5 Reviews on the first chapter. Not bad, wanted more, but still I'm happy. So I'll try to write more for the readers to read and I'll construct some nice fight scenes for you. It has also come to my attention not a lot of you know what exactly Soul Nomad is. So I'll say this, you've played Disgaea: Hour of darkness right? I hope so, if not go out and buy/rent it if you can. Soul Nomad & the World Eaters just so happens to have been made by the same people. And I submit to you. Get. It. The game has a pretty unique fighting system, and expands on a few things of the other games made by Nippon Ichi. That and it is funny...any and all times Gig has something to say I swear you'll laugh. Even if it's just a bit, there is rarely a time you won't laugh.
Plain and simple.
But for those who can't get their hands on the game I'll just share what I know, since I have yet to beat the game.
Gig is an incredibly powerful being. Leave it to say he can not(I repeat) Can not be destroyed by anyone of equal or lower strength than he. Now, since he is the most powerful being on Earth, or in this case the Elemental Countries, he can not die. And he knows it. Now in the story of Soul Nomad Gig encounters one person able to fight him to a point where he is weak enough to Kill. This person in turn, dies as well. But Gig takes this chance to simply shove his own soul into an Onyx sword. Now this shows two things. 1. Gig can seal himself into inanimate objects even when literally dead. 2. Though Gig was "dead" his soul survived along with all of his power.
The one who fought Gig seemed to have the same power and somehow survived as well for a hundred or so years keeping watch over the sword. She later gives it to the main character of Soul Nomad.Gig makes many attempts to take the main characters body for himself, but is unable to. The reason(I do not know) I guess must be the red crystal used to seal his soul to the Main characters own soul. But if the main character relinquishes his body to Gig, his soul is destroyed into nothingness and Gig takes the body for his own.
In my story, Gig encounters the Kyuubi who is on equal ground with him and they fight. We all know the Kyuubi no Yoko can not be killed as it will merely be reborn after dying, thus why it was sealed into Naruto. But Gig is not reborn, he simply shoves his soul into something else. In this case as well, he sealed himself into an onyx sword which the Kyuubi, after being reborn, hides in an underground temple in Hi no Kuni. Put two and two together and follow me from there.
Now, enough chit-chat, I've wasted enough type. Story time betches.
Naruto, feeling something odd tingling in his eyes, quickly covered his face. He could faintly hear Ino squeal somewhere behind him. Hand still on the door he stood through the storm and twisted chakra flooding out of the room and straight at Ino and himself.
It burned, to be mild.
His unprotected fingers, ears, nose, neck, everything...they all burned like hell. Naruto could almost feel his flesh peeling off. And then it stopped, not abruptly...just like it got bored and settled down.
Uncovering his eyes he watched as the visible chakra floated and drifted about, covering them both in a literal blanket of chakra. It felt heavy.
"N-Naruto...what was that?"
The shorter blond spared his teammate a weak glance. "How should I know Ino?"
She opened her mouth to say something but shut it when Naruto left her behind to enter the room, the door he was holding open slammed shut behind him.
"Wow." Naruto mumbled, ignoring the loud slamming of the door behind him. He was too interested in what was in the room. The room itself was pretty boring. Old crumbling walls. Cobwebs out the wazoo. A huge-ass, but very unseen, spider. Naruto shivered oddly...he felt like he was being watched...by four or five different people.
No, he didn't see the spider eying him hungrily. Even if he did he'd be staring too hard at the friggin sweet sword floating in front of him.
Floating. Literally fucking floating.
Naruto could feel, no screw that, he could see the chakra keeping this thing up.
So he took it. Who wouldn't? Honestly? Yeah...didn't think so.
And that's when his nerve endings pulled a classic 'paper bag full of dog shit on fire' on him. The shit being his organs, the paper bag being his flesh, and the fire/foot combo being the swords tainted chakra. His word was on fire, his eyes saw stars, his jaw clinched painfully, and he bite right through his tongue.
In the back of his head a voice cackled insanely. The pressure behind his eyes threatened to shoot his visual aids out of their sockets. Luckily(Or maybe not) He noticed a glowing red crystal barreling toward him.
It impaled him of course.
"At least the pain stopped." He muttered falling to his back and into unconsciousness.
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To be frank, Gig was pissed. He hated everything right now, not that it was any different from most days, but today was a special case. Today marked his 13th year stuck in this stupid sword with no one to torture.
Grunting he flexed his immense power, flooding the cramped room with his tainted essence. And then something interesting happened.
Someone took the sword. Much to Gig's delight.
He felt the connection and couldn't help but cackle at the thought of a new body, his chakra flooding whoever it was with pain. But the pain stopped when he felt something stop him from taking over...and that was not cool. "Son of a-" he growled, reaching out and yanking on whoever touched the sword.
Much to his surprise it was he who was pulled.
Gig blinked in barely suppressed confusion as he found himself in a sewer...of anything that a mind could look like...but a sewer? He cursed foully under his breath and took in his surroundings.
"Oh...you've got to be kidding me! My luck ain't that crappy is it?" He growled, his eyes falling on a huge gate. But it wasn't the gate that irked him, but what was in the gate.
"The Kyuubi no fuckin' kitsune. Wow, and I thought my life was in the crapper." He grinned at the foxes sleeping form. He, of course, had not forgotten how he was royally screwed those years ago. But now revenge was within his grasp, he'd simply need to walk through the gate and..."Huh?"
Gig sensed something approaching. And that something pushed him...into a wall. "What the fu-" he managed to get out before the wall opened up into a door and locked him in a tiny, cramped room. Not only that but he could feel his power and influence being pulled away from him.
And then he fainted. But in a very coughmanly way.
"...Bout time. I really didn't want to deal with him right now..." Kyuubi groaned, it's eyes peeking open.
Naruto gave it an odd look. "Huh? Who?"
"...When did you get here?"
"Just now...I assumed you called me."
The Kyuubi gave what resembled a shrug, "Maybe I did, maybe I didn't. Fact is your here...so..."
"Sooo..." Naruto blinked. He could have sworn the fox had called him...he wouldn't be here otherwise right? Unless...
"Hey, Kitsune-teme, you know anything about a weird sword?"
Red eyes glared at the blond, "Oh yeah, real specific."
Naruto sighed and slowly massaged his temples. "Fine, fine. It's black...onyx black...long, er...it has three red gems near the base of the blade. Oh, and it gave off a wicked amount of chakra." The fox showed no signs of a reaction. "No idea, huh?" Another fox shrug. This time the fox gave Naruto a big, toothy grin.
"Maybe...maybe not."
"Ah screw it, whatever. I'll just keep it."
"Watch yourself...this thing sounds pretty powerful. Then again, I might be able to link it's chakra to you..."
"And why would you do that?" Naruto asked, skeptical. "Don't you want to be stronger?"
Naruto crossed his arm, his blue eye attempting to bore into the fox's own, "That's not what I meant. What do you get out of it?"
The Kyuubi smirked. It really seemed it's chakra was having an effect on the boys brain just as predicted. It wouldn't be long till the gaki was turned into a ruthless, efficient, bad ass killer...The fox almost giggled at the thought. If it was going to be stuck there until Naruto died it would hurt to have the kid strong enough to protect himself right? Then again it only took the kids presence to force Gig into a lock part of his mind...but it was only a matter of time till he got out.
"Hey, gaki...sit."
"What?"
"Sit...I wanna show you something." Though the way the fox was grinning freaked him out, Naruto sat. The fox was helping him, so whatever he was showing him might not be too bad.
But what he saw got him thinking one thing: When he exited his mind scape...the shit was going to hit the fan.
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When the door slammed behind Naruto, Ino was scared. Not for Naruto, she reminded herself, but the mere fact she was no alone in a creepy web-infested place. Not only that but it was uncomfortably hot, and Ino did not like to sweat.
She tried multiple times to get into the room Naruto had entered, but to no avail.
"Damn it Naruto..." She whined, pulling at the collar of her tank top to let air reach her skin. She had tinkered with the idea of letting her hair down but decided against it as it reminded her of Sakura. She missed her long hair...
Her slightly paled skin shown lightly with a thin layer of sweat as the heat seemed to increase. It wasn't this hot before...not until Naruto used that jutsu. Just what was it anyway? Ino had just thought it was just to have light when needed, but when he put it in the lanterns...
She sighed, too exhausted to think clearly. "Stupid Naruto. Stupid door." She mumbled. Watching silently Ino noticed the door opening...was 'stupid door' a password or something? No way...right?
Standing from her tired position against a wall she dragged herself to the door and peeked inside.
"Naruto?"
The blond was there...lying on the floor with a weird sword in his hands. But Ino didn't care about that...what she did care about was the bear-sized spider hovering over him, mandibles ready for a meal. She grimaced at the obvious drool splattering on Naruto's forehead protector.
"S-shit Naruto!" She called, trying to wake him up.
He didn't. But the spider stopped. Luckily it decided she looked pretty tasty.
Oh joy.
"Eeeeek!" Ino squealed as a think gob of stringy web wrapped around her leg, covered in drool from the spiders mouth. She was inwardly glad the web didn't come out the other end. That faded of course was the spider then proceeded to give 'birth' to five little, er, big baby spiders.
Each 'baby' was as big as a small dog.
Ino opened her mouth to scream again just as the web was pulled and she slipped onto her back, painfully, when a sickening crunch sound echoed through the room.
"Naruto!"
Indeed Naruto seemed to have returned to the waking world, his foot planted firmly on what Ino could only guess was one of the smaller spiders. The mother screeched horribly, advancing on the blond before halting. It eyed the black blade pointed at it, "Calm down. You'll get your turn next, bitch."
He turned and Ino could finally see him. His usually faint whisker marks were thicker, his eyes were slitted and blood red, and she could see a pointed canine poking out from under his upper lip. Naruto grinned wolfishly and blurred.
He felt...nothing. He didn't feel the wind passing by him, or the sword in his hands. Not even when he cut two more spiders in half with a single swing. Before the mother could move he curb stomped another and cleaved another crawling on Ino's leg.
"Naruto, how did you do that?"
"Practice."
The queen spider, lets call her Arachnid, had finally had enough. With a hiss she shot a long line of web at Naruto, ignoring and releasing Ino who quickly moved out of range. "Pfft. That's it?" Naruto smirked in amusement and caught the web. Just...caught it.
He pulled hard, loving how strong he felt, pulling the large spider, hissing and spitting, toward him. Quickly he lifted his arm over his head and swung it, and Arachnid, in a circle around his head.
"Are you serious? This is it? Shitting babies and shooting web? Ha!" Naruto roared, ending the sentence with a tug sending the heavy spider into a wall. With the force exerted the bug was crushed all at once, it's guts decorating the wall.
"Damn, it really was that easy?" he mumbled while pulling web off his hands. He was sort of disappointed.
But not for long. 'As long as I've got Naruto in here he can't stop me from using his body.' Yes, the Kyuubi was going to have some fun with little Ino...
(Caution:Lime-ish lemon/lemon-ish lime ahead...Skip if you wish.)
Ino stood dumbfounded at Naruto's odd show of strength. It left her staring, jaw to the floor and eyes the size of dinner plates. "N-Naruto?"
Her fellow blond merely smirked before vanishing like he had before and soon she felt the cold stone wall on her back, which felt nice against her heated sweaty skin. But she paid more attention to the pair of lips crushed roughly against her own. Naruto wasn't dumb enough to try anything on her...was he?
But the proof was in the pudding, his dry lips moving hungrily against her slick, glossed lips. Ino growled, firming her mind in the fact that Naruto, the dead last, was stealing her first kiss. The bastard! Only Sasuke-kun could do that!
She made to strike his chest but found that he had already pinned both hands beside her head with his own, his finger nails digging dangerously into her wrists. He really need to trim those...but enough off topic thoughts! She tried to struggle free or to at least get him to stop kissing her, since when did he have any interest in anyone other than forehead girl?
But it did feel nice...even though he was rough and unpracticed. She could feel his rushed breathing as he licked and nibbled her lips, and Ino couldn't deny it felt good. In an odd sort of way.
Naruto finally calmed down, sensing her weakness and simply kissed her...or rather, the Kyuubi kissed her, but she didn't know that. For now she thought it was Naruto, and that was enough.
His grip on her hands loosened slightly and he pushed forward, pressing his larger body against her smaller frame. She moaned into the kiss, her lips parting for a second, but a second was all he needed to slip his tongue past the barrier of her lips.
She seemed content, influenced by the waves of demonic chakra rolling off of him, though she wouldn't know what it was really. Her small tongue sought out his own and fought clumsily against the larger opponent...she tried futilely for dominance but Naruto wasn't going easy on her. And just as she was getting desperate Naruto pulled away with a smirk, leaving her out of breath, tired, and flushed.
"N-Naruto..." She mumbled, staring up into his hauntingly blue eyes which watched her with a mix of lust and amusement. Ino would have never thought Naruto knew anything about kissing...
He let her go now, Knowing she wouldn't resist, her arms falling to her sides limply. Growling, Naruto nibbled gently on her lower lip which was a bit swollen for the excessive kissing. Slowly he moved from her lip to her chin, and then to her neck trailing his tongue the whole way.
Finally he had his hands free and quickly enough he put them to use, his right hand cupped her left breast through the tank top that might as well not even be there, the left hand reach for her shorts. "A-ah, w-wait!" He chuckled heartily into her neck, and even more so when she moaned from it.
Did she really think she still had time to resist him? She hoped, but it was obvious that wasn't the case.
His fingers tugged at the elastic waistband, teasing and chuckling like it was funny. Ino tried to pout but what she got was something between defiance and utter submission. Though her lips curved downward in a slight frown her eyebrows arched up as if asking for more. And more he gave.
In and instant his hand was under her shirt and strangely enough he felt no bra...well she was just sleeping. He figured it would be sort of weird for a girl to wear her bra perpetually...
Shrugging he flicked her nipple expertly, a smirk drawing on his lips when she shivered and moaned while arching her chest into his hand. If this was how she reacted to something like this then what if her gave her lower half some attention? Seeking and answer Naruto slipped his free hand past the shirts and past the panties. He slowed his approach to admire the softness of her lower lips and how she shivered against him with a gasp.
He didn't expect much though, his index testing the wet feeling before prodding her slit. "N-Naruto! Stop i-it!" Ino made a show of trying to push him away but she could tell by the weak push that she didn't want him to go.
But he wasn't looking for sex...not yet anyway. Smirking he gave her breast a squeeze and her clit a nice rub and, after relishing in her moans, stopped.
He then knocked her out. He never said he'd "be gentle".
(Whatever the hell that was I just wrote...end)
Ino awoke, kicking and screaming at the top of her lungs, alerting her teammates who quickly came to her rescue. "Ino, what's wrong!?" Shikamaru peered around her tent looking for anyone who might had tried to harm his teammate. What he found was a sweaty Ino in dis-shelved clothes and with a face red as a tomato. "Shikamaru?" she asked shakily while eying Naruto who was next to him.
She quickly made a survey of her surroundings noticing she was back in her tent at the camp sight. The morning sun shown the clear confusion on her team's faces. "Where?"
"Huh? Your at the camp sight...you have a bad dream or something?"
Ino shot a glare at the Nara, "N-No!"
"Uh, Ino?"
She spun on Naruto. Though her memory was hazy she could remember exactly what had happened...to and extent. She remembered the searing kiss and his hands all over her-STOP! "What!?" She hissed.
He merely pointed. "Uh, your boob..."
Ino blinked dumbly finally noticing the slight blush on the boys' cheeks. She screamed and kicked the closest one in the groin.
Shikamaru dropped like a ton of bricks.
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The rest of the trip was rather uneventful, yet very awkward.
Ino had apologized for nearly sterilizing Shikamaru, and her tolerance of Naruto was at an all time low. She'd tell him to shut up even when he wasn't even talking. Naruto seemed aloof, ignoring Ino while chatting with Shikamaru along the way. They compared the jutsu they had learned during the trip, but when Shikamaru asked Naruto about his new sword Naruto seemed a bit taken.
"This? Oh, I found it when me and Ino got lost in a-"
"I knew it!" Ino roared, jabbing him in the chest. "I knew I wasn't dreaming you dirty motherf-"
"Of course it wasn't a dream."
Shikamaru and Ino stared openly at Naruto. Shikamaru due tot he fact Ino seemed to be trying to kill Naruto with her pokes and Ino because she never expected Naruto to admit to molesting her. Though she did enjoy herself...no one needed to know that though.
"We fell into the temple place and I when in and got the sword. Somewhere along the lines you were attacked by spiders which I fought off, though sadly I couldn't prevent on of them from biting you..."
"...Wait what? Biting?"
"Yeah, one of the smaller ones got you in the leg. It must have been poisonous because you were...hysterical afterward. You kept making weird noises." Naruto scrunched up his face, his signature 'thoughtful' look.
Ino glanced down at her legs and finally noticed her right ankle was wrapped in gauze. Blushing she realized they were all walking instead of hopping the trees like before and that she herself was limping."O-oh..." She muttered. 'It really was a dream?'
"Can we get going? The castle is right there." Shikamru pointed casually over his shoulder at the huge castle looming over them. Naruto nodded and took point again, Ino following slowly behind and Shikamaru taking up the rear.
"So Naruto...what was the jutsu you used?" Ino asked in hopes of ending the awkward silence.
"Hot box." He excluded 'no jutsu'.
"Say what?"
"One of the scrolls in the bag," Naruto jabbed his thumb over his shoulder at the bag hanging on his back," Help people make their own minor jutsu."
"So what does it do?" Now Shikamaru was interested.
Naruto grinned, " It's actually a torture ninjutsu. Though it can be used as a light source it actually is just a ball of heat and fire that keeps getting hotter and hotter. The longer it's active the hotter it gets...in enclosed spaces, like a room, it would keep getting hotter and hotter until whoever you trying to torture is nearly dehydrated. Then you just offer a drop of water and bang, you got a singing canary."
Shikamaru nodded, it wasn't something that required a lot of brain power to create but he had to admit Naruto had a good idea. "But it only works in enclosed spaces?" Naruto nodded. It didn't matter...he'd make something else later.
"So you guys been training too I hope."
Ino and Shikamaru shared a glance, "Yeah, why?" Ino frowned.
"Oh no reason...we're just being followed. I'm surprised neither of you noticed."
Ino almost tripped, "W-what!?"
Naruto didn't look back. "Just keep walking. Act cool."
Shikamaru was already acting as if he didn't hear a thing, but he could almost feel someone nearby. Naruto cut a right, going into the woods and the rest followed. They walked at a leisurely pace until they reached an open field.
Taking the bait their stalkers showed themselves with a rather boring appearance. "Halt! Your package are belonging to us!"
"...I'm just going to guess that you take special medicine, right?" Naruto sighed.
"Enough talk!" The 'leader' roared wielding a katana. "You will not complete your mission. Give us the package now and you can leave with your life."
The three genin slipped into a defensive stance, "Pfft, fuck you needle dick!"
Surrounded the genin prepared to take on some ninjas. Can be too hard right?
Ugh...I hate this chapter. I really do. There had to be twenty other things I wanted to put but my muse was dead...six feet under. The fight with the spider sucked ass. The lemon, or lime, or whatever it was, was stupid. I didn't show enough Gig. All in all this chapter was bullshit. I could have done better.
But I'd rather submit this then have to wait another week.
But don't worry, the next chapter(I swear) will be longer, and better. Times ten.
The poll is up in my profile so vote please.
And don't forget to review. I like reviews. Reviews make me that much closer to reviving my muse and we all want that right?
I was thinking of making the Kyuubi female, what do you think?
And for anyone who can translate the "Hot box" tech into Japanese, you'll get a cookie.
Next up: Some ninja ass kicking, A horny princess(Maybe a lemon, maybe not), and a few new jutsu.
Review, review, review(Yes Im a review whore). Ja ne.