Is it okay, if I update early? Thought so

What Will Happen

It all happened so fast. With, the kidnapping, the pain, and the Right now, I'm lying in the park. You think that's nice, did I mention that I'm dying, and it's raining on top of everything else. Well, it's true. I've been gone for over two weeks, I haven't seen my friends and family since then, and I've been held prisoner by the few people I hate most, The Black Dragon.

Up until now I would have never thought that they would do something so serious like this.

I was cold. The winter weather blew through what was left of my clothes. I could feel blood dripping down my body.

I knew I was in pain, but I couldn't feel it, I was too num, frozen, you might say. Suddenly, I heard someone calling my name. No, four someones, who were they?

Then I could hear what they were saying. They were calling my name, Kim, Eddie, Milton, and Jerry. They found me, but they were a little too late. I was dying and even if they did realize that I was within hearing distance, they couldn't save me.

"Jack!" Kim cried as her and the gang ran up to me. I could feel someone cleaning the cuts on my arm. Then I heard Kim's voice,

"Jack, it's okay, were here. We're here to help you. You're going to be fine." I couldn't see her, but from the tone of her voice, I knew that I was in pretty bad shape.

Then I could hear Jerry, "Jack, if you can hear me, do something. Move, open your eyes, make a sound!" I sorely groaned.

"Jack, were gonna take you home, okay? So we have to pick you up, and were going to try not to hurt you." Eddie said.

I felt them pick me up, this time, I did feel pain. Utter pain, I cried out softly.

"I know, Jack, it's going to hurt. But we're going to make you feel better, alright?" I could barely hear Milton say.

I opened my eyes slightly. I looked at Jerry; he was crying a little and he looked at me. He sighed and looked up.

I turned my head to look at Eddie. He was acting tuff, so he didn't cry, but he looked like he was about to break down.

I looked over to Milton, he was bawling. I couldn't blame him; I would too, if he were in my place.

Then, I looked at Kim. She was crying to, but she didn't look at me. I turned my head back and closed my eyes.