Hey Guys I'm back sorry if the story is bad this is my first fanfiction and I was a little stumped! If the sentence isn't in quotation it is a thought! Hope you enjoy! Please give me feedback on my story!
The second I started yelling a flash of lighting went by and a roll of thunder after it. I remember my Science teacher saying " Mr. Brooks would you care to tell us why lighting comes before thunder?" I thought even mocking his British accent. " uh I don't know. Lighting is faster in a marathon?"I said everyone knows I have a smart mouth. The whole class laughed. "Quiet down! Quiet down! Not correct !" He said his eyes shooting daggers. " light is faster than sound!" He said while grinding his teeth and his vein visible on his head. I don't know why I thought about it in the middle of fighting. " she'll be fine as long as we keep them away from her!" Mr. Crepsley said. "alright" I said. The Vampeneze in front of me tried to cut at me with his sword. I hit him directly in his jaw kneed him in the stomach and slashed him. His dead body fell to the ground lifeless. There were only 5 Vampeneze easy for a vampire impossible for a human. just finished beating 2 Vampeneze and was working on his third. I looked for my second Vampeneze and he was picking up the girls body looking ready to retreat. I pounced on top of him knocking the girl out of his arms he took a small dagger out and slashed my arm. " Charna's guts!" I roared. I knocked the dagger out of his hand and slashed at his heart and he was dead within seconds. Mr. Crepsley and I grabbed the bodies and saw a bait truck. " let's drop them in there." I said smiling proud of myself. " good idea." We flitted and dropped the bodies in the back and closed the back of the truck. We jumped from the back and went back to the girl.
She laid there her body look lifeless yet every couple of seconds her stomach rose and fell. her body outline looked like before she was attacked she was wearing a skirt and a flowery tank-top with bangles and a locket. Her hair was black, long, wavy,and tangled from being attacked. It covered her face and still showed her tan skin. " what do we do? " I think we should leave her." " No! she's only a girl and will die if we leave her out here!" " but what if she freaks out!" "Its either she freaks out or dies. With a missing girl they would pin it on us!" " fine! Okay! I'll get Evanna! You take her to a dry place and keep her living till I come back!" " alright I'll take care of her." I pick her up, her body is tiny and thin but warm and soft. I was able to pick her up easily and slung her over my back. like a backpack! I started laughing while looking for a dry spot. I saw a huge shed with a hallowed out top, it had a huge roof that covered the dry area. I picked up her backpack and held on to it. I started flitting and we were off.
As I started flitting it made me think of twilight you know Bella on Edward's back. My sister loved twilight yet I found it made no sense yet I watched it with my sister almost every weekend. It was strangely addicting yet so stupid. But hey I'm a teenage boy that's just my thoughts. She was softly breathing and slipped around on my back because of the rain. The second we got up there she started to open her eyes slowly batting her eyelashes like sleeping beauty. But hey I'm not a prince. she said "Darren?"I was taken by surprise and jumped a little the rain made me slip and I was leaning over her only a inch was between us. A really awkward position I didn't mean to land on her like that but it was an accident. "Um. Who are you? Where am I? And what was with the Vampeneze AND why are you leaning over me like this?" " uh I'm Zayden Brooks. You are still in your hometown. And i didn't mean to lean over you like this I was trying to save you!" " thanks for saving me from the Vampaneze! I think!" " WAIT did you just say Vampeneze?" " um yeah?" " how the heck do you know about that!" She grabbed my hand and studied my hand she looked directly at my nails. "You're a vampire!" "Um no I'm not!" "yes you are!" "FINE I'm a vampire! But how do you know that!" " Um Cirque Du Freak series?" " you've read that!" "Charnas Guts!" I roared. She looked at me her eyes large and practically jumped out of her skin. She looked scared and was on the brink of tears. I reached out to her and held her head to my chest and held her tightly. "what's your name?" "Bb . .aa ." She said trying not to cry as tears started to form in her eyes. "well i said I'm Zayden Brooks." I said trying to be cheerful. "Its nice.. Tooo. ..." " I'm sorry!" She said and started sobbing I held her tighter and tighter as she cried into my chest. I knew I just met her but she was attacked and must be so scared. " they could have killed me! If you didn't show up i! They! I would be dead! She cried. She sobbed as the rain fell to match her emotions. " you will go away and they will kill me!" "i promise I will never leave you!" What the hell was I agreeing to?! She is just another human that will be in danger and I will have to leave her eventually right?(Authors Note: you are stuck with her for *cant tell you*! :D) she was REALLY crying now I wondered how so many tears could fill such a tiny body. She suddenly stopped and looked up at me wiping tears off her blue eyes. "I'm sorry for that!" She laughed " I cry a lot so don't worry I'm just emotional!" She laughed and smiled. " it's fine!" I smiled "you have a reason to be upset!" Damn I think I said the wrong thing! Handling a crying girl was like handling a time bomb."you look nervous! Are you okay?" She said laughing yet speaking but still sounded sincere. "I'm fine really! Really!." I said blushing brighter and brighter till my face was a pure red! Started laughing really hard and I started smiling because she laughed like a bell! That's probably why her parents named her Bella because she sounded like a bell. It was actually kind of cute! "um I have a question!" She asked "what is it." "Um not that I mind but how long are you going to hold me like this?" She asked. I immediately let go and started blushing until I noticed I dropped her! "Sorry!" "it's okay! It was really funny!" she laughed and I laughed . It felt like I met her before. "ZZAAAYDDDEEENNN! WHERE ARE YOU!" I could hear shouting from a mile away. "Time to go!" I said picking her up and holding her tightly so she wouldn't fall since we both were soaking wet."huh?" "we have to talk AND we have to take care of your injuries. I know you are in pain you don't have to pretend anymore." I said she nodded and gave me a weak smile. "Let's go!"