Hey, everyone Bropower125 here, I'm going to get straight into the reviews.
So without further ado let's make fun of Keemstar,
LET'S GET RIGHT INTO DA NOOSE
Kite Lanford: Vox the Nameless One... why do I have a feeling you're making a reference to Planescape Torment the way his name and title went... actually, can't be Torment without a snarky living object... what do you make of it?
Otherwise, the atmosphere is very very suited...
Honestly… No clue what Planescape Torment is? Honestly my character is more of a reference to the Magnavox Odyssey, but to each their own I guess. Honestly any references to Planescape are unintentional as I've never played the game.
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Sadly that is our only review for now, the next thing that gets updated should be MegaDiNEP, then after I may or may not update The Switch since the person who I did the challenge for said they wanted to see more. However updating 'The Switch' is at the back of my mind and is less likely to be done.
Also, any and all criticism is welcome. Even if you're just flaming it's fine by me. By listening to you guys I learn more but at the same time I'm not going to specifically ask for a review either, just know that your thoughts are welcome guest or not.
OH BY THE WAY SPOILERS! IF YOU HAVEN'T PLAYED MEGADIMENSION AND YOU DON'T WANT ANY SPOILERS NOW WOULD BE THE TIME TO HEAD BACK AS WE ARE REALLY HEADING INTO SPOILER TERRITORY HERE AND I CAN ONLY HOLD SO MUCH BACK. Mind you my plot is different since I'm not just going to put a new character in and make the same plot with an extra character (since that's boring) so not everything should be spoilery.
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14 Days or 2 weeks before the Zero Dimension Incident…
"Shit. That Dark CPU is back!" Uzume shouts, clearly upset at the return of the destroyer of her world. She had vowed a long time ago to protect her monster friends from the foul beast and she would do just that. With a fire in her eyes she heads towards where the beast is.
Vox curiously followed behind her, she had told him to stay behind but who was he to sit around and follow orders? Let's put it this way, he isn't one. He can hardly sit still for a few minutes as it is.
As Vox slowly trailed behind the crimson haired girl in an attempt to see just exactly what it is she's fighting he gets caught by a few monsters, and as you guessed it, these aren't exactly the friendly variety of monsters that Uzume wants to protect.
"Damn. What now?" Vox tries to be as quiet as he can since getting caught by Uzume would be quite a shit move at this moment. So instead he just decided to punch the shit out of the mechanical monsters that have confronted him, real smart if you have a peanut for a brain but I the author digress.
"Kuh" Vox grunts as he merely just hurts himself by punching the mechanical monstrosity. So rather than risk his chances he just books it until he loses the monsters.
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"Great, so now I've not only lost the monsters but my only ticket around this nightmare. Also, why the hell am I talking to myself?" Vox begins to have an existential crisis as he wonders if talking to oneself is sane or not.
However, before Vox can lament much more he notices giant off in the distance.
"Is that what Uzume was talking about? That thing is huge; no one person could take that thing on by themselves, not even two. You'd need an army just to but a small scratch in that things armor." Vox scans the beast for any weakness from afar but has no luck.
While looking at Dark Purple the one other thing that Vox manages to notice is the building he had found himself in originally. Which of course meant he now knew how to get back, only thing is, how?
He had just barely gotten to where he was unscathed so it would be a miracle to make it back the same, however he needed to or Uzume would get suspicious.
"Well, I guess hope is as good as anything. Right?" Vox asks himself, feeling odd when he hears 'hope'.
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"Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit! Why did I think this was a good idea again?" Vox shouts as he runs inside of the destroyed building.
As he closes the door of the decrepit building behind him he comes face to face with Uzume.
"Shit. I'm just going to excuse myself." Vox says as he re-opens the door and prepares to leave.
"Get back in here it's dangerous out there!" Uzume shouts at him, she didn't really look as upset as she was more worried that he had gotten hurt. "You okay?" Uzume asks Vox while checking him over for any injuries.
As soon as Uzume had verified that Vox had no injuries she pulled him in and closed the door on the safe house.
"Please, don't do that again, that was reckless for someone who is not only unarmed but also an inexperienced fighter. At least promise next time you try to leave this place to come with me rather than go on your own." The concern in Uzume's voice was as clear as day for Vox who looked Uzume right in the eyes as she spoke to him.
"Okay, and also shouldn't I at least get a weapon then? I wouldn't want to be a hassle since protecting someone while fighting is difficult." Vox replies somewhat emotionless. However, he wasn't entirely emotionless, rather the concern in Uzume's voice had brought something back to him that he couldn't quite put his thumb on.
"Don't be so reckless."
A voice sounded out of nowhere.
"Wha-" Vox looked around for the origin of the voice, "Did you hear anything?" Vox asks Uzume.
"No. Why?" Uzume looks at Vox with a look of uncertainty, was the kid going crazy?
"Must have been nothing. Ignore what I said, I must be hearing things." Vox waved it off, however he knew what he heard, it felt so warm, like he should be with it, but he doesn't know why.
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Minutes before the Zero Dimension Incident…
"Umio, what's the ETA on the EVAC?" Uzume shouts into her visual radio while she waits for a response.
"We're about halfway done, give us a few more minutes." The fish man responds through whatever sorcery it is that he uses to reply. "How is the other doing?" Umio asks with curiosity in his strangely deep fish-man voice.
"Vox is doing fine, just evacuate everyone, okay." Uzume get's Umio back on track before hanging up.
Near where Uzume was, Vox was taking on some of the weaker monsters with a pair of brass knuckles. The brass knuckles themselves were colored white however attached to them were a pair of black gloves which prevented the knuckles from hurting the wearer.
They were also coincidentally quite useful for taking on all of the robotic enemies that lived in this destroyed world known as the zero dimension.
They also allowed for the user to do a gravitational flux jump or in layman's terms, a double jump. This allowed for Vox to get at the higher more sensitive spots of the large robots and defeat them.
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Off in the distance a pair of lilac haired sisters found themselves in the zero dimension and soon after taking on the 'tutorial boss' they started making their way through 'ruined planeptune'.
Eventually the lilac sisters came across the two 'freedom fighters' and rushed towards them as they saw the swarm of monsters.
"Listen! If you two girls are here to help than you better know how to fight!" Uzume shouted at the girls without really looking at them. She had enough evidence now as it was to believe there were other humans in the destroyed world when she saw Vox.
"Okee-doke!" The shorter purple sister responded as she pulled out her katana while her taller younger sister pulled out a beam sword and started to get to work on finishing the monsters off.
"I'll try my best!" The taller sister said nervously as she finished off one of the robotic monsters. As it died and all the parts fell to the ground she looked on in awe before another monster tried to attack her and she blocked it, beginning to fight it off before she went back to the pile, only to repeat the process of getting bothered while trying to scavenge for robot parts.
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Well, I guess this is as good a place as any to end this chapter off, and to my surprise it is actually of decent length again. A little bit shorter but still similar so all is good in my books!