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Marco pov

As we left the castle (well what was left of it) I was holding Star's hand and still getting over the whole being kidnapped thing. I was being quiet. Star tugged on my hoodie gently just enough to get my attention. I smiled a fake smile at her, still debating if I should tell her what Toffee had said.

"Hey, Star, who were the original five Butterflies?" I asked hoping she wouldn't ask many questions.

"Uh, they were the first holders of the wand, and they are the most powerful Butterflies ever. Why, what's up?" Star said having that adorable puzzled face she gets sometimes.

"Oh, uh, how do I word this… Toffee said YOU were more powerful them all of them combined." I said waiting for her to say something.

Star pov

I was shocked when Marco said that, and I wasn't sure how to respond.

"Let's go to Mewni and ask my parents," I said to Marco, He was looking at me, but he wasn't hearing me then. He swayed back and forth for a few moments and fell down. I grabbed him before he hit the ground.

"MARCO!" I said shaking him. I felt the blood on his neck. I grabbed my scissors and cut a portal to the castle. I picked up Marco, ran him to the medical wing of the castle, and sat him on a bed.

I started crying. "MOM!" I screamed, holding Marco and praying he was alive. A doctor ran in with Mom and Dad.

"Star! What happened?" Mom asked as Dad sat by Marco, looking at him.

"Marco got kidnapped by this lizard named Toffee, and when I found him I became a butterfly like you except I was all gold. I fired a giant beam into Toffee, disintegrating him. Marco told me Toffee said that I was stronger than the Original 5. Then he collapsed, and we came here." Mom just stared at me with a blank expression.

The doctor interrupted: "He will be fine, he just had a small concussion."

Mom looked at me before walking away telling Dad to come with her and bring a lot of guards. I looked at her.

"Mom, what's wrong?" I said grabbing her hand.

"Star, I made a deal with Eclipsa after my mother died that when Toffee dies, she goes free," Mom said with a monotone voice and a visibly scared look on her face.

"Are you saying I just set Eclipsa free?" I said, starting to cry again.

Mom looked me dead in the eyes. "Yes." Then she turned and left with Dad and the doctor.

I turned to Marco, who was just getting up. "Stay here. Eclipsa is free, Marco," I say as I hear a chuckle behind me.

"S-s-star? Eclipsa is right there," he says pointing to a chair next to the door

Marco pov

I sat up as Star turned towards Eclipsa. I stepped in front of Star. Eclipsa sat there smiling.

"If you want Star, you have to go though me!" I said, getting into fighting stance. Eclipsa stood up, smirking, and walked towards me. She stopped so close to my face that I could feel the coldness of her breath.

"OK," Eclipsa said, throwing me though the brick wall. I tried to stand up but I felt my broken ribs and leg, and as I stood up Eclipsa lifted up more of the wall and dropped it on me. I was thinking to myself, "So this is the end."

I managed to get some words out before everything went black "Star, I love you," then nothing, just darkness. I wasn't sure if I was dead or alive or somewhere in between.

Star pov

I broke down crying then my anger took over again and I transformed into my butterfly form. I flew directly at Eclipsa, not giving her a chance to react, and carried her into the sky when the sun went black and I was as bright as a the sun. I was holding her by the neck "WHAT DO YOU WANT?!" I said in a demonic voice.

She suddenly started laughing. "To take my throne back."

"WHY DID YOU KILL MARCO?!" I screamed at her, crying again

She suddenly stopped laughing. "He isn't dead, but you don't realize he has magic-dark magic- darker than mine. But from watching the two of you for your whole lives, I realized you make his magic light. The two of you are stronger than me Moon or any of the Butterflies, and that, Star, is why I'm here to help you bring peace across all the dimensions. Now please let go; I can't breathe," Eclipsa said going into her butterfly form. I looked at her, confused.

"I thought you were evil," I said, still really confused

"I know. Glossaryck and I knew this was coming, and it's been planed the whole time for you to unlock your powers and for Marco to unlock his. "Speaking of Marco…" she said, flying down to the castle with me following.

Marco pov

I saw darkness and then there was… me standing there with wings and fire coming out of my hands and a staff with a red sun on the top. I touched him and he fused into me. Then my eyes opened and all the rubble on me exploded off as Star and Eclipsa landed. Then, Moon flew in through the window. Star hugged Eclipsa. "Thank you, great-great-great-grandma! You unlocked his magic!" Moon was so confused as to why Star was hugging Eclipsa and Marco was floating with red flames around him.

I saw Moon cough. I looked at her and shrugged. "Uh, Star, what are you doing" I said floating over to her.

Moon added, "And why does Marco have magic?"

Star looked at Moon. "Oh, it was this big plan made by Grandma and Glossaryck to bring peace to Mewni."

Moon and I looked at each other, turning back to normal people as Star and Eclipsa did the same.

"So you gonna explain this to me, Star?" I said hugging her.

"Well Eclipsa and Glossaryck are going to teach us magic since we are the two strongest beings in the Galaxy so yeah you and your family is moving here with meeeee!" I looked at her, but actually understood what she meant.

"Ok," I said as Moon walked over and hugged the three of us.

Moon looked at Eclipsa. "Why do they need to train?"

"Because a great evil is coming. One from another dimension. One they cannot face alone."

And that's it let me know if I should continue or not. Just let me know. Until next time, my dudes.