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Getting To Know Marisa
Marisa woke up to the sun light coming from the window, she tried to figure out how she got here in this place called "Peach Creek". She was wearing her normal clothes that needed to be cleaned but it was her only set. She looked around the guest room there was all kinds of trinkets and weird furniture, things she only heard about from Rinnosuke. Marisa "This really is the outside world... but how did I get here? Did something happen to the border? ze". Before she put more thought into it there was a sound that came from outside the window a kid with a red cap was yelling something about his bike that had crash into a fire hydrant. Marisa "I might need to find out more about this world before I try finding a way back..." this place was a lot more different then gensokyo and she couldn't let anyone find out about it unless she needed them to. She grabbed her broom that was resting against a corner and decided to explore the house.
Heading down stairs she could see Edd doing some chores she decided not to bother him. She went to read some of the books she found in a room while exploring the house, hoping to learn something about the world she is now in, after looking trough like five books Marisa learned nothing useful not even one thing about those new devices she had never seen before. Marisa "There is a ton information but nothing about what i need to know...sigh i wonder if i can even get back home, I hope Reimu is looking for me ze"putting the books back where she got them she leaves the room and decided to try and take another look around the house. She eventually ran into Edd who questioned her being up with her injuries she just told him to take it easy and said that she was going to look around abit.
Once Marisa got outside she looked around abit as she walked till she saw the kid into a cap fixing his bike talking with a tomboy like girl "Everyone I seen had clothes alot different then mine. I stick out like a rainbow color kedama."(hairball) The tomboy girl saw her and waved to Marisa, she came closer and said "Hey you must be new here I'm Nazz and this is Kevin" she said as she pointed to the kid working on his bike. Marisa"Nice to meet you, I am Marisa Kirisame ze." After they talked for abit Nazz took her shoping for some more"stylish" clothes Marisa picked out a black T shirt and a long black and white skirt, she put her spellcards and hakkero in a small bag nazz picked out for her.
On the way back Marisa thought she saw a lady she knew with green hair with a blue dress but when she looked again she wasn't there. "Was that...? no it couldn't have...she been gone for a long time but there's no way she would be in the outside world..." Nazz"Hey Marisa you alright?" Marisa"Huh? Oh ya i am fine ze" there was no way that spirit was here, she didn't think much more about it on the rest of the way. Once they got back to the cult-de-sac Marisa went to find Edd hoping she could find out more about this world, after she found out he was the smartest around here from Nazz. The rest of the day was spent talking with Edd, careful not to show that she was a "outsider" and that she didn't know what half the things he was talking about meant.
Who was the lady in blue that Marisa saw? Will she see her again? Will I ever make the chapters longer then this?
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