many congregating at a chocolatier's in the centre of the street. Gothenburg, probably due to its much smaller size, had embraced Valentine's Day less ostentatiously but just as eagerly as San Francisco and Seven couldn't help the feelings of inadequacy Irene had tried to shake from her returning with full force. If Chakotay had a real, human girlfriend he'd be experiencing fun and romance right now rather than be holding her emotions together as she raked through the remaining fragments of her past life… She grimaced unhappily as her gaze caught the light streaming from a fancy lingerie shop having a 'Valentine's Day Sale'. Her face reddened in mortification as she thought back to what they'd both seen in the lab. If Chakotay ever saw her like that he'd see real examples of those implants and more, no amount of lace or artfully placed ribbon could make that more appealing to a man…

"Seven, I asked if you'd heard back from Irene about the hotel?" Chakotay repeated his question, worried by her distant expression.

Seven shook her head to clear it, staring down at the pavement below her feet to avoid any more reminders of unachievable levels of romance. "Oh yes, she booked it successfully, it's down the next street."

Chakotay playfully gave her a tug, making her giggle despite herself. "Let's go then."

Seven couldn't help but fall back a step as she entered the room the hotel reception had said Irene had booked for them, and also paid for. "Wow." Chakotay breathed in amazement as he joined her inside, "I think we're going to have to give Irene a cake or something for this."

Seven nodded numbly as she took in their elegant surroundings. The hotel was a smart stone early 19th Century building, yet the room had been appointed to suit every modern taste while the décor itself remained classic, encompassing every shade of calming creams and rich browns. The view from the large window was impressive even at night, taking full advantage of the building's third storey which allowed the view to stretch over most rooftops in this historical, skyscraper free, part of the city. Her attention was most caught however by the luxuriously plush king-size bed in the centre of the room, her heart beginning to pump harder with apprehension. Perhaps she should have thought of specifically asking Irene to book two rooms, or at least a twin, but her aunt must have made certain assumptions. She straightened her shoulders and answered him in a light-hearted tone; if he wasn't uncomfortable then her fears were groundless. "I'll bake her one as soon as I can…" She began, trailing off as she noticed a large, prettily wrapped bouquet of flowers resting on the bed. Curious, she picked up the small card attached to them, admiring the collection of lilacs, daises and snowdrops. A wry smile immediately pulled at her lips as she read the note:

Annika,

Remember what I said about Valentine's Day, and just enjoy yourself.

All my love,

Auntie Rini

PS. Don't you dare try to pay me back for this room, it's a gift.

Seven shook her head, but her smile stayed in place as she considered Irene's advice of the week before, she hoped she was right. She was also grateful for her 'Auntie Rini's', that had been her childish pronunciation of the name she remembered now, foresight in having the note handwritten in Swedish by the florist, she wasn't sure she'd have wanted Chakotay to be able to read between the lines of what it said. Catching Chakotay's curious expression as he approached her, Seven set the note down again and explained, "They're from Aunt Irene, she says we've not to 'dare paying her back for this room'."

Chakotay chuckled at Seven's perfect impersonation of Irene's voice. "That's great of her, but she's also made me look bad for not getting you flowers today myself." He said good-humouredly as he gave her a soft kiss on the lips, "I'll do better next year, I promise."

Seven's head dipped, unconsciously beginning to wring her hands. "As will I." she murmured thickly, keeping her face turned away from his slightly, "I fear that today has not fulfilled certain established expectations…" She started ruefully, looking down at herself regretfully. The clothes she was wearing, smart but plain black trousers paired with a navy sweater, were suitable for the business of earlier but weren't exactly particularly inspiring and after their time in the lab were now crumpled and dusty. "I do not think…" She rubbed a hand briefly over her tired face, "…that helping me attend to these affairs today was what anyone would consider 'romantic'…"

"Probably not." Chakotay admitted softly as his hands moved to grasp her shoulders and gently pull her back round to face him fully, "But why would we care about what anyone else thinks about what we do?" Shame flickered across Seven's strained blue eyes as the point sunk in but Chakotay stopped her from going into analysis mode by giving her shoulder another squeeze with one hand and tilting her face up with the other, "Listen Seven, I know Valentine's Day is considered special, but what's more important, one day of over the top gestures or a solid relationship for the rest of the year?" He studied her face intently, the faintest trace of a saddened smile on his lips, "I know you would have rather not been through all this today, I wish you hadn't needed to, but you did and I'm glad I could be there for you, okay?"

"I understand." Seven assured him in a whisper, leaning onto his chest lightly as he rhythmically rubbed a particularly uptight part of her lower back. He felt her smile ruefully into his shoulder as she murmured wryly, "I think my idea of Valentine's Day has been somewhat skewed, I apologise."

Chakotay chuckled again, "You're not alone there, I don't think many people who've grown up with it really understand what is expected of them."

"Perhaps that is why they frantically purchase items they've never believed they need the rest of the year." Seven mused thoughtfully.

"Maybe." Chakotay agreed, stepping back from her slightly so he could look into her face again. In his eyes she looked as beautiful as ever, though the purple shadows of exhaustion and stress were vivid under her sky blue irises. "You look tired…" He murmured in concern, eyeing the bed then gesturing awkwardly towards the suite's large sofa, "I can take the couch if you really need to rest…"

The bright flush that painted Seven's cheeks for an instant made him think she'd shyly agree, but in the next moment she'd kissed him deeply, pulling back just as he'd begun to respond, "No." She answered, her voice level and sure even as he felt her hands that were pulling him closer quiver in his. "I don't want that."

They walked backwards as one, kissing heatedly, but Chakotay purposefully slowed things down as he felt her sit down on the end of the bed, less frantic but more prolonged. Seven gasped in surprise as his hand that had been rubbing her back slid under her sweater and repeated the movement on her bare skin, his other hand soon running up and down her side. She buried her face into the crook of his neck, breathing heavily with a note of fear as well as desire, since she seriously expected him to draw back in disgust when he felt the metal protruding from her flesh, encasing her ribs, knotting up her spine. When those shocked pauses never came, his caresses constant and intensifying, she felt her whole body relax exponentially, it was as if she was melting into him. First she turned her face to press her lips to his throat, then to his face, an easy laugh escaping her when she moved to his mouth and felt his wide smile on hers.

Chakotay let her lie back when that kiss eventually ended, certain now that she was ready, that he wasn't pushing, which had been his greatest fear and which had held him back until now. He joined her almost immediately, using the push off from his feet still on the floor to help them both shuffle up the bed, half hanging off it like this would get old pretty quick he knew. However, one of Seven's high heels promptly caught on the bed's chocolate brown throw and she narrowly avoiding kneeing him in the stomach as she tried to jerk free. She looked up at him, stricken, for a split second then laughed outright at his frustrated expression. Twisting away from her briefly, he reached down and tenderly unbuckled each shoe before tossing them aside to join his own on the floor, grinning impishly as she giggled girlishly at the touch. Finding where else she was ticklish would be a fun task for later…

Seven snapped her feet away from him quickly when she caught that mischievous glint in his eye, flipping onto her side so that they could face each other. He smoothly wrapped his arm around her back again until their chests were flush, but as they broke apart for air between kisses she tentatively reciprocated his earlier caresses and slid her human hand under his shirt, his hoarse groan of approval enough to give her the confidence to run her palm over his muscles. Her other hand, with clumsiness the enhanced fingers shouldn't have had, began to unbutton the shirt as his open mouth roamed over her throat. He leaned back to help her gently pull the garment off altogether, pulling her into him encouragingly as she slowly began to kiss down his now naked torso. He sighed a little as he felt her freeze, stroking her hair, which he'd long since tugged free from its clip, reassuringly as he heard her swallow. "What happened?" she asked, her voice shaky with compassion as her fingers brushed the frightening scar which slashed brutally across his toned stomach.

Chakotay gave a dry laugh, "A near death experience. I was impaled by a piece of the Valjean's command deck during a battle…must be almost ten years ago now." He gazed down into her suddenly sombre eyes, "The medical treatment available for the Maquis wasn't quite up to the Doctor's standard, that was the best they could do at the time." He sighed to himself, "I could've had the Doctor fix it I suppose, but it serves as a reminder that I've survived a lot." He clasped Seven's cybernetic hand and pressed the knuckles to his lips as he cupped her cheek, his fingers tracing lightly over the implant curving around her eye. "We all have scars Seven, every one of us." He told her meaningfully.

"I know, I just…" Seven stopped, pressing her lips together in thought as she met his steady and, she saw now, openly adoring gaze. "Was my…self-consciousness so obvious?" she asked finally, shifting up the bed again to cuddle into him properly.

Chakotay took a moment to reply, smiling at her fondly as she looked back at him with guileless eyes. It was impossible for her to be coy, she was always genuine and he loved that. "Yes…" He answered slowly, "And it would be understandable, but trust me when I say that you're not only beautiful…" His breathing grew heavier as led them both under the bedcovers, tucking her underneath him in one smooth movement and kissing her as he did so, "…but gorgeously sexy too."

Seven's eyebrows arched slightly even as relief flooded her, the honesty in his statement proved without doubt now that they were lying so close. She didn't feel the need to reply with words, finding the only appropriate answer in looping her arm around his neck, continuing to kiss him even as his warm, sensual hands carefully guided her sweater over her head, then again having his fingers send tingling charged down her spine as he followed it from the base of her neck to the other end repeatedly in reassurance before unclipping her bra in one swift movement and casting it aside. He stared down at the lovely, trusting woman in his arms for a few long moments before lowering his forehead onto hers, glad to feel both of their chests heaving as one with anticipation. "Tonight is about what you want." He whispered lovingly, the words tickling her sensitised skin, "Just tell me to stop and I will…"

Seven curled both arms around his neck now, shuddering herself when she realised the shiver that had run over him as now bare, metal mottled of her cybernetic arm joining her human one had been a physical expression of desire rather than horror. "I know you would…" She replied confidently, turning into his ear to whisper an addition, "…but I also know I won't want you to."

Seven's heavy lids fluttered open as the watery light of a winter dawn fell on her. One glance towards the window told her that it was still very early, they'd just forgotten to close the curtains last night, allowing day to pierce their comfortable cocoon more prematurely than she would have wished. Not that it wasn't pleasant laying here, the after affects of last night appearing to be a cosy, floating sensation, her body unusually calm but highly sensitive at the same time. Her hair felt damp as she leaned back into the pillow, a lazy smile forming on her mouth as she felt Chakotay, cradling her from behind, their legs interlaced, his arm coiled around her waist, moan in protest at her movement and nuzzle the back of her neck. Laughing softly, she lifted his arm just enough to be able to flip onto her other side and face him. She saw at once that he was awake, half open brown eyes twinkling at her. "Good morning." He mumbled, his hand reaching up to stroke her now wildly tousled hair, obviously amused by that unusual sight.

"Yes…" Seven replied teasingly, "Good morning, but I was under the impression on that any time before at least 0600 hours was considered too early to really be morning."

"Before 0600 hours?" Chakotay asked disbelievingly, letting out a groan as he saw the betraying open curtains. "What time is it then?"

"0544." Seven replied promptly, her eyebrows arching high as she heard Chakotay's stomach rumble within a few seconds of that information. "Not too early for the replicator then?" she joked, automatically starting to rise but wincing in pain as she did so.

Chakotay quickly pulled her back towards the warmth and protection of his body. "You're not going anywhere…" He teased, his voice suddenly very serious as he kissed her shoulder blade lightly. "Are you okay?"

"Yes." Seven answered patiently, wondering how she could have thought for a second he'd miss her discomfort. "My body is just adapting, that's all." She could sense his guilt building as his grip tightened around her and decided to bring it to a halt. "For the better." She clarified.

Chakotay exhaled a breath he hadn't been aware of holding, then grinned at her conspiratorially. "Why don't we leave the replicator for a while and just stay in bed until room service can bring a homemade breakfast?" he suggested.

"Agreed." Seven replied swiftly. Honestly she didn't think her legs would support her quite yet if she tried to get up. "At least two more hours rest would be to our benefit."

"Definitely." Chakotay admitted, knowing that he as well as Seven would need to take it slow this morning. He wasn't exactly used to making love three times in the space of a few hours, not that he was complaining. Seven huddled into him and they lay in contented silence for a few moments before he sensed her studying him intently. "What?" he asked softly.

Now it was her turn to have the wicked glint in her eye. "This isn't just limited to Valentine's Day is it?"

Chakotay responded by tickling her in the side until she buckled under the duvet. "I'd go insane long before next year if that were the case, and so would every other man!" he retorted laughingly.

"Understood." Seven murmured in a placating tone as she leaned into kiss him again. "Two hours is an inefficiently long time to rest if we're both awake." She pointed out wryly.

Chakotay made her shriek with surprise as he rolled onto his back and brought her along with him. "Well, we can't risk inefficiency can we Crewman, not on the day after Valentine's Day?" he joked huskily.

A/n: PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE REVIEW! :D This chapter took me all week since I decided not to break it up, more reading in one go for all of you. :) Some of my writing did get posted on Sunday though, xXSilentCrescendoXx posted chapter 4 of our co-written C/7 story 'Shreds and Shards', chapter 4 is the one I've written. It would be great to get some feedback on that too, thank you! :)