I do not own Pokemon. So here, I started the second chapter of my story, I hopes you like it. Thanks all of you for your review, your review is giving me courage of think the story, and who watched the anime, they are thinking of how can I changes the story, but for your information, this is the place of fanfic, where people wrote the story, which there mind like, not likes the anime. So, please read it.

VIRIDIAN FOREST

Ash and Misty both are traveling through the forest, toward the Pewter City. Misty feels something rubbing to her leg, as she looks, she find it was a bug Pokemon, the Caterpie, that caused she start screaming and kicks the Caterpie in fear. "What's happen?" Ash asked to her, she pointed towards the green worm sitting in the grass. "Cool, it's a cute Caterpie." Ash replied. "What cool? I am hate the Bug Type Pokemon, please keep it away from me." Misty said with clutching the Ash. "It's really cool." Ash said and picks up the Caterpie, which cause Misty to ran away behind a tree. "Please put it away from me." Misty begged. Ash caught the Caterpie in his Pokeball, but not stopping to keep it away from her, after they exit the forest, Ash also capture a Pidgetto in his way toward to Pewter City.

In the Pewter City, before they both enter in the Gym. They noticed, a man was selling rock, he give them some advice, how here the Gym Leader was very tough guy, and he easily not shows mercy on the opponent. In the way Ash's Caterpie is evolved Cacoon then in Butterfree, and his Pikachu learns the Iron Tail and break the rock by his Thunder Bolt.

PEWTER CITY GYM

They enter in the Gym for Ash's first Gym badge, both of Ash and Misty noticed on a board. "IF YOU LOSE THE BATTLE, THEN DON'T CRY FOR YOUR MOMMY, BECAUSE I AM BROCK THE ROCK." "Who comes there?" A voice came from the inside of gym. "My name is Ash, Ash Ketchum," Ash spoke up. "And I come here for challenge you to a Gym Battle for the Boulder Badge". "Very well." The voice replied. "I'm Brock, the Gym Leader of Pewter City Gym,p accepting your challenge." Brock led Ash to the battlefield; the battlefield was a sandy floor with big pointy rocks on it. Misty walked to the side lines for watch the match. "This battle is between the Brock of Pewter City Gym Leader and the challenger Ash Ketchum of Pallet Town." Referee announced, which Brock introduced himself was his brother Forrest. "Both Gym Leader and challenger will use two Pokemon each. And who defeats the both of the two Pokemon first, who wins the battle. Lets begin it!" "All right, Pikachu I choose you!" Ash shouted, Pikachu goes on the battle field. 'A Pikachu?' Brock thought, 'That's a really a big mistake. Surely this kid not knows that Rock can easily beat the Electric'. "Okay go Geodude!" he shouted, with throwing his own Pokeball, which reveals the Geodude.

"Since you are a challenger, I gives you the first chance." Brock offered. "Bad choice, Pikachu, use Iron Tail." Ash said as, the Pikachu run toward to Geodude and then he jump as his Tail is glowing and he hits the Geodude, after taking the hit, Geodude is fainted on the ground and his eyes is swirling. Brock and his siblings is gritted their teeth by noticing this, they never thought that, a newcomer is able to teach his Pikachu a attack like Iron Tail and use it against the Rock Pokemon. "Whoa... Geodude is unable to battle, Gym Leader send your next Pokemon." Forrest declared. "You are really impressive, I never thought, your Pikachu is knowing the Steel Type attack. But this is my best Pokemon, I am not going easy on you." Brock tell and throws his Pokeball, which reveals a massive Rock snake Pokemon. "Onix, I choose you."

Brock ordered Onix to use tackle on Pikachu, but Ash told his Pikachu to use agility to dodge. Brock then told Onix to use bind to grab the Pikachu. But thanks to Pikachu impressive speed, he managed to dodged the Onix's tail and ran up on Onix's body. "Pikachu use Iron Tail, really hard!" Ash command. Pikachu's Iron Tail attack hits very hard on the Onix; it was like hitting a boulder with the sledge hammer. Onix was in great pain because of that. "Pikachu, Iron Tail one more time!" Ash shouted. Pikachu did that and knocked out the Onix at all. "Onix is unable to battle," Forrest announced. "Pikachu is the winner. Therefore the winner of this gym battle is Ash Ketchum of Pallet Town." "All right we did it." Ash cheered. "Pika Pika chu!" Pikachu also cheered. "Ri olu Ri" Riolu cheered from the Misty arm. Brock gives the Boulder Badge. "You are really interesting, or your Pikachu with the disadvantage he defeat both of mine Pokemon it's only happen in folks, but you did it in real, I also want to travel with you or become a Pokemon Breeder, but I have my siblings problem, then you enjoy your time." Brock express his feeling.

Ash and Misty was ready to go toward the Cerulean City Gym, they noticed Brock is coming toward there. "Hey, Brock what are you doing here?" Ash asked. "I am ready for going with you guys, because my Dad is come and take the responsibility of Gym and my siblings." Brock replied. "But why, we take you with us?" Misty asked. "Because, I know to cooking food or many things". 'Wow, if he is making food, then it's solution of my hunger problem.' Ash thought "Ok, I agreed". Misty smack on his head. "Why you agreed, he only tell us, he know to bake food, not more anything". "Hunger is my main problem or if he know about this, then it's good for me." Ash explain.

CERULEAN CITY

In some days they reach the Cerulean City, Brock go toward Pokemart but not before flirting a Officer Jenny, Misty dragged him, or they hear about some thieving. "Ash, you know I am the Gym Leader of this Gym". "Really? then who is running your Gym" Ash asked. "My three sisters is running the Gym, or I am in tour for become a great Water Type Pokemon Master." She replied. They both entered in the Gym, where they notice here Gym is not like any other Gym, there is three girl swimming in the water. Ash asked to Misty. "Where is your Gym? Where is your sister?" Misty reply by pointing toward the swimming pool. "There is my sister." and thought. 'Why they are not running gym or does the swimming'. After their end of show, Misty asked to them, why they are not running the gym, they answered. "Because tomorrow three trainers are coming there, and we lose to them, we have not in mood of today do any battle. And who is the boy? Which Pokemon is this? Where you find him?" Misty answered them. "He is my friend, his name is Ash Ketchum. This Pokemon name is Riolu, or I am not caught it, Riolu is the Ash Pokemon, we are coming there for Ash's gym battle". "Nice to meet you Ash and but today we are not in mood of doing any battle, if you need the badge then we gives you the Gym Badge of Cerulean City." Ash was ready to take it the badge but Misty interrupted it. "First, I will battle with you, if you defeat me, then this badge will be yours." Which Ash agreed, and the battle is ready to began. "This battle is between the Cerulean City Gym Leader Misty and challenger Ash Ketchum from the Pallet Town." Daisy announced work as referee.

"Misty calls Staryu." Misty throws the Pokeball, which star type Pokemon appeared. "Pikachu get ready." Ash said but Pikachu refuse because he was friend of her. "Ok Pikachu if you not want then Riolu ready for battle." but like Pikachu, Riolu also refuse to go. "Oh you also not want, Butterfree you are up" Ash throw the Pokeball and Butterfree began ready for the battle. "Staryu use Water Gun!" Misty shouted. "Counter with Gust" Ash command. The Gust attack stopped the Water Gun attack. "Now use Silver Wind". A wind with silver crescents flew out of Butterfree's wings and hit Staryu head on. "Staryu use Swift." Misty command. The stars from Staryu hit the Butterfree. Misty's sisters were watching the battle from aside. "Misty is good with this." Violet said. "Yeah," Daisy agreed. "She may not have our looks, but she has better battling skills than us". Seel was enjoying the match and clapping her fins. "Butterfree use Psychic." Ash command. Butterfree's eyes turned blue and fired a blue rays at Staryu, which invisible to everyone, as Staryu gets in the controlled of Butterfree, before Staryu fainted. "Staryu is unable to battle, Gym Leader send your next Pokemon." Daisy announced.

"Staryu return," Misty called back the Staryu, "Well Ash I know you are best. But this battle isn't over yet. Misty calls Starmie." The evolved formed of Staryu come on the battlefield. Ash take some informations with his Pokedex and recalled the Butterfree and send back Pidgeotto. Pidgeotto is ready for the battle but suddenly they heard some noise, they turned and found, Team Rocket announced their favourite motto, and they are thief, which they stole the things from market. The machine start sucking the Pokemon of Gym Leader. "Pikachu Thunderbolt." Ash command and Pikachu releases the high voltage which destroyed the machine and blasted Team Rocket. "Team Rocket blasting off again." They shouted, "Ok, Misty ready for complete our battle" Ash said.

"No, you beat my Staryu fair and square, or save my Gym, then the Cascade Badge is yours." Misty replies with giving the badge to Ash, Brock is come there after take the things which him needed. Ash take the badge and give the victory pose, Pikachu and Riolu copy it, after Misty and her sister farewell each other and good wishes each other, Brock, Misty and Ash came out of the Gym.

SAFFRON CITY

Some people is standing there, with there Pokemon releases, and the next side two girls is standing. "So, you are not doing as we want." The first girl asked. "No slut, we are not agreed on your terms, we does as we want, and now we are going to make you whore." The first one replied. "Ok, you can try." The second girl replied, as their eyes turned dull, and before the people do anything, there Pokemon falls sleep. "You know sweetie, we can calls this Hypnosis." First girl replied as she point her fingers on some of the people, and as she pointed her finger upward, the people is going upward, and then she left her rays from them, cause everyone falls on the ground with that height and dead. Second girls also does same with the rest of person, they are horrified what is going with them, before they said any word, they all dead.

BACK TO ASH

Ash, Misty and Brock leave the Gym, Ash learn next Gym in the Vermilion City and he go toward the Vermilion City. In the way they encounter with a boy who claim 99 victories, he challenge Ash for complete his victory but lost, he gives his best luck to Ash and promise to cheer for him in Indigo Conference.

Ash and co. lost their way in the depths of a dense wooden forest, shrouded in thick, white mist. Momentarily giving up, they decide to break for a brief rest. As Ash wanders deeper into the wood, searching for firewood, he happens across a young boy being bullied by four classmates gathered around him. Eavesdropping on their conversation. The four older boys were asking the younger boy some questions about Pidgey. When the younger boy got one of the questions wrong, the older boys pushed him off the treadmill, called him useless and left him on the ground. Ash and Pikachu saws this commotion and went to see if he was all right. "Ah it's okay," said the boy "This happens to me all the time. I'm Joe". Ash was curious to what Joe was talking about, so he invited Joe to share creeps and tea with him and his friends. Joe accepted the invitation. Ash led Joe back to where Brock and Misty were and they all shared crepes and tea. "So what did you mean about you being tossed onto the ground all the time?" Ash asked Joe. Joe explained that he was a student of Pokemon Tech. "Pokemon Tech is a boarding school where you learn about Pokemon" Joe explained. "And there you can earn badges, without traveling to get them". He then explained that the older boys were trying to help him understand about Pidgey. "Since I saw them push you onto the ground just because you got an answer wrong," Ash asked. "I don't call that helping".

Misty asked Joe if he could take them to see this Pokemon Tech, Joe did so. By the time they got to Pokemon Tech the mist had finally cleared. Pokemon Tech was a massive building. Joe gave them a tour. He explained that the lessons are really difficult and that some students were still behind everyone else. "What grade are you in?" asked Misty. "I'm still a novice, but I have two badges" Joe replied as he showed them sort of machine there he could easily beats the Water Pokemon of Cerulean Gym with his Pokemon Weepinbell. This made Misty anger. "Look here you." She Shouted. "This machine is nothing compared to real Pokemon battles. As a Gym Leader of Cerulean Gym I challenge you to a real battle". Joe accepted it. Joe and Misty got ready to fight in one of the training rooms. "Misty calls Starmie." Misty throws her Pokeball. "Okay and I choose Weepinbell." Joe throws his Pokeball. Starmie hits Weepinbell with just one tackle and Weepinbell was knocked out immediately. "No way!" gasped Joe. "How did my Grass Type lose to your Water Type?" "Because you are weak and a tramp, how about if you battle me, I am Giselle, leader of this school" A girl appeared there and introduce herself. "I am accepting your challenge." Misty kept her Starmie out and Giselle sent out a Graveller. Brock was shocked by that choice, Water Types beat Rock Types. But Graveller easily defeated Starmie with a Tackle attack, and wasn't even dazed by Starmie's water gun attack. Misty couldn't believe her eyes. "There now you see Joe." Giselle said with a smirk. "Since my Graveller was more experienced than Starmie, which is the reason it won".

"Hang on a minute!" Ash said "There is more to Pokemon Training than levels". He introduced himself to Giselle. "How many badges and Pokemon do you have?" She asked. "I have two badges and Four Pokemon" Ash answered. Giselle and the four boys laughed and called him that weak. Ash got cross and asked Giselle to battle him. "I accepted it." She replied. "Riolu take the position." Ash ordered and Riolu takes the battle position, all have shocked after they noticed this Pokemon, because they never see this Pokemon and never learn anything about this on Pokemon Tech, it is new for them. "Wow, I am sorry for what I said to you, it's my greatness to battle a unknown Pokemon, Cubone I choose you" The bone head wear Pokemon stand against of the Riolu. "Now all of you see the power of Riolu, Riolu use Aura Sphere." As Ash command, Riolu formed the blue sphere in his hand and hit the Cubone, much to everyone shocked, Cubone was fainted. "We did it Riolu." Ash said and start spinning Riolu by take in him in his hands, Riolu is happy to his dad, in happiness he start glowing, everyone noticed toward him, when the glowing ended there is Lucario in place of Riolu. "Wow, Riolu you are evolved, but which Pokemon is you." Ash was confused because he never seen any Lucario in his life, or never any of them there. But there is always a rumor about the Lucario, the Aura Pokemon. "I think it is a Lucario, so the rumor was true, he is really a Aura Pokemon, which the legend says, and it also a rare Pokemon, you are really amazing Ash." Giselle said. "How did you know about this Pokemon?" Ash asked to Giselle. "I read about this Pokemon on Pokemon history book, where we learn, once a battle was between the Good Psychic users and Evil Psychic users, if you need to know more about this, then you have to stop there tonight, you can continue your journey on tomorrow, and we are very grateful, if you join us on the dinner." Ash really want to know about the Lucario and Psychic users, so just he accepted.

Here is the review, which you mention me.

It's a good story but I could understand what they were saying because the sentences had to many errors you also need to pace it better. Don't rush when making the chapter a bit longer by going into a bit more detail.

Thanks for your appretiate, I will focus on the sentences this time, and before I place it here, I will spell check and grammer check in the google. After that I place it here.

It's a good idea yet I founds lots of grammer issue, but that can only tell me you muct be a foreignor so. It's a good story I actually liked it very much.

Thank you very much, and as you thought, I am really the foreigner.

I'm no come on expert, but the way Misty said to Ash about the bike sounded like she's offering herself to him.

Misty also want to going on her journey of become a best Water Trainer. And she have good chance to become best Pokemon Master, ih she travel with Ash.

Looking good so far for a first story. Just keep doing what you're doing. Make sure to always check for spelling and grammer and you'll be just fine. Looking forward to seeing more.

Thanks for your review. I mind it to check both Grammer and Spelling in Google before posted it here. Here is my second story.

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