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Okay now for chapter 2.

It had started snowing when he reached the house.

Their house, if you could call it a house, faced the ocean on a cliff side. It was 3 stories tall with dark bricks and white columns. My mom had told me once that they were rich.

But I didn't think she meant this rich. I mean the garage is as big as my entire apartment. "Annabeth, show Percy to his room, while we start on dinner ok?" Mrs. chase said.

"ok Sue" Annabeth went around to the trunk and pulled out one of my suitcases I was to busy staring at t to realize I should do something

Annabeth lugged a suitcase up "Um, Percy a little help over here?"

I shook my head trying to stay focused. She was huffing and struggling to pick up the other. "oh, um I got it." I said at reached for it to.

She pulled harder. "no, it's ok I just need to get it unstuck- Whoa!" she pulled a little too hard and the suitcase went flying spilling my stuff everywhere.

Annabeth wasn't spared. She was pulled over by it's weight and flung right into me. We both went sprawling to the ground.

I opened my eyes. "ow, Shit my head." I moaned. Annabeth was on top of me. I blushed.

Then I felt her whole body tensed

"oh, sorry I just-" I started

she jumped to her feet. "i-its ok, sorry that was my fault." She helped my get up and we started putting away my stuff back. She lifted the photo of me and my mom. "is this her? Your mom I mean."

I quickly snatched the picture and shoved it into my hoodie pocket. "yea, but I don't wanna talk right now so can you just bring me to the room please."

I didn't mean to sound rude but I couldn't talk about her, I knew I would start crying and I didn't want Annabeth to see me as a crybaby, or feel sorry for me or whatever. I'd already had enough of that to last a lifetime, and it only started three months ago.

Annabeth stood back up. "oh um sure, here gimme one of those.

"no it's ok I got them." I argued.

"fine Mr. tough guy." she laughed. She was cute when she laughed. I shook my head again. No time for this I thought. "hey you ok?" she said concerned.

I bumped her with my hip. "yea. But we better start going if were gonna make it downstairs in time. Your house looks like a maze." She laughed again and led me inside.

Once we were inside Annabeth was immediately tackled by two little blonde hair boys. "hey Matthew, how you doing Bobby?" she said laughing and rubbing each one of there heads. "I'll play with you later but right now I got to take Percy to his room.

Matthew peered Around Annabeth and looked at me. "hi Percy! My daddy say's your gonna live with us now! Like a big brother!"

Bobby pulled Matthew's arm. "But I'm your brother."

"Percy can be my brother too and yours!" they both ran into the other room laughing a tripping over each other. Annabeth sighed.

"So," Annabeth said. "those are my twin brother's Matthew and Bobby, there six and a little crazy. Your room is upstairs across from mine, come on."

she led me upstairs through a labyrinth of hallways till finally we got to the two red doors across from each other. Annabeth pointed to the one of the left. "that's my room so yours is to the right."

I stared at the door's. "thanks Annabeth. I guess I'll see you at dinner."

She smiled. "probably." then she turned into the room closing the door behind her. Sighing I shoulder the other suitcase and walked into my new room.

It was at least four times the size of my old room. With white walls and carpet. It was totally empty except for a bed, dresser and an attached full body wall mirror. I stood in front of it and studied myself.

I had bags under my green eyes from lack of sleep, but besides that I looked ok I was dressed in a blue green shirt and striped black and white hoodie with black jeans.

I ran my fingers through my jet black hair, even though you couldn't tell I thought It was pretty greasy. My mom wouldn't even let me leave the house with hair like this. I would have to wash it tonight.

I went back to my suitcase and started putting clothes in the drawers. When I was done I went to my second suitcase which was filled with random keep sakes and other stuff.

I couldn't help but feel a little mad at Annabeth. When the suitcase had fallen some things had gotten muddy. I pulled out four swimming trophy's and put them on my dresser.

I won those on my school swim team's. I'm a high school sophomore and I was going to apply for the spring swim team at my school in new york.

I put the memory aside and kept unpacking. When I was at the bottom I pulled out a brown journal. My mom's I opened in and flipped through it real fast.

My mom had always dreamed of becoming a writer but she got stuck working at the candy shop on 5th avenue. She never seemed to mind. She would always come home with a smile on her face.

I Smiled thinking about all the memories of her work. When I was little she would always take me with her during the summer. On her breaks we would munch on blue jelly beans.

Maybe I would go visit her shop, some day. I unpacked the rest of my stuff and looked around. It was too plain, maybe they would let me paint the walls.

I looked at my watch. It was only 5:30, they probably wouldn't be done with dinner for a while. Maybe I should just take that shower.

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