PLEASE READ
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I have read through this story and decided I wrote it rather poorly, and rushed alot of the big details while pawning at the less important pieces. I think my best move would be to rewrite this story and give it a bit of a fresh start. I hope you understand this is what I want to do to IMPROVE this story, because I think it is far from its full potential.

Thank you for reading the first edition of this story. I plan on re-writing and re-publishing it soon