Chapter 2-The Swordsman on Deck

This is my first book that I wrote so give me some advice plz

A bright sunny morning

Luffy woke up at the smell of breakfast. BREAKFAST!!!!!! Luffy scrambled out of the men's dorm and ran straight into the kitchen door. He looked around for Sanji but saw no one.

"SANJI!" Luffy ran back to the men's dorm but couldn't find Sanji. "Where the heck are you!" With that Luffy ran past the kitchen door. He thought to himself. What am I doing? It is a great chance for me to eat Drool meat. With that he ran back to the kitchen.

Sanji was out in the back of the ship looking out to the sea. He was about to light his first cigarette when he heard someone shouting his name.

"Sanji!"

Sanji thought for a moment.

"OMG Luffy is awake!" Sanji had left everyone's breakfast in the kitchen! He ran to the kitchen and sighed. Everyone's food was still there. Everyone's plates still had two eggs and three slips of bacon except for Nami's. Hers had three eggs and four slips of bacon and a fruity drink made of tangerines on the side. He sighed of relief and walked back to the back. I should tie up Luffy to his bed and let him to be the last one to be at the dinner table. He grinned and walked to the mens dorm.

Suddenly he heard his name again.

"Sanji!"

Now was his chance. Sanji ran to Luffy's bed but he didn't find anyone. He then heard a clatter of what sounded like plates in the kitchen

"No! Luffy's at the kitchen! LUFFY! You better of not took anything from Nami-swan's plate or I'll kill you!" and with that he started running toward the kitchen.

Luffy heard a too much familiar sound thumping down to the kitchen. He quickly jumped out of the window he was so cruelly kicked out of the night before.

"Hmm this is the exact spot that I saw that guy with the sword…."

"Slam!" Luffy heard Sanji come in to the kitchen. "Luffy! Ima going to kill you in your sleep!!!!!!!!" hearing this Luffy quickly shuffled to the men's dorm window but thought better of it and went to the women's dorm. He knew that the women's dorm was a place where Sanji was not aloud in.

After Luffy squeezed through the window he slid under the extra bunk bed next to Nami's. Oh what was I thinking! Nami will kill me if she found me in her room!

Luffy heard a large commotion outside. Sanji woke Zoro and Ussop up and told what had happened in the kitchen. Luffy then heard footsteps thumping around the ship.

Zoro: "He stole my dinner and then my breakfast?! I am going to kill him!"

Ussop: "Im going to throttle his rubber neck!"

Sanji: "Shut up and just find him and drag him to the deck so we can torture him!"

Luffy got scared. O shit I hear footsteps coming this way!

Stupid Luffy eating my food and then making Sanji waking me up take revenge. Zoro thought. "Luffy come out come out where ever you are!"

Zoro slowly walked to the last place to look with Ussop behind him and Sanji ready to get Nami to open thedoor and let them in to find Luffy.

He saw Sanji starting to knock on the women's dorm door. He then heard shuffling behind the door and finally saw Nami open the door.

Before Sanji can start googling at Nami and tell her of how she looks beautiful in the morning, Zoro cut in with a serious tone in his voice.

"Nami. We think that a certain stupid, idiotic, rubber captain is in you room. Can we check?"

Nami looked shock what she had been told.

"What?!!!!!! Luffy in my roooooooooooom?!!!!!!!!! With that she opened the door wide with rage.

Zoro enter first with two very white hands ready to strangle. Then Ussop with his slingshot with a fitted spike ball, Sanji with his eyes burning, and finally Nami.

Zoro saw Nami stomp over to her dresser and when she opened it, it was filled with different kind of hammers. On the top was a signed that said "Used for idiotic hard heads"

Zoro rubbed his head from the hard knock he got from Nami. Then he quickly went to the window while he sent Ussop to guard the door. There will be no way out for Luffy.

Luffy had slipped out of the window when Nami was answering the door.

Luffy snickered, "They will be looking for me for along time in there." He strolled down to the deck and went to the rail but something caught his eye a little boat was tied next to the Merry. Hey it's the boat from the night before I think.

Luffy looked around for the swordsman he saw in the boat last night. He saw him sitting on top of the main mast.

Luffy stared. "Awesome…. Hey he looks strong! Im going to ask him to join the crew!" Luffy ran to the base of the mast and looked up. The swordsman was still there.

"Oi swordsman!" The man looked down at Luffy while Luffy continued his sentence, "Want to join my crew?"

With surprising speed the swordsman was behind Luffy

"Sure but you kind of weird, asking somebody to join his pirate crew but not even knowing his name." The man said.

Luffy just blinked.

Clearly the man could see that the Luffy didn't understand a word he was saying but he continued anyway, "Well my name is Sean Bone but my nick name is Skull…." He stopped again to see if Luffy understood and when he was satisfied from a nod from Luffy he finished his sentence, "Also I was a single pirate until now and as you can see from my sword, Im a swordsman and I like to be called Sean not Skull."

Luffy smiled knowing that he finished his introduction and started his own introduction about himself and his crew.

"Hi Skull!" Sean twitched an eyebrow now knowing that this kid didn't really listen to him at all but that his nickname was Skull but let he let Luffy continue. "Im the captain of the pirate ship Monkey D. Luffy. My crew has a marksman named Ussop, a cook named Sanji, a navigator named Nami, and finally a man named Zoro and he is a swordsman like you."

Sean widened his eye a little. Hmm this crew has Zoro huh? He smiled at the kid, "Well how you doing Luffy…."

"Bang!" Luffy and Sean quickly turned to the noise and saw that it was a door that was slammed open. Luffy saw Zoro, Nami, Ussop, and Sanji making their way out the door. They all saw Luffy except Zoro.

Luffy quickly hid behind Sean as they all saw him.

Zoro couldn't believe his eyes. Is that really him? I have to stop him before he kills Luffy! He thought as the rest of the people stomped toward Luffy that was behind the man he saw. Before anyone could respond Zoro took out two swords, jumped into the air and sliced down his swords at the man.

The others watched in horror as the man slowly looked up to see Zoro getting ready to slice him in half but suddenly they saw something unbelievable. They saw the man reach up to his back, draw his magnificent sword that they had sure to be heavy and saw him block Zoro's attack with only one hand holding the sword.

The man seamed to be in no stress holding the force of Zoro's blow.

Everyone heard the swordsman say, "Zoro you are as protective as ever but im not going to kill your captain. I joined the crew."

Zoro looked at Luffy who looked confused.

Zoro jumped and landed a few feet infront of the swordsman. He then turned to Luffy and said, "Luffy. This man that you just invited to be in your crew…. Tried to kill you Grandpa long time ago."

I know that it is bad but could somebody plz review? I mean i would even take reviews that is critisising this story plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz review