The lion king: Kivuli's story

by dreadwarrior987

this story is about a lion name Kivuli who is to become the next king of his pride but after a incident he mysteriously disappeared and a mysterious lion comes and takes over the pride and it's not looking good for the pride, the question is where's Kivuli and is he still alive? find out in this story. rated t for violence and possible language.

2. chapter 2

Chapter 1

I probably should of mention before this but this is my first time making a fanfiction and I can write but I'm just not that good of a writer so I apologize for that and I will try to space out the paragraphs the best I can and add quotation marks. Anyways let's get to the story enjoy and I don't own the lion king just the OCs.

Many years went by and Kivuli Went from being a little newborn puffball to a young cub, the gray patch of fur on his forehead started to grow into a tuft, which will start turning into a mane as he gets older, he was a quiet cub and shy towards other cubs, last week a cub asked if he wanted to play, he got shy and just ran off. And now here he was sitting near the entrance of the cave blaming himself for being rude and not answering the cub's question and just ran off.

Morning son. a male voice said from behind.

he looked behind him and saw his father, and said. Morning dad.

Kiburi looked at his son and said. What are you thinking about?

He just sigh and said. Last week a cub asked me if I wanted to play with her and I didn't even answer I just got shy and ran off.

Well son, he said. I don't blame you for being the way you are, don't worry you just need to learn to overcome your shyness and if you need help talk to me or your mother ok.

Ok. Kivuli said. his father looked at him and said. Come Kivuli it's time I show you around the pride. He just looked outside the cave and said. Ok, And with that they left the cave,

this was his first time being away from their home and being so far away that they can't see it anymore, he was allowed to leave their home but he had to stay close enough to where he can still see it or go to one of the waterholes (there's only two) nearby, he was caught up in his train of thought that his father had to clear his throat to get his attention in which it did he looked at his father and waited to see what he is going to say.

Ok your probably wondering why I brought you out here. Kiburi said. Kivuli nodded his head and said no.

Ok. He said. I brought you out here because someday I will be gone and you will take my place as the new king of the pride, that's why I brought you here to teach you so you can be prepared when your time comes to take your place as the pride's new king, a pride is only as good as the ones who rule it.

Kivuli was just walking next to his dad listening to the lessons on how to be a king even though he found them to be boring he knew if it's to learn how to be a good king he doesn't mind and he's also wondering what does the future have in store for him.

so is this chapter a little better than the first tell me what you think I don't mind people saying their opinions and also what should the pride's name be I'll like to see your suggestions and as always have a good day adios