Brad del Riccio no Rakuen (Moosified version)

by MooseCrew

TheMooseCrew has decided that often a wonderful concept can be wasted if put in the hands of those that don't know how to use it. As such, we have decided to bring hope to this wasteland! We present to you the first ever "Flip my Fiction," where we take lackluster fanfictions, and, if nothing else, make them bearable. (Moosified version) Harem and average protagonist.

2. Chapter 2: The Beginning part 2

It's been a little while since I entered the forest and so far I am terrified. I've heard hisses, growls, bones clacking together, there's been no end to the noises! A quick look to the right and I suddenly see it, four blood red eyes staring me down. Faster than my mind could process, I started sprinting away. As I was sprinting with my only goal to stay alive I notice a light at the edge of the forest. With no time for hesitation I head in that last lunge is all it takes and I make it out of the forest and see it. The village I've only seen in books. Then everything went black.

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I groggily open my eyes and am shocked by what I see. A cubed monstrosity with a nose not unlike Squidward's from Spongebob. With a quick uppercut I knock the person standing above me out. I hear a sound hitting the ground similar to the sound of a sack of potatoes falling. I quickly get up and look for my hoe. I do a quick search of the room and end up going inside the chest next to my bed. There he was.

"I knew it." I whispered. "You can mess with me but the moment my hoe is touched the gloves are off." I proceed to take out my wooden sword while getting ready to slaughter every living being in a 3 mile radius.

"No please, I have a family!" spoke the frightened villager.

"Wait a minute, I have a family too. I can't kill this man." I thought.

"I'm sorry, I just get a little startled whenever someone touches my hoe." all of the sudden I have a flashback of Mr. Sun. "I've already lost too much" a single tear rolls down my face.

"It's okay you're in good hands now, my name is Tim." said the now identified Tim.

"The rest of your stuff is in that chest over there" he said pointing to the chest on the side of my bed "Here, let me show you around the village" he said offering his hand to me.

"I would love that" I spoke.

Hello my readers. Merry Christmas to those who celebrate it and Happy Holidays to all! I hope whoever reads this enjoys it and writes a review. Even if you think it's terrible review and tell me what exactly is terrible.