I'm am just going to say.

How is my OC a Mary-Sue, and as the story goes on, I will reveal more about her past, which wasn't exactly every childs picture of a perfect life, I mean abusive parents, a foster kid, and She got all those brusies and scars from her parents not from being attacked by monsters as I would have revealed in the second chapter. And my OC is not perfect not even close, so I don't get why you all think shes a mary-sue.

And I forgot to change my summery, it isn't going to be about how my OC and another camper fight for Nico, I ment to put,

"And what if Annabeth,Percy,Nico and a certain daughter of Shiva have to fit in in High school to recuit new Demi-gods?"

So if you thought the plot was messed up, it was, and I am therefore changing it.

And I will delete this story if you really think i can't make it better

But if you would like me too PLEASE say,

And even if you hate this story I still want your opinon.

REVIEW!