The tension in the air between the copper-haired vampire and the werewolve was evident.
Jacob shuffled his feet, "Hello bloodsucker" he said as he glared.
Edward smirked "likewise Wolf" he replied.
"Who are these guys?" Renji asked.
"More bloodsuckers" stated Jacob, as he started to walk away. "deal with them please", right before he bounded off into the woods Bella grabbed his arm.
"Stay here please" she asked him.
Jacob stared at her, then nodded jerkily as he pulled his arm away.
"How can you be dead?" asked Ikkaku "and not be either a ghost or a hollow?" he paused hi bald head trying to think.
"are you some knid of Soul Reaper?" asked Yumichika, his hand on his chin, looking thought full.
"Actually" a new voice said "I can explain" ikkaku and Yumichiks turned towards the new voice, where Renji watched the exchange between Jacob and Bella.
"Hello carlise" bella said with a smile, "Come in and we can talk". She started going into the house, and paused waiting for others to follow, one by one the vampires went in.
Renji grabbed Ikkaku's arm as he passed by, " I ll be in, in a second" he told him. Ikkaku nodded and followed Yumichika into the house.
Jacob meanwhile was standing by cloaked in shadows. Renji walked up to him.
"You love her" he told Jacob.
Jacob looked away angry, and he started to run off, taking off his shirt as he prepared to transform.
"but she loves another Renji stated, Jacob stopped hands clasped at his waist.
"is it that obvious?" he hissed, turning on Renji nad stalking towards him, " I ve friggin imprinted on her kid, how can I still love her" he stopped when he reached Renji, who had not moved.
"Only to onw who has felt the pain" Renji spat, "my best friends from my days on the street" he grinned wolfishly and laughed, " I ve lost her to a orange-haired kid" he stepped back and grinned wider "Now don t get me wrong, he's my friend, I protect his back, he protects mine. I ve done it often enough", he paused and put his face in his hand and laughed again, "We are truly alike, him and I, but the main thing in common that we have is our love. Our love for Rukia". He stopped and waited for Jacob to speak.
"Why are you telling me this?" Jacob said.
"Because you should never let her go" Renji said, serious now "You may find another to love, and love her just as much if not more then Bella." He stared at Jacob, eyes glinting in the moonlight. "but part of your heart will always belong to her" he paused, and walked up to the doorway, "as part of her heart will always belong to you"
He looked back at Jacob, his red hair haloed by the light from the house, "Never let her go" with that he walked into the house.
Jacob watched as the spiky ponytail disappeared into the house. He leaned against a tree, and slid down to sit, and dropped his head into his hands, taking in all that Renji had said to him.
He looked up and whispered, "what if its too late?", he then got up and went into the bushes to transform.
In the house Renji leaned against a wall, he sighed. Was I too harsh? He asked himself, then shook his head, no he told himself, he should know before its too late. Glancing at the shut door he walked towards where he heard voices….
So? How is it, please review, I really want to know if this is any good.. should I go on or not?