Here are your reviews
fanficlover2266 posted 2 reviews: 1. is it Carrie? and more random people?
color3grojband says: love it! is the other character a oc or someone else?
Me: The voice is an oc. And thank you so much for following and favoriting! I think you'll like this story. :)
fanfictionlover2266 also says:
OMGG Remix! When I was in 5th grade I was 10! and I started middle school not so long ago. But in MY middle school we start from 6th to 8th. XD. I'm in 6th
Me: Actually I didn't plan for Carrie to appear but the Newmans might. There will be another oc in this chapter. Yeah most middle schools are 6th to 8th but where I live it's 5th to 8th. So let's get started with the story!
Laney's POV
I quickly opened the stall door. Surprisingly, I saw a boy. " What the?" I started. " I'm Ryan Haight." the boy says. (A/N: Ryan Haight is also in Something Else he is partnered with Kon.) He gives me a smile that I admit is cute. " I'm Laney." I say " I know. I'm writing a story about Grojband." he says holding out his hand. " But the music is pretty bad." I refuse to shake his hand. " I thought maybe we could be friends. " Not happening." I say. Who is he? Insults the band then asks to be friends. " Why are you in the girls room?" I ask out of curiosity. " Research. I assumed you'd say something out loud that I could use for the story. But you didn't." " Well you assumed wrong." " Sorry Mrs. Penn I-" " I never married. How'd you even get in?" " My mom's wig." he says smiling. I sigh. What a waste of time. I walk out the bathroom. I quickly write in my diary:
" Dear diary,
So far today I overslept, get picked on, and meet a weirdo. My bad day is getting worse each step I take. That Ryan dude whatever his name is better back off. He doesn't know what I am capable of. And I'm not afraid of a trip to the principal's office either."
When I finish writing I look up at a familiar face. Eddie. I gulped. I was being quite rude to him earlier. " So, you think you can make me look dumb and run off. Gimme that thing!" he snatched my diary. " Quit it!" I shouted. He started reading it. Then, the bathroom door flew open. " Leave her alone." Ryan says. I sigh knowing he would do nothing but make it worse. " Or else?" Eddie says. " You see my dad is a champion wrestler. He has never been defeated." the lies slipping out of his mouth just made it so obvious he was lying. I might as well just dig up my grave right now. " And once he beat up an 8th grader. The kid became blind and could never walk again. My dad went to jail for it. He's not afraid to do it again." Eddie obviously needed his eyesight and ability to walk, so he dropped my diary and backed away before running. Ryan and I high fived. " Oh thank you Ryan!" I say hugging him. I'm usually not the person to hug, especially a boy but this was just once. I hugged him tightly. " No problem." Ryan says as his cheeks get a little red.
Ryan's POV
Laney is just a sight for sore eyes. She's really pretty when she's mad. Too bad she has a crush on Corey. Though, she never shows it, I know she does. Corey is oblivious to the fact she does. I mean what does she see in him. This story will be good. I hope Laney didn't see me blush when she hugged me. She's only in 5th grade yet very very pretty. I keep in mind that she likes Corey. I still remind myself that sometimes. She could do so much better than Corey. I treat her better. Just saying. I still think she's mad at me for calling the band's music bad. On my way to geography I bump into Corey. " Corey Riffin from groband!" I say excited. " That's me." Corey says looking up. " I was making a story about you and Laney when you are 21 and" I start. " Wait. Laney does not like me. After the fanfictions came out we agreed that we don't like each other. I mean she's my best friend. I think of her as my little sister." " Ooops sorry. By the way, my name is Ryan….Haight." " Yeah I gotta get to class." Corey says. " I bet you do. I have to as well." I say.
Corey's POV
What a weirdo. I do like Laney is just that she said she thought of me as a big brother. I never thought of her as a little sister. I always liked her. No. I always LOVED her. But Laney obviously doesn't like me back. :(. So what? I'm only in 5th grade. I have a whole lot of time to win her back. I was so happy this was my last class today. On my way I see Laney. " Hey Lanes. Do you know that weirdo Ryan Haight?" I whisper to her. " He's a good person. He saved me from Eddie." she replies. " Who?" I ask. " That kid who picks on you and me." " Oh." " But he thought you an I were like in love!" I whisper. " Don't mind him. He is stupid sometimes but he is still a good friend." Laney says. Laney is hilarious.
Judy's POV
Kon is in most of my classes. What a relief! Kon is so fun to be around. Plus, the fact that I have a crush on him. * crickets chirp * I know! He is supposed to be my best friend! I'm the worst! :'(. I slumped in my seat in class that day.
End of chapter
I personally think I'd give this chapter 5/10. Only because it got boring when everyone's pov was about their crush except Laney.
Question of The Chapter: Do you think RyanxLaney is a good idea. I mean Laney doesn't like Corey in this fanfiction anyways.
I DO NOT OWN GROJBAND