Heloo! I'm back again! Sorry for last time, but I guess I was kind of angry
because you know, people steal fictions for themselves, and I hate it!
Disclaimer: I don't own anything except some characters that I'm going to make up. The characters here all belong to Clamp.
Oh and another thing, I'm starting to change the points of view. I'm better at writing from the main character, but its going to be a little tough, so I'm going to write from three different points of views.
*are for thoughts
" are for speaking
/ changes of places
[]something the character does
()tiny invasions of me ;)
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What happened last time?
"Oh, I missed you so much" I said wiping out my tears. I couldn't believe it! There he was, the boy of my dreams, they boy who I loved, the boy who could barely smile, and only smiled for me… Syaoran.
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Chapter 2:
A Cold Encounter
/Syaoran's house
I couldn't believe it. After 2-3 years Syaoran had returned. (that means that they are about 15 years old, didn't wanted to make them seniors) I had waited hoping to see him again, and it had finally paid off. "See Sakura, I always keep what I promise" he said smiling. I gazed into his deep and truthful amber eyes. "Uhh...We should enter my house, ummm… it's getting kind of cold outside" he said blushing a little. "Right" I smiled as we entered the house.
His house was all gray and filthy. It had been a long time since he had been here. "Why did you return Syaoran?" I asked. "Like I said, I didn't have anything to do. I had finally finished my training, and well… my mom thought it was a great idea" he said examining the now old rooms. "Oh…" I said quite happy not knowing what to say… "How's Meilin?" I asked. "Fine" he said searching for something, "she hadn't finished her training, so she had to stay" *He is sooooooo cute* I began thinking, and dreaming.
"Here, I thought the line was dead, but my phone seems to still be working" he handed me a phone. "Oh right" I said waking up. I dialed to my house, and told my father that I would be late for home. After that I stayed a few more minutes with Syaoran. Until it was getting late, and he walked me home. We were silent on our way but still I was glad that he was back. "Well, I guess I'll see you at school" he said looking at the ground. "Yeah, thanks for walking me home" I said smiling. He grew a shade of red. "Bye Sakura" he went walking away. "Bye …" I said in a soft whisper.
Have you ever had those times when you are awake, and you think you are dreaming? Well, this is it. I stayed resting on the door. Suddenly I heard a whisper from a bush to the left. "Saaaakkkuurraaa…" "Huh?, who is it?!" I turned to the left, trying to find someone, but it was empty. I started shivering. I didn't like ghosts or stuff like that. My brother Touya, always said that there were phantoms everywhere. I hated him, because ever since, I've been afraid. "SAKURA!!!" Someone jumped from the right bush. "AHHHHHHH!!!!"I screamed.
"Shhhhh… Sakura, its me!" someone I knew said it. "Tomoyo?!" I turned around and there she was smiling, with sparkly eyes, and with a video camera on her hand. "Oh, Sakura!!! It's beautiful! That will make a great entrance for my new tape" She said. "Right… [sweat drop] well, I'll see you tomorrow, ok ?" "Ok!" Tomoyo went walking away. *Wow, she almost scared me to death* I thought checking my how my heart beat.
I went in, and had dinner. After a while I went to change to my pajamas and dropped in my bed. I couldn't sleep, something was on my mind and couldn't get out. *Syaoran, when will I ever tell you that I love you?* *It's been a lot since I haven't seen you, what if you have forgotten or changed?* Suddenly, I finally got to sleep that night…
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I stared at the horizon, everything was cold and icy. It looked like a crystal castle, with nothing but shattering glass around it. I was all alone, and I didn't know what to do. I heard someone call my name from the distance, It seemed like a boy, a boy I couldn't recognize.... "Sakura.......!" He lifted his hand, and suddenly I was trapped inside that castle. I looked around me, and a mirror was hanging right in front of me. An old fashioned mirror which showed no reflection. I gasped as I saw another face staring at me from the end…
"Sakura!!!!" "What?!" I woke up. "Sakura, could you please get… OFF OF ME!" I didn't realize that Kero was under my pillow. I took it out, and Kero came all dizzy. "Man…that was crazy" he said shaking his head.
"What do you mean?" I asked. "When I tried to wake you up for school, you went nuts!" he said still trying to balance himself. "SCHOOL!"I almost forgot!
I quickly went to change and get my books. I hurried down the stairs to take a piece of bread, and placing it on my mouth, I began to put my skates. When I was finished I said goodbye, and hurried on to class. I was half running and half eating my toasted bread, but without knowing it I accidentally tripped and slammed into someone.
"Oh, I'm sorry…"I said trying to stand up, and help the person pick up the books. "It's okay, I'm not hurt, are you Sakura?" the person asked.
The moment he asked that I carefully looked to see who that person was. It was a boy, a tall and slender boy about my age, he had dark blue hair that matched with violet colored eyes. You could say that he looked exactly like Eriol. The only difference was that he didn't wear glasses.
"I'm sorry, how rude of me. My name is Henry, Henry Takeru. (not good at making up names ^_^; ) I could swear that I saw his eyes were deep and icy, and that his smile was more of a smirk. "My name is…" before I could tell my name he said. "Sakura, yes I know…" he smirked. "But how…" "Oh, I read this book with your name, silly me." He made that smile, while handing me my books. "Well, I guess I'll see you at school…" with that he went and in one blink of an eye, disappeared. *What a weird guy…who could he be?* I continued going to school.
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to be continued…
Liked it? And be ready for my next chapter:
An Unexpected Rival
And I would really love if you R+R my fict… pretty please? :)
Disclaimer: I don't own anything except some characters that I'm going to make up. The characters here all belong to Clamp.
Oh and another thing, I'm starting to change the points of view. I'm better at writing from the main character, but its going to be a little tough, so I'm going to write from three different points of views.
*are for thoughts
" are for speaking
/ changes of places
[]something the character does
()tiny invasions of me ;)
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What happened last time?
"Oh, I missed you so much" I said wiping out my tears. I couldn't believe it! There he was, the boy of my dreams, they boy who I loved, the boy who could barely smile, and only smiled for me… Syaoran.
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Chapter 2:
A Cold Encounter
/Syaoran's house
I couldn't believe it. After 2-3 years Syaoran had returned. (that means that they are about 15 years old, didn't wanted to make them seniors) I had waited hoping to see him again, and it had finally paid off. "See Sakura, I always keep what I promise" he said smiling. I gazed into his deep and truthful amber eyes. "Uhh...We should enter my house, ummm… it's getting kind of cold outside" he said blushing a little. "Right" I smiled as we entered the house.
His house was all gray and filthy. It had been a long time since he had been here. "Why did you return Syaoran?" I asked. "Like I said, I didn't have anything to do. I had finally finished my training, and well… my mom thought it was a great idea" he said examining the now old rooms. "Oh…" I said quite happy not knowing what to say… "How's Meilin?" I asked. "Fine" he said searching for something, "she hadn't finished her training, so she had to stay" *He is sooooooo cute* I began thinking, and dreaming.
"Here, I thought the line was dead, but my phone seems to still be working" he handed me a phone. "Oh right" I said waking up. I dialed to my house, and told my father that I would be late for home. After that I stayed a few more minutes with Syaoran. Until it was getting late, and he walked me home. We were silent on our way but still I was glad that he was back. "Well, I guess I'll see you at school" he said looking at the ground. "Yeah, thanks for walking me home" I said smiling. He grew a shade of red. "Bye Sakura" he went walking away. "Bye …" I said in a soft whisper.
Have you ever had those times when you are awake, and you think you are dreaming? Well, this is it. I stayed resting on the door. Suddenly I heard a whisper from a bush to the left. "Saaaakkkuurraaa…" "Huh?, who is it?!" I turned to the left, trying to find someone, but it was empty. I started shivering. I didn't like ghosts or stuff like that. My brother Touya, always said that there were phantoms everywhere. I hated him, because ever since, I've been afraid. "SAKURA!!!" Someone jumped from the right bush. "AHHHHHHH!!!!"I screamed.
"Shhhhh… Sakura, its me!" someone I knew said it. "Tomoyo?!" I turned around and there she was smiling, with sparkly eyes, and with a video camera on her hand. "Oh, Sakura!!! It's beautiful! That will make a great entrance for my new tape" She said. "Right… [sweat drop] well, I'll see you tomorrow, ok ?" "Ok!" Tomoyo went walking away. *Wow, she almost scared me to death* I thought checking my how my heart beat.
I went in, and had dinner. After a while I went to change to my pajamas and dropped in my bed. I couldn't sleep, something was on my mind and couldn't get out. *Syaoran, when will I ever tell you that I love you?* *It's been a lot since I haven't seen you, what if you have forgotten or changed?* Suddenly, I finally got to sleep that night…
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I stared at the horizon, everything was cold and icy. It looked like a crystal castle, with nothing but shattering glass around it. I was all alone, and I didn't know what to do. I heard someone call my name from the distance, It seemed like a boy, a boy I couldn't recognize.... "Sakura.......!" He lifted his hand, and suddenly I was trapped inside that castle. I looked around me, and a mirror was hanging right in front of me. An old fashioned mirror which showed no reflection. I gasped as I saw another face staring at me from the end…
"Sakura!!!!" "What?!" I woke up. "Sakura, could you please get… OFF OF ME!" I didn't realize that Kero was under my pillow. I took it out, and Kero came all dizzy. "Man…that was crazy" he said shaking his head.
"What do you mean?" I asked. "When I tried to wake you up for school, you went nuts!" he said still trying to balance himself. "SCHOOL!"I almost forgot!
I quickly went to change and get my books. I hurried down the stairs to take a piece of bread, and placing it on my mouth, I began to put my skates. When I was finished I said goodbye, and hurried on to class. I was half running and half eating my toasted bread, but without knowing it I accidentally tripped and slammed into someone.
"Oh, I'm sorry…"I said trying to stand up, and help the person pick up the books. "It's okay, I'm not hurt, are you Sakura?" the person asked.
The moment he asked that I carefully looked to see who that person was. It was a boy, a tall and slender boy about my age, he had dark blue hair that matched with violet colored eyes. You could say that he looked exactly like Eriol. The only difference was that he didn't wear glasses.
"I'm sorry, how rude of me. My name is Henry, Henry Takeru. (not good at making up names ^_^; ) I could swear that I saw his eyes were deep and icy, and that his smile was more of a smirk. "My name is…" before I could tell my name he said. "Sakura, yes I know…" he smirked. "But how…" "Oh, I read this book with your name, silly me." He made that smile, while handing me my books. "Well, I guess I'll see you at school…" with that he went and in one blink of an eye, disappeared. *What a weird guy…who could he be?* I continued going to school.
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to be continued…
Liked it? And be ready for my next chapter:
An Unexpected Rival
And I would really love if you R+R my fict… pretty please? :)