intro
Troy Bolton and Gabriella Montez had been bestfriends since birth. Troy was always the more outgoing, sportier, and a heart throb while Gabriella was the sweet, shy, smart, innocent, cutie. They had met Chad, Sharpay and Taylor when they were 5 and Kelsi when they were 9. They all immediatly clicked.
Chad was the funniest and most lovable, while Sharpay was a fashion obsessed, drama queen. Taylor was the smart, perfectionist. Kelsi was the music genius.
Troy and Gabriella's friends had tried to get them together multiple times but it never happened but in result Gabriella relized that she was in love with Troy and hid it from him pretty well considering that he had never noticed. And Troy had a slight crush on her but put it to the back of his mind and left it there. Gabriella Montez was always the shy, quiet, sweet, innocent, girl that everyone loved and as for Troy, he was the popular, player, jock that every girl would melt over.
These two were inseperable......or so we thought.
Chapter 1
The room was silent, all that could be heard was the ringing of the phone. The brunette took a quick glance at the caller ID but did not pick up. All she wanted was him, but he was off with his girlfirend of 5 weeks, Lillian Markles. The frail, 16 year old, promised herself she wouldn't cry, she promised she would not be weak. The phone stopped ringing. Her once naturally tanned skin was pale, and her brown eyes once full of life, were now lifeless. She was alone.
"GABBY!" 2 faint worried voices could be heard between the furious knocks on the door. After 5 minutes she decided that she should answer it.
The door opened to reveal a dark skinned, tall, brown afro-haired boy and a dark skinned, black short straight haired girl.
"Gabby..." the girl whispered as she pulled her into a tight hug. The boy wrapped his arms around both girls.
They all sat in the living room that once used to be full of love, but now only painful. Chad, the afro haired boy was the first to break the silence. "You'll never lose us, Gabs."
"We'll help with the funeral too." The girl, Taylor put on a weak smile.
The door bell rang. Taylor answered it.
"Oh how is she?!" Gabriella's, blonde friend Sharpay panicked. Followed by her boyfriend dark boyfriend Zeke, and her twin brother Ryan, his red haeaded petite girlfirend Kelsi, and the dark haired boy Jason.
Everyone was there accept for the one she really wanted, not that she didn't loved her friends but he knew how to make her smile and he was not here.
week later: Troys P.O.V.
I walked down the halls of east high with my girlfriend Lillian on my right arm. Lillian is a cheerleader, she has beach blonde hair and tanned skin, big chest and an okay ass. She's pretty hot but she is still nothing compared to Gabriella.
I walked straight to my friends Chad, Kelsi, and Taylor. As I got closer I noticed Gabriella wasn't there, again. I hadn't talked to her in a couple of weeks. They all looked upset. They had been like this all week.
"Hey guys!" I greeted cheerfully. The greeted back upset.
"Hey." Lillian sneered to them. Lillian doesn't like them, and they don't like her either. They gave her a fake greeting. I don't like Lillian that much either, I just like her !because she's hot, and not bad in bed. Also because I've always had a tiny crush on Gabriella and for the past year or so, I've been trying to get over her.
"Umm...babe could you go get me a cookie please?" I shot her a fake smile.
"Sure baby." she kissed me on the cheek. I watched her leave and as soon as she left I turned back around to the gang. "What's up?" I was a little worried, they were all so quiet.
They all looked at eachother, deciding who to speak. I was starting to wonder. What the hell are they hiding from me, I thought. Kelsi who was usually quiet, broke the silence, "It's not our place to tell." she looked down at the table again.
"What do you mean?" Sharpays phone beeped, meaning there was a text message. She read to herself and then broke out into a weak smile.
"Umm, guys..." everyone looked at her.
"Joe just texted me." There heads all shot up immediatly. Joe? Who's Joe? Obviously everyone else knows him but I don't. More importantly, what is he doing with my Gabby?
"What did he say?" Chad asked anxiously.
"He's taking her to Hawaii today, to get her mind off of things. She'll be back in a few weeks and he asked if any of us wanna come to say bye or come with them, we're welcome." I am extremely confused right now.
"What are you guys talking about?" I questioned.
"Troy its not our place to tell. Ask Gabs." Taylor said the last part quietly.
"Troysie!" My girlfriends voice chimed. I despised that name.
Dinner was really weird. My mom burst into tears as she ate her food. My father had tears spilling out of his eyes too. My phone beeped, I looked at the text to see it was Lillian. "Hey, babe it's Lillian. Going out for drinks witht he girls, wanna come"
I texted back: Sure.
As I was about to leave my father stopped me. "Are you going to see Gabs?"
"No. Lillian." I was starting to wonder.
"Oh cause I really think you should go see her." he sounded dissapointed. What was the obsession with Gabriella today?
"I'll stop by if I have time." And with that I was out the door.
Gabriella's P.O.V
The phone rang. Joe, the hot picked it up for me sensing that I didn't want to.
"Hello?" his voice rang through. I continued to pack my clothes. I didn't bother listening to the conversation knowing that he would tell me. The phone call ended.
"That was Jack. Him and Lucille are coming by in 5 minutes." I nodded as I looked at the clock that read 7:22pm. Our flight was at 11:30 pm.
"Um Joe..." My voice was quiet and cracking a little. His head immediatley shot up to face me.
"Yes?" he asked.
"I'm kind of thirsty." Those were the most words I had said all day.
"I'll go get you some water." Just as he was about to leave, I stopped him. "No. I want blood." he looked at me and nodded in understanding. Seconds later he came back with my favourite kind. Bear. Due to my half vampire heritage from my late fathers side.
I drank up a huge gulp and offered Joe some. He gladly accepted. Joe is also a vampire but unlike me, he is full blooded. Nobody but our families and lcoe friends know. Sharpay, Kelsi, Taylor, Chad and Troy's parents know. I told them all this year which was around the same time Troy decided to change and started to ignore me a little but even after all that I still loved him very much. He also still hasn't even bothered to call. Joe on the other hand is like my other half, accept for the fact that he's openly gay. Not many people can tell because the way he acts, dresses, and talks, is so much like a straight guy. Plus every girl swoons over him the same way they tend to do with Troy. His black naturally wavy hair and green eyes makes them all melt. I met him 3 years ago at camp and became bestfriends. He is a year older than me, 17 and is like a big brother. I could trust him with anything. I introduced him to the gang this summer but again Troy never met him.
The door bell rang as I was finishing up my blood. Joe answered it. I looked around the house it was a complete mess.
"Hey, Mr and Mrs Bolton." Joe gave his award winning smile, they had met too, that summer. Lucille and Jack Bolton were like second parents to me. Them, and my parents were bestfriends since high school that is also how I met Troy. They hugged and then came over to me.
Jack gave me a hug, then Lucille gave me a bone crushing hug. Her eyes were blood shot. You could tell she had been crying. I hugged back and immediatly tears welled up in my eyes. She reminded me of my mother too much. I couldn't hold it in any longer and at the same time we both broke down into tears. Relization hit me. I dpn't have parents anymore, I'm alone and left to fend for myself. We stayed like that for what seemed like hours but in reality it wasn't that long.
Moments later we all sat drinking coffee that Joe made for us. Joe had some too. For us vampires that is considered juink food but he likes the dirt taste of it too much.
"Sweet heart," Lucille started. "Jack and I would love if you came and lived with us." she spoke sincerely.
I remembered the conversation that I had with Joe earlier this week.
FLASHBACK
"So I was wondering, do you wanna move in with me...I mean I've got a stable job and plus a ton of cash from you know where....?" His eyes were hopeful and I knew that
"I wouldn't want to put you out..."
"No, no you wouldn't. Plus I've always wanted a room mate and you know how my friends are." He smiled.
I gave him a weak smile in return "Ok, but just one thing."
"Ok?" he looked at me confused.
"You move into this house with me."
He nodded excitedly.
END OF FLASHBACK
"Thank you for the offer but um Joe is moving in here with me..."
"Are you guys sure I mean you both still kids, you dont have jobs-"
"Actually Mrs. Bolton, um I actually own a car dealer ship on the west side of Alberquerque. My unlce sighned it over to me just before going into retirement." That wasn't a lie.
"Really? What's it called?" Jack asked.
"Jonas Motors." {a.n: i made that up.}
"Really? I get my car fixed from their. That place is great." Jack smiled ethusiastically.
"Thank you, sir." Joe smiled.
"What about your parents?" Lucille asked.
"When I was 15 my parents wanted us to move back to Venece, but I didn't want to. So my uncle stepped in and offered me to move in with him. So I said yes. And then at 16 my uncle taught me everything about the dealership, retired, asked me if I wanted to move back to Venece with him. They all send me money every 2 weeks although I make a good amount a year."
"How much?" Jack asked.
"About 780 000 a year."
"Wow." Jack said.
"So why are you guys packed?" Lucille asked.
"Umm... we're going on vacation for a while." I said.
"When, how long and where?" Lucille asked.
"Um to Hawaii and tonight. Our flights at 11:30. And we'll be back in a couple of weeks." I looked down. Jack and Lucille exchanged looks.
"Okay, but only cause you could use this but I have a couple of conditions." Jack always acted like a father to me. Joe and I nodded to him.
"First, if you two drink, only enough so you can still see straight. Second, you call every night. Third, if you decide to have any sexual contact with anyone, hopefully not, make sure your protected. Understand?" Jack said strictly but he did this even when my mother was around, he'd always say this to Troy and I. We nodded understanding.
"Wait there are a couple more things, make sure you where enough sun block, and where are you guys staying?" Lucille asked in a very motherly way.
"Umm..." Joe and I looked at eachother. "We were planning to decide when we get their." I spoke.
"Non-sense, I'm calling Hawaiian Resorts {a.n: made that up :)} right now. They are absolutely amazing and the hotels right on the beach. And Jack and I will be paying for this. Also we are arranging a car to pick you up from their and for you guys to drive around on the island. We will also drop you off to the airport today and we will pick you up. And I will take no buts or no's." and with that Lucille called the resort and arranged everything.
At the airport, everyone acsept Troy was there.
We all said our goodbyes and I gave Jack and Lucille my keys.
TROYS POV
I got home at curfew, which was 11:00.
"Mom, dad, I'm home!" I called from the steps. It was quiet. I walked to the living room and tried again "Mom? Dad?" still nothing. I walked to the kitchen to see a note on the fridge. The note read: "At Gabby's house. Love mom and dad." I swear people were obsessed with her today. I decided that I mind aswell findout what all the comotion !was about. After all she had called me 100 times last week.
I parked my car in the drive way and knocked on the door. I waited patiently for someone to answer it, but there was no answer. I knocked harder this time. Finally someone answered. "Hey dad!" I smiled, as I let myself in. The Montez's house was like a second home for me and Mrs. Montez was like my second mother.
"Hi! Mrs. Montez!" I called from the steps. The only reply I got was hearing my mom break out into tears as she had been doing all week. I looked over at my dad and said "What's wrong with her?" he gave me a shocked look.
"Troy do you know what happened?" My dad asked. What the hell is with these people. "No..."
"I'm assuming Gabs told you?" I hadn't even talked to Brie all week and I missed her. However I wasn't going to go see her.
"She didn't tell me anything, speaking of her, where is she anyways?" I was headed straight for the stairs when I was stopped by my dad again. "Son..." my dad began as he put his hand on my shoulder. "Mrs. Montez passed away...." Tears welled up in my eyes. The confusion was soon replaced with guilt. That was why Gabriella was calling me. I suck! I'm a horrible person! And even worse, the woman who was like my second mother is gone and Gabby was an orphan now. I didn't care at this moment. I cried my eyes out.
I felt my fathers arms around me as I cried. "It'll be okay son." he whispered.
My mother came out and hugged me, I didn't care that I looked like a pansy right now.
We sat in the Montez's living room drinking coffee that my father made.
"How did it happen?"
"Doctors said it was a natural death." My father said.
"When was it?" I asked.
"Last week." My father replied.
"God, I'm such an idiot." I through my face into my hands. It happened last week and I'm finding out about this now. If I hadn't been so busy or if I had listened maybe I would have known.
"It's not your fault son." My mother said weakly.
"I know but you allt ried to tell me and I was just too caught up in my own things to listen, and Gabby-" I remebered we were in her house "Wait! where's Gabriella?"
"She's in Hawaii." My father replied. Hawaii? What the hell was she doing there? She should be here, with me. Where I can see her, and hold her, and protect her. It was the least I could do since I hadn't been there for her these past weeks.
"Why is she there?" I asked.
"She needed some time." My mother replied.
"Who did she go with?" I asked.
"Joe." My mom said. "Joe? who the heck is Joe and why does everyone but me know him? "Who's Joe?"
"I thought you knew Joe? He's a good kid." My dad said.
"No I don't. And why are you guys here?" I asked.
"Gabs gave us her house keys, we thought we'd clean up here since it's the least we can do." My mother replied. That was not the least. Where is she gonna stay? More importantly who with? I was afraid that social services was gonna take her so i din't bother asking.
3 weeks later
Gabriella's P.O.V.
My last day in Hawaii. Gosh I was going to miss this place. Currently I was sitting in the sand, watching the crashing waves of the ocean as I waited for Joe to get our smoothies. I ran a hand through my now short hair. I died it black with midnight blue ends. I looked like a total badass. I even changed the way I did my make up and bought a whole new wardrobe. The new Gabriella was totally drop dead gorgeous and I knew this too because I had given 5 guys hard ons just by looking at me.
This vacation was a blast and very memorable, especially because of one thing in particular.
FLASHBACK TO THE FIRST WEEK OF VACATION
I was wearing a white flowy, hulter dress that ended just below my knees and my long black hair was straightened.
"How many of these clubs are there?" I asked Joe over the blasting music.
"Well there is one in each city." Joe's white teeth glisened in the dark as he smiled down to me.
I smiled back "Wanna dance?"
"Well lets see," he put on a fake thinking face "I'm in a club, on vacation with an extremely sexy girl! What do you think?"
I giggled, "I'll take that as a yes." I grabbed his hand and started grinding on him. Anyone who didn't know us, would have thought Joe was straight and we had just met. I don't know where I got the courage to do that but I did. I figured that it was time for change.
"Wow! didn't know you had that in you!" Joe called over the loud music.
"Well I figured, I'm in Hawaii where no one knows me, so I might as well live it up!" I yelled back.
After a couple more hours of dancing, i was geting thirsty. Joe noticed this and asked "Want a drink?"
"Um sure." I only once had ever drank but now for some reason I wanted to. We headed to the bar.
"What can I get you?" the bartender asked mostly directing it at me in an attempt to flirt.
"Um I'll have a beer." I replied. Joe looked at me shocked. "What?" I questioned. He just shook his head.
The bartender came back and handed us our drinks. "So pretty lady, are you single?" I felt a little uncomfortable. Joe sensed it and protectivly put his arm around me. "Actually she's taken." He smiled. The bartender huffed at this and moved on.
"Thanks." I smiled.
"So your finally going straight Joe!" I turned around to see 3 men around the same age as Joe smiling genuinly. The one that was talking was really hot. He had beach blonde surfer looking hair and green eyes and was a head taller than me. He was wearing kakki shorts with sandles and a red hawaiian button up shirt with the buttons undone revealing his peachy abs. The second guy had short brown hair with eyes to match and was a little bit taller than the first guy. He wore jean shorts, sandles and no shirt leaving his tanned abs open to us. Last but not least was the third was as tall as the first guy and was wearing grey cargo shorts, sandles, and a very tight black shirt that outlined his chocolate coloured abs beneath teh shirt, perfectly. He was a bit more built than the first 2 and he had black hair and hazel coloured eyes,.
The 3 were hot.
"Well who wouldn't when you have a hot girl like this!" The first guy smirked. I blushed a little.
"Damn, you've done yourself good this time Joe!" The third guy patted Joe on the arm. I blushed more.
"If I weren't taken, I would so be all over her!" The third guy smirked. My face was crimson now.
"Guys stop, your embarressing her." Joe chuckled. "Gabs, meet Zeke, Jason, and Ryan. There my buddies from the Drag Club. Guys this is Gabriella-"
"THIS IS GABRIELLA? DUDE? I was wondering when you'd finally introduce us!" The third guy, Zeke pulled me into a giant hug. I let out a giggle and said "you're squeezing me." I said trying to breathe.
I heard Joe, Ryan and Jason chuckle a little.
"Sorry." He smiled.
"It's cool." I smiled back. I looked over to Joe, "So I guess you've told them about me?"
"Told us? Girl I think we know you just as well as he does!" The second guy, Jason smiled.
"Yeah, also I hear you can drag?" The third, Ryan smiled.
"Well not really..." I remembered when I was 14 and just met Joe at camp. He taught me to drive that summer. He said I was a natural.
"Are you kidding!? You guys should see her turns, there sharper than mine!" Joe bragged.
"Well what do you say G? You up for a little dragging?" Ryan smirked.
"I can't drag, I've never done ot before. I just know the driving that Joe taught me." I said nervously.
"Well you learned how to drive from one of the best, so you should be fine on the circut." Jason smiled.
"I don't know..." What if I sucked at it, or I got into an accident?
I looked at Joe for help, "You don't have to if you don't want to." he gave me a reasurring smile.
I thought for a second. Oh what the heck! It could work for my change. "Sure."
We walked around outside to a part of this building that looked like a garage. I was nervous and on top of that it was 12:30am, the sky was still dark with the stars glistening over us.
The garage door opened to reveal what looked like thousands of cars. They were beautiful.
"Take your pick." Joe smiled.
"That one." I pointed to a yellow shiny gallardo.
"Did I mention that I love this girl!" Jason said excitedly. I giggled.
Joe pushed in some buttons on a wall. Before I knew it the Gallardo was risen and was coming down off a ramp and stopping infront of me.
"Woah!" I was amazed, I had never seen anything like it.
"State of the art." Ryan smiled as he folded his arms. "The guy who built this took a year on it."
"Anyways, ready?" Zeke spoke.
"Umm..." I hesitated. I felt Ryan put his hand on my shoulder. "I could go with you, if you want?" He asked. I still wasn't sure. I had just met the guy and I was basiclly putting my life in his hands. I looked over to Joe.
"Your safe with him, Gabs." He smiled.
"Ok." I said.
Ryan pulled open the drivers seat door for me to get in. I thanked him. He then went around and sat in the seat next to me.
"Make sure you fasten your seat belt." I did what he said. He looked at me and put his hand on top of mine sensing my uneasiness. "Don't worry, I was just like this when I started out. I remember when my brother taught me. I was so scared."
"Really?" I asked. He nodded. "Ok so, when your dragging first always put your seat belt on."
"Check!" I said nervously.
He let out a small chuckle. "Second, when starting, rev your engine a few times, just because it's cool." I giggled at this, as he smiled.
"Third, start off fast because then the other person will have a hard time catching up." he said cooly.
I took a deep breathe and I was off. The road was straight so far. "You see that turn coming up?" I nodded. "Be ready for it." I focused on it. "G-G be careful." He studdered as he saw the turn approaching. I had to smirk at this.
"G LOOKOUT!" I heard Ryan shriek. At the last second I made a very sharp turn.
"G! THAT WAS ECSTATIC! Are you sure you've never done this?" Ryan shrieked excitedly. I giggled, "No, I've never."
"Could have fooled me." He smiled.
When we completed the circut, Ryan was the first to get out. As I was about to he came around and escorted me out. I was immediatley surround by the guys.
"GIRL, THAT WAS CRAZY!" Joe screamed.
"YOU WERE ON FIRE!" Jason screamed.
"THAT WAS SICK!" Zeke chimed in.
"I'll say!" We turmed around to see some guy that I didn't recognize. He looked about 25ish and had red hair and green eyes.
"Hey James!" Joe, Ryan, Jason and Zeke all did the guy hand shake.
"James this is Gabriella, Gabriella, James. James owns the whole joint." Joe introduced.
"Hi." I shook his hand.
"That was awesome! I haven't seen anyone finish in that little time since my dad owned this place!" He said.
"Um thank you." I smiled.
"You wanna join?" He asked. I was suprised that he was asking me. Me, the shy, inocent, girl fron Alberquerque!
"Sure!" I replied with no regrets.
"Excellent! All you have to do is win 3 races." James replied. All the nerves came back.
END OF FLASHBACK
Obviously I won those 3 races. My past 3 weeks have consisted of partying, drinking, and racing. I even lost one thing that I thought was precious. My virginity.
FLASHBACK
I had just been grinding with Joe and Jason and was now tired.
"One apple martini, Jake." I asked the brown haired bar tender who I flirted with a lot. It's weird how guys here seem to want me cause since the first day that Joe brought me to this club, guys have been trying to flirt with me, grind on me, buy me drinks, trying to have sex with me. I ahve a ton of numbers from the ones I flirted with too.
"Sorry, sweety but I'm off shift." He smirked. And just before I could say anything, "Hey Carey, get this sexy thang an apple martini, and put it on my tab!" He came around to the bar stool and sat down next to me as I sipped my drink. HIs hand rested on my naked thigh that wasn't covered by my gold sparkly dress.
"So I've been seeeing you almost every night for the past week or so and I relized that I don't know you very well." The smirk never left his face. I thought for a second as I finished the last of my drink. I might as well have my fun with him. Troy doesn't care and he does it all the time, I wanna find out what's so fun about it.
"You're right we don't" I flirted as I put on my most flirtacious smile.
"Wanna dance?" he asked. Mind as well.
"Sure." He rested his hand on the small of my back as we walked to the dance floor.
As my ass hit his manhood with the beat I immediatley felt him go hard. He wrapped his arms around me from behind and whispered "baby you're driving me crazy." I had to smirk at this. I never intended on sex but right now I'd do anything to not think about my mom.
"Uh I'm gonna cum!" Jake moaned. I quickly got up and without a warning, thrusted myself into him, taking him by suprise. It wasn't long after, that I came.
I laid next to him as we both gasped for air.
"W-w-wow! That was am-mazing!" Jake breathed.
"Thanks!" My heart was racing. What had I just done? I had always believed in giving myself to someone only after marriage, not in a car, with a guy who I've known for like a week or so. But I don't regret it. That was exilherating.
He turned over and faced me, "You must be experienced."
I looked at him, suprised that he would think that. Was I really that good? Especially since it was my first time. "Um, sure. You were good to though." That was half truth. I had nothing to compare it to so he mind aswell be good.
END OF FLASHBACK
"One strawberry, bananna smoothie!" Joe smiled as he sat next to me.
"Thanks." I smiled to him.
"Your welcome G." He smiled. I giggled at the nickname that Ryan had given me. I had grown close with Ryan, Jason, and Zeke but even more closer with Joe.
Joe had been even more happy that he could now share the whole drag world with me, and we'd be living together, again. The first time we lived together was in a cabin at camp, and that resulted in a great friendship.
"Joey?" I asked.
"Yes?" his mouthful of his blueberry smoothie.
"Thank you!"
"For what?"
"For bringing me on this trip! I loved every moment of it. Also for being there for me and moving in with me. I love you." I smiled to him. And he knew that I meant 'I love you' in a friendly way.
"I love you too, girly. And I'll always be there for you, no matter what. " He pulled me into a one arm hug and kissed my forhead.
TROYS POV
I missed Gabriella. For the past few weeks I pretended as if nothing happened and even had my usual quickies but now I couldn't, I missed her to damn much.
"Hey Troy!" Chad greeted the most ethusiastic since before Mrs Montez passed away. I don't know how he was happy right now, I missed my Gabby.
"You seem happy." I said unethusiastically.
"Well I am!" He said proudof himself.
"Why?" I wanna know what drug he's using so I could get over Gabby.
"Gabsters coming back tomorrow!" He said excitedly. My face immediatley lit up.
"Gabby's coming back?" I hope I didn't sound to eager.
"Yep! And I told you, you missed her!" He sounded like a little kid who rode his first 2 wheeler bike on his own. I wasn't going to let him win.
"Whatevs." I tried to play it cool, when right now I was jumping on the inside.
Chad stopped me from walking by standing infront of me with a now serious expression on his face. "Troy? Just let it out." Damn Chad for reading me like a book.
"YES! WOO-HOO!" I screamed excitedly getting everyone's attention. Some people were laughing. 2 minutes later I cleared my throat, "I'm okay." I sighed content. SHE WAS COMING BACK!
I hadn't noticed Sharpay and Taylor standing behind me until "Wow, didn't see that coming!" The two girls giggled.
I just smiled.
"I guess Chad told him the news." Taylor smiled as Chad put his arm around her. The two have been dating for a while. It sounded liek she expected this.
"Wait, did you guys expect that I'd be doing this?" They all looked at eachother.
"Yeah!" they all said in unison. Why would they think that. Wait, what if they know that I like her? Oh my god, and then they tell her! It's going to ruin our friendship, and then she won't talk to me ever. I relized two thing since she'd been gone and that is, I won't ever get over her, no matter how hard I try and that I've pushed her out of my life and need to get her back.
So that was the first chapter. Please reveiw and I already know that there is a lot of punctuation, spellin and grammer mistakes.
I'll try to get the next chapter out soon.