Yeah, I think I'm going to work on this fan-fic before I really get working on Twilight's foal mostly because I already have the story's ending and body already finished I just need to write it down. Last time I left off, Sakujo had just killed his first pony, so I'm not going to hold off anymore and just get to writing, and down worry the mane six are going to be in the story.
S.
Sakujo was breathing heavily. "I killed somepony, I can't believe it the notebook really works." "I have to try it again, just to be sure," Sakujo said picking up the notebook and walking out of the room. He made his way down to the lobby and walked out the door. He was nervously walking and almost felt like throwing up as he made his way down the street. He looked around, "I don't think I should kill somepony on the street, it should probably be another criminal." He thought to himself. He thought about it, "what are the odds that the news for broadcast another criminal." "Highly unlikely" he said to himself. He stopped to look around the street. He walked around the block for a few minutes until he found what he wanted. He was outside a bar with several drunken stallions harassing a mare. He knew that this would turn bad and that it would be the perfect opportunity to use the Death Note again. He could hear the stallions talking to this poor mare. "Hey baby, why don't you let us show you a good time," the first one said. "That's our Typhoon for you; he can spot a hottie from a mile away." The second one said. "Okay that's his name, now I just have to wait." Sakujo thought to himself. The second grabbed the mare while Typhoon positioned himself to violate her. "Alright it's now or never," Sakujo thought to himself as he pulled out the notebook and a pen. He wrote the name down quickly and then waited. The struggling mare kicked Typhoon in the balls and ran off. "Get back here you little whore," Typhoon yelled chasing after her. "36…37…38…39…40" Typhoon was still running, the mare let out a scream. Suddenly the sound of wire snapping was heard, then the sound of whishing. Typhoon suddenly toppled over with a big gash across his chest. "That proves it, this notebook really is a Death Note." As he walked away a mass of ponies was gathering around the dead Typhoon. "This world is in for a change," Sakujo said to himself with a smile across his face. He looked to the entry he just entered. "Typhoon, killed when a wire snaps and slashes him across his chest; dies instantly.
Celestia's court.
Celestia was surrounded by several large crowds. The crowds consisted of delegates from Canterlot, Ponyville, Manehatten, Applossa, and Fillydelphia. In the center of the crowds sat Celestia, Luna, Twilight, Applejack and Fluttershy. The crowds were chattering amongst each other. "Silence," Celestia yelled. The crowd stopped talking and all eyes were on Celestia. "Now the matter of the issue is that in the last 48 hours 34 criminals have died of heart attacks, and it's essential that we find out why." Celestia said, my student Twilight has a theory on why. Twilight stood up and walked to the microphone. "I believe that it is a single or a group of ponies that is killing these criminals." Twilight finished. "NO that's not possible, the princess created restrictions on magic that allows ponies to kill one another using magic." A pony from Manehatten said. "Yes, but there are ways around this," Luna said. "It is for that reason that I have contacted S about this." Several mummers erupted from the crowd. "Who is S?" Fluttershy asked. "S is a pony who solves the mysteries that no one else can, Nopony knows who he really is. Luna is actually the only one that can contact him and she doesn't even know his real identity." Celestia said to them. Luna flashed her horn and made a small purple circle appear. An altered voice was suddenly heard from the circle. "Hello this is S and I already have my own theory on these murders, and I think I have found a way to contact this murderer, as for the group of ponies I want helping me I think that the three elements of harmony that were chosen by Celestia and Luna are the only help that I will need." The voice ended and the purple circle disappeared.
In Sakujo's room.
Sakujo was looking the Death Note, in only two days he had already finished half of the first page. "Yes, finally the world is being cleansed, and I have tons of support." The Phenomenon had gathered support from many ponies how were praising this being that was punishing criminals like the scum that they are. "This is the greatest thing that has ever happened," He said aloud. "I'm glad you have taken a liking to it." A voice from behind him called out to him. Sakujo quickly turned around to see a horrifying sight. Behind him was a tall black creature with a pony's head and dragon wings. Sakujo cringed as the wings on the creature resided back into its back. "Who are you?" Sakujo said shaking. "I am the Shinigami Sin," The creature said. Sakujo knew the word from Clopanese folk lore. "A god of death?" "Yes," Sin said back. "Let me guess, you're here to take the notebook back," Sakujo said. "No I'm here to observe you as long as you have the notebook." Sin said back. "Let me guess till I die," Sakujo said "That or till the notebook is finished." Sin said as he walked over to the Death Note and picking it up. He looked over the nearly finished page. "In the past, Death Notes have made their way into Equestria, but I've never heard of a pony has written this many names in the amount of time that it has been in your possession." Sin said putting the notebook back on the desk. "You don't understand Sin, I know why was chosen." "What, you think that you were chosen to hold the Death Note," Sin said almost laughing. "Well yeah why else would the Death Note be bestowed upon me?" Sakujo said back. "Well I dropped the notebook in Equestria for one reason." "What was that?" Sakujo asked. "I was bored and wanted something to preoccupy myself," Sin said starting to chuckle, "Why else would the instructions be written that a pony could understand them, and if you recall the notebook was just lying there, you just happened to find it first." "Well even if I wasn't chosen I'm still have big plans for this notebook." Sakujo said turning on the T.V. "Well since we're going to be together for quite some time, what exactly do you have in mind for this notebook." Sin asked. "Well since you ask, this world has become rotten with crime and the blood of the innocent is being spilt, and with the notebook I'm going to bring Equestria into a new golden age only populated by good, hard working ponies." "This can only be achieved when the wicked has been washed away," Sakujo said quite proud of himself. "And after all the evil ponies are dead you'll be the last wicked pony left." Sin said. "Untrue, I'm going to rid the world of evil and when that's done…I will become the god of the new world." Sakujo finished. "Perhaps I misjudged you, this has just gotten a lot more interesting," Sin said lying down on the bed. The T.V. then went to a breaking news report. "Attention we are going to a special announcement concerning the murder of criminals." A news pony said. Sin got up from the bed and said "This has to be interesting." Sakujo turned up the T.V. and listened. "Before we begin with this announcement, the official name for this killer was been unanimously decided as Necare, a word deriving from the Latin word meaning murder. Now we switch to the special broadcast. The screen switched to a white desk, a few moments later a white stallion with a black mane got to the desk and sat down. "Hello, before I begin, I want everyone one to know that I believe that Necare is watching this at this very moment." The stallion said. "My name is Swift Specter, more commonly known as the detective S."
In Celestia's study.
Celestia, Luna, Twilight, Applejack and Fluttershy were watching this broadcast. "What is he doing?" Twilight asked shocked. "I have no idea," Celestia said as they continued to watch. "Necare you may think that you are justice but by senselessly killing you are nothing more than a murderer and a villain and you will be caught and I will personally see to it that you are hung." Swift Specter finished. On the other side of the T.V., Sakujo said nothing until he lost it. "I am no villain, I kill for justice and the lives of good innocent ponies, those that defy me are evil and they deserve to die!" Sakijo screamed. He picked up the Death Note and quickly wrote the name Swift Specter. The stallion on the screen said nothing. "36…37…38…39 …40." Sakujo counted down. Just like clockwork the Stallion on screen grabbed his heart and let out a dying scream right before collapsing on the desk. "Ha, you should have stayed down, this could have so easily been avoided, but no you had to defy me and now you're dead." Sakujo said laughing at the dead Stallion on the screen. The screen suddenly went white with an old style S on it. Before too long an alternated voice began to speak. "Well, I have to admit I had my doubts, but it's clearly plain to me that I have to accept what just saw." The voice said. "What the hell is this?" Sakujo asked. "I am the real S; the stallion that you just killed was a death row inmate. Necare you can kill without even being present to the murder. You see this was a plan to see what I could discover from you." "For example while this was said to be an Equestrian broadcast the truth is that this was only broadcasted in the towns of Canterlot and Ponyville." "Whhhat," Sakujo said becoming scared. "Now that's established try to kill me." S yelled. Sakujo lifted up his notebook but then realized he was powerless to do anything. After about a minute of waiting, S spoke again. "Strange, you seem to need to see you victim's face in order to kill them, thanks for the info." S said. "HAHAHAHAHA" Sin chuckled, "he got you good." Sakujo shot him an angry look and got him to stop laughing. "Listen Necare, it's only a matter of time before I discover your true identity and when I do, I'm going to personally send you off to hell." S said before ending the broadcast. "Well, S you're only going to live so long as I don't know your identity and that moment is rapidly approaching. Sakujo said aloud holding a wicked grin on his face. "Wow two mortal enemies, locked in a battle to discover the other's identity first and the one who loses theirs will die; forget humans, ponies are much more entertaining than they ever were." Sin said.
Celestia's study.
"I can't believe that he pulled that off," Fluttershy said still scared from watching Swift Specter die on T.V. "Yes his methods may be unconventional but they certainly get results." Luna said before her horn lit up with a bright yellow flash. "Whoa, princess, how'd y'all do that? Applejack asked. Celestia spoke up, "I didn't, S did. It means that he is ready to meet the rest of you." "Okay when do we leave?" Twilight asked. "Right now," Luna said flashing her horn and teleporting everypony out off the room.
Sweet chapter two done. I'm in a contradiction on whether trying to pursue this story for a while or go work on Twilight's Foal. I don't know you tell me. Next time on the Notebook, the princesses take the three elements to meet the detective S, and Sakujo discovers that a new arrival in town maybe more than just a drifter rolling through. Till next time.