Well now, chapter two rewrite! 4-4 I hope it goes well and that you all will like it! Here are the bios,
Ambercatlucky2
Mew or mermaid: Mermaid
Name: Miki
Gender: Girl
Age: 15
Personality: Miki can be a little all over the place, from gentle, kind and caring, to a hyper spaz case. Sometimes she speaks, or acts without thinking, because when she's by herself, and not with her friends, she thinks a lot, and usually, she thinks of really heavy stuff. She can't remember where she comes from at first. But eventually it all comes back to her. She is very loyal, and determined, sometimes to the point of down right stubbornness. When she feels like she's messed up she feels really bad and will stop mid-fight to apologize, she hates it when she hurts her friends and loved ones.
Appearance: She has silver colour hair when she's in mermaid form, it's in pigtails and is tinted an aquamarine blue at the bottom, she had similar coloured eyes, silver and aqua blue. On land her hair is dark chocolaty, and reaches just below her breasts. Her eyes are crystal clear, and deep brown, that is almost black.
Kisshu Beyond Birthday
Ok, my chara is a mermaid and she has long black hair and a red tail and black top : )
Her eyes are red and she has a black necklace and her top is a bikini top.
She is very hyper and enjoys winding people up.
She is 14 and her pearl's black, her name is Amaya.
Narrator's POV
The girl swam through the dark water quietly, her red tail flashed scarlet in the sunlight. Her black hair gleamed as it flowed past down to about the end of her tail, turning back quickly she swam faster. She was running away from her palace.
Amaya's POV
The money I had from selling the single gold coin I had was almost gone. I grimaced; I needed to find another mermaid princess soon. Before everything went to hell.
I entered the arcade, it was probably not the best place to look, but, she needed some time to let her stress out before she exploded. Besides, lots of other girl mermaids who had come to land long before she had said that arcades were lots of fun. So maybe she could find someone here after all.
I looked around until something caught my eye, it was the game where you were supposed to throw the ball into the target to knock it over, and if you could hit all the targets down you would get the prize.
"Simple" I murmured, even though I knew it was sure to be rigged against the player. The man running the stall looked mildly bored, and then he noticed I'd looked in the direction of the stall.
"Hey, miss care to play?" he offered,
"Sure" I replied casually
"Alright, it's five tokens per play." He explained.
I smirked, here was my stress release.
"Token?" I asked him, knowing what the small bronze game coins were.
"Oh, uh, they're these little coins that you can get from the front desk." He told me, trying to clarify it for me.
"Huh… I don't have any tokens… could you give me some? Please?" I asked him, widening my eyes slightly to make them appear larger, and mildly vulnerable, I tilted my head almost undetectably, and pouted my lips a little, my puppy dog face.
"I can't do that…" he replied, by the look on his face it seemed to be hard for him to refuse.
"Please?" I asked again, quickly blinking twice
"Well, maybe," he muttered, considering it for a few long seconds, "ok, here" he reached a handful of tokens over to me, I accepted them, then tried the game, I hit all but one down.
"Darn…" I commented, I smiled slightly towards the man, then left. I wandered in and out of the crowd of people within the gaming store. I eventually made my way towards the front desk without the game runner guy seeing me.
"Please sir, can you help me? I was just playing on some of the arcade machines when the man, who was running the stall that you throw the balls into the targets, called out to me.
He put a handful of tokens into my hand and made an extremely inappropriate comment about my chest, I didn't know who I was supposed to go with this kind of thing… but you looked in charge, so I thought that you would be the one who would know what to do."
The man who ran the front desk seemed to be very serious about his job, he looked concerned as I told my tale, and then assured me that consequences would be delivered and then he gave me compensation tokens.
I wandered around the arcade for a while, playing a sundry of games, I had already spent probably too many hours her than I should have. I sighed, and put my hand in my jeans pocket, there was still a lot more tokens left to use.
Wondering what I should do my hand compulsively went to finger my clamshell locket, sometimes when thinking, I would play with it, opening it and closing it ever so careful of the precious item inside.
I tried to touch my pearl gently, to feel the reassurance, and hope that it brought. When my fingertips touched the spot where my pearl was supposed to stay, my blood ran cold. It was gone.
I tried not to panic; it had never fallen out before. But where could it have gone? I desperately looked about the arcade, and to my bad luck I found it; as the prize for winning the ball throwing game.
Grudgingly I went back, as much as I didn't want to go back there, I needed the pearl more. I hoped that the guy didn't hold grudges.
"Hey girl, get lost, I don't need your trouble." He said as soon as I walked up to the station, clearly he had been warned about his sexual harassing of the customers.
"Relax," I said, fishing five tokens out of my jeans pocket, "I've just come to play the game."
"You lost last time, what's so interesting about it to you now?" he asked suspiciously.
"Your prize sucked last time. Where'd you find that pearl anyways?" I commented
"A prize is a prize" he shrugged, "I found it a little after you decided to play bitch."
"So, you gonna give it back to me or not?" I asked him.
"This is yours?" he asked, pointing to my inky black pearl that glistened in shades of black that were beautiful, and rare to find.
"Yes, it's mine. I dropped it when I left here the first time." I told the guy.
"Well, who says I want you to have it back?" he asked meanly,
"Well, who likes sexual harassment claims?" I retorted, he simmered for a few seconds.
"Who'd believe you, over me? I have a clean record you know." He told me
"Me. The young sexually harassed girl." I said, then before he could figure out what I planned to do, I grabbed his hand and put it high up on my arm. I began to scream.
"DON'T TOUCH ME YOU PERVERT!"
"You little bitch." He snarled,
"Pearl please." I told him patronizingly
"Well then, you'll just have to win the game, now won't you?" He sneered. I sigh inside my head, and rolled my eyes.
"Winning your lame game will be easy." I smirked, even though I knew it would be hard to win, especially with all the rigging he was bound to do.
"Five tokens then." he held his hand out, and I deposited five of the little coins into his hands.
Then ever so carefully I picked up the ball and threw it as hard as I could, smashing it into the first target. The target barely fell. Great.
With each toss I had to throw it harder and harder in order to actually knock down the targets. Finally, after much work, I hit them all down, the last target falling with a sickening crack.
"Looks like I win" I said expectantly.
"I'm the game runner and, it looks to me like you didn't hit them all down." He said with a staged yawn.
"What do you mean?" I growled
"I mean you missed one" he said
"But I didn't" I snapped back angrily.
"True, you did win, but I'm not going to give it to you. You want to mess with me? I can play the same game. Oh, and don't bother screaming again, there is no one at the front desk right now to fall for your crap." I turned and looked; sure enough the front desk guy had left for a shift change. I closed my eyes and hoped for something to help me get my pearl back.
"Hey, I'm Miki." A girl suddenly announced. I turned behind me; ready for a fight, but it was just another teenaged girl. I introduced myself.
"Do you want some help?" she asked bluntly, she must have noticed our argument. I told her that if she could, her help would be great, I explained the problem, and Miki protested to the guy the same thing I had. I'd hit all the targets down, and he was lying.
This seemed to anger the brown haired girl, she stalked forward and with a maddened look in her eyes she told him off, and said that if he gave it back, I'd never bother him again. Which, to me, seemed like a great plan; I'd get my pearl back, and never have to deal with the jerk again.
Wordlessly the man handed me back my pearl, I took it from him and held it close, breathing a sigh of relief for its safety. I told this new girl that the pearl had originally been mine, and that the man just hadn't wanted to give it back to me, because I'd caused him a bit of trouble. I also thanked her.
She told me that helping her hadn't been a problem that she knew how important my pearl must be to me. I looked at her quizzically; there was no way in hell she could know how important my pearl was.
That was when she lifted the necklace cord that lay around her neck up from under the neckline of her shirt. Revealing an all too familiar shaped locket, only her locket's cord had three pearls going up from the shell on either side, before turning into black string. The two outer of these pearls were light silver, and the middle an aquamarine blue.
She opened her locket and gently took out an iridescent silver pearl that flashed and swirled with blue every once and a while.
I looked at her stunned, she was a mermaid too? She didn't look much the type, especially since the colour of her hair on land was so much different than the silver and blue it'd have to be once transformed, or within water.
In fact, I had never heard of a silver and blue pearl princess before. I was about to ask her where we could talk here without everyone listening in on us and hearing our secret, but her eyes lit up almost mischievously.
"Would you like to do karaoke with me?" she asked a knowing sparkle in her eyes. I was confused for a minute, but slowly what she said sunk in and made sense. In the karaoke room we would be all alone and could talk about what we wanted with no prying eyes, or ears.
In the line up for the activity, I risked talking a little about it with her. I asked if she really was one too, referring to being a mermaid. She told me that she hadn't expected to meet another mermaid quite so soon, from first coming up on to land.
I agreed with her and commented about how unlikely that actually was considering that there was only seven mermaid princesses, I casually commented to her that there were actually eight, that my kingdom, was usually ignored by all the others.
She smiled a knowing smile to me and told me that she knew of my kingdom and that she had once been made to learn about every single mermaid kingdom, she seemed a bit embarrassed that she would know all that, I looked at her incredulously, that she would know all that was a bit crazy, her kingdom had to be big on knowledge if they made their mermaid princesses, and who knows who else study all of the kingdoms of the sea, even the minor ones.
I was only made to know the seven main oceans and their kingdoms, the North Pacific whose colour was pink, South Pacific whose colour was yellow, the North Atlantic whose colour was Aquamarine, the South Atlantic whose colour was green, the Artic whose colour was indigo, the Antarctic whose colour was purple, and the Indian Ocean whose colour was orange.
My own kingdom wasn't very well known, but maybe, if I was lucky, this girl, and more of the princesses would help me and my kingdom. I closed my eyes, and I hoped that everyone was holding up alright.
When I opened them again I found that it was our turn to go into a karaoke room we talked a bit more than sang some, and joked some, in the end before we got kicked out for spending the max amount of time we could in one room we ended up in a song fight, over who was the better singer. It felt good to laugh again.
As we walked out of the room I asked her what sea was from, and she admitted that she had no clue which sea she was actually from. She admitted that she'd only woken up a few days ago with foggy memory swimming to the beach, carried by the tides.
I told her how I thought that it really sucked that she couldn't remember her past well, even though, forgetting my past would be a welcomed relief from every thing that had transpired.
She seemed to sense that I'd gone through some rocky things, and could use a break from the heavy, life or death thinking. So she asked if I cared to get some food, I nodded, it'd been a while since I'd eaten, and the hunger was starting to get to me.
She passed me a discount coupon that she had, had. I looked at her funny and asked her where she kept getting all these different coupons from, she had, had tickets for the karaoke earlier too.
She teased me with her answer, and my response to her answer. I teasingly called her horrible for setting me up to fail with her joke, but then she reminded me that she was buying us food, I laughed lightly and commented touché to her.
She then told me that she knew a good place that wasn't too far from here, and then with a quick 'follow me!' she took off, leaving me to catch up to her, which I did. And, like she had promised, the place she knew was close by.
"What do you want to get?" she asked me after we had poured over the menus for some time.
"Could we get some fries?" I asked her, she nodded enthusiastically, before adding her own opinion.
"And, we'll get ice cream and drinks too! What kind of each do you like?"
"Oh, I like chocolate ice cream, and coke zero. What about you? What do you like?"
"I like chocolate too! But I like pepsi… coke drinker" she teased,
"Pepsi drinker!" I teased back,
She grinned "It's the same thing!"
"I know!" I grinned back, she took both of our tickets and went up to the service counter and explained out coupons until they took it, then she ordered our food, then she came and sat back down.
When she had left to get the food sorted out I noticed the two girls who were sitting at the table beside ours. Like us, they seemed to be different then most other humans. And they both wore diamond shaped pendants with small designs on them that brought the animal wolf to mind.
"Hey Miki, is it just me or do those two seem different to you too?" I asked
"I'd say that they do seem awfully different, they could be mermaids, I mean, with the pendants and all." She replied
"Yes, but, no look at their necklaces, they're different than ours, no pearls."
"I don't always keep my pearl in my pendant; sometimes I put it elsewhere for safe keeping. Still, we should ask them about it indirectly, or we take them somewhere to question them or something." She told me.
"Well, we can't just randomly start questioning them, indirectly or not, that would be too weird, they wouldn't answer our questions, or agree to be questioned." I responded warping my tone at the thought of taking two random girls and questioning them
"Your right, how about we follow them then put them into some sort of dangerous situation?" Miki suggested
"Let me get that right, you want to stalk them then try to kill them?" I asked incredulously at her manner.
"Well, when you put it like that…" she trailed off, looking hard in thought for a second before continuing, "but, you know, if they are normal, wecould just save them!"
I sighed in resignation, "Alright Miki, but if they are mermaids or whatever and they get mad you take the blame."
"Fine, fine I can manage that." She assured
"Okay then, can we finish our food before we go?" I asked, she nodded and we focused on our food.
Narrator's POV
Soon after the girls had finished their snack, the other two mysterious girls stood up and left, the two mermaids quietly followed them, until they hit the perfect chance…
Then they pushed them off a cliff. And as it turned out Miki and Amaya's suspicions were right, for as they began to fall the two girls clutched their pendants and shouted words that were lost to the wind before transforming.
When the light of transformation faded, they both had large wolf ears and tails. One with golden eyes and twin Katana swords turned to face the cliff wall and ran up it grabbing the other falling wolf girl who was donned in white with a large wickedly curved blade, and soon they were both back at the top of the cliff.
"AND WHAT EXACTLY WERE YOU TRYING TO ACOMPLISH BY THROWING US OFF A CLIFF?" shouted the golden eyed one, her red wolf ears flicking.
"We just wanted to see…" Miki started, but the white wolf girl cut her off.
"You wanted to see of we would die or transform? You know it's rude to push people like that? And what if we hadn't been able to save ourselves? You could have KILLED US."
"Well… we, we would have saved you." Miki answered timidly, for all her bravado earlier she seemed to become shamed and withdrawn.
"Look kid," she said in a 'get real' tone, "you wouldn't have been able to save us." Her comment angered the silver mermaid.
"Really, unable to save you? I think I could of saved you, unless you're heavier then you appear." Snapped Miki
"So you always go around and push people off cliffs and then call them fat?" she asked, a sinister glare appearing on her face.
"You're just dense, you idiot. I asked if you were heavier than you appeared, you just called yourself fat." Miki replied to her,
"You're so lucky you're human, or I swear to god, I would plunge my sword right into that cocky little body of yours."
"You think you could beat me in a fight?"
"Damn rights I could."
"Alright then, let's see it." The mermaid challenged, then, as the white wolf sliced her blade through the air in a clean sweep, faster than any normal human could have done, but Miki was also faster than any normal human, she leapt into the air, and as she dodged Haven's attacks she shouted
"Silver pearl voice, transform!" She was soon joined by Amaya who despite what she had said earlier wanted to help her.
"Black pearl voice, transform!" A light enveloped both of the girls, then not too differently then the wolves had, they transformed into their idol forms.
Miki was wearing a silvery blue dress that ended in four layers of ruffles at mid thigh. She wore silver heels that consisted of a lot of straps, and her hair had transformed to waist length pig-tails that were silver tipped in cerulean-aquamarine blue, her pearl was embedded in a headset, she also had a thin whip that was holstered around her arm.
Amaya was wearing a dark, dark black tight fitting tank top, and red skinnies, with it she wore skater shoes. And her hair had managed to turn an even darker black, like the midnight sky with no stars or moon present; it went down to her waist. Like Miki she also had a headset where her pearl resided, and also like her friend, she had a weapon other than her singing, a small pistol. That was holstered to her arm.
The wolves looked surprised at their transformation for only a moment before they prepared themselves for a fight. Shiva gripping her katanas tightly, and Haven setting her stance and staring intensely.
However, little did either group know, another was watching their fight. Her iced blue eyes stared at them and she spoke coolly and quietly.
"What have we here, two mermaids who are obviously untrained, but powerful and two Mew mews that've strayed away from their pack? This fight could get intense… should I stop it?"
Mleh… Edit and edit and edit… -.-; I feel fried! Can't wait till I don't have to edit anymore chapters… actually, I think I'm only going to edit the first four chapters, the fourth chapter isn't gonna be edited that much though, just mildly, pretty much saying the same thing! But, ya, if you're ever bored… XP please review! …unless you've reviewed this chapter before, and it won't let you… so… uh… … See you next chapter! =^-^=