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Carlos slowly walked through the bushes. He didn't usually get up this early, but Davies needed some "private" time with Taylor, so here he was. It was still cold out from the storm last night. The fog was so thick Carlos could barely make out what was in front of him, in fact he was actually quite lost. Somewhere he could hear a river flowing and figured that might help him figure out where he was. The track ahead was beginning to thin out. The river was dead ahead.
"There's no way he coulda survived. Let's just tell Danny he's dead."
"Just look one more time. You know what he said about this officer. He's trouble."
Carlos hid amongst the brush and watched the two men curiously. They were searching down the river, looking for someone. Someone they'd obviously killed. Carlos registered this in hi mind and realised that if they saw him there'd be big trouble.
"Come on. Let's get outta here already. Officer Bosco is no more."
Bosco? Carlos thought to himself. Is Bosco dead? The two men began heading in the direction of Carlos. He knew he had a 50/50 chance of getting caught. Slowly and carefully he concealed himself further into the bushes. Luckily the fog was still thick, the men walked past without even glancing in his direction. As soon as the men rounded the corner Carlos' cell phone began ringing, he cursed silently. As he reached into his pocket Carlos felt the cold metal of a gun against his neck.
"Answer it and I'll blow your freakin' head off"
Carlos obediently stood still, fearing for his life. Nobody knew where he was, nobody would ever find him in time.
"Turn around!"
Carlos slowly turned to face his captors. Neither of them were familiar faces, but they could be the last faces he ever saw again. There was no way he could escape, nowhere he could go. The fog was beginning to lift, allowing Carlos to see further down stream. There was a body in the water, but it was too far away, he couldn't tell if the person was alive or not.
"How much did you hear?"
"Paul….I don't think we should do this!"
"Shut up! Let him answer." The man going by the name Paul was clearly in charge. The gun stayed trained on Carlos' body. One false move and he was dead.
"Nothing."
"Don't bull shit with me boy! I know you heard something!"
Carlos tried to think of something to do or say but his mind couldn't focus properly. Suddenly the man at the back came close to him and gasped. That's not a good sign.
"Paul! I know this guy."
"What?" Paul replied turning slightly to face his accomplist.
"He's a paramedic, he was there when…."
The man trailed off, obviously affected by some characters death. Carlos felt so trapped. Paul turned to face Carlos again, lowering the gun, trying to recognise his face.
"Do you know Officer Bosco?" Paul demanded, picking Carlos up by his shirt.
"Yeah." Carlos replied. What does this have to do with Bosco?
"Make sure you say hi when you see him next."
Paul threw Carlos into the river and fired a few shots after him. There was no sign of life in the river.
Carlos swam towards the body. At least the fog had basically gone now. The water was freezing making Carlos shiver. The person was lying on their stomach. Carlos could see a gun shot wound on the hip. Carefully he turned the person over. His eyes widened with shock.
"Bosco."
Carlos slowly walked through the bushes. He didn't usually get up this early, but Davies needed some "private" time with Taylor, so here he was. It was still cold out from the storm last night. The fog was so thick Carlos could barely make out what was in front of him, in fact he was actually quite lost. Somewhere he could hear a river flowing and figured that might help him figure out where he was. The track ahead was beginning to thin out. The river was dead ahead.
"There's no way he coulda survived. Let's just tell Danny he's dead."
"Just look one more time. You know what he said about this officer. He's trouble."
Carlos hid amongst the brush and watched the two men curiously. They were searching down the river, looking for someone. Someone they'd obviously killed. Carlos registered this in hi mind and realised that if they saw him there'd be big trouble.
"Come on. Let's get outta here already. Officer Bosco is no more."
Bosco? Carlos thought to himself. Is Bosco dead? The two men began heading in the direction of Carlos. He knew he had a 50/50 chance of getting caught. Slowly and carefully he concealed himself further into the bushes. Luckily the fog was still thick, the men walked past without even glancing in his direction. As soon as the men rounded the corner Carlos' cell phone began ringing, he cursed silently. As he reached into his pocket Carlos felt the cold metal of a gun against his neck.
"Answer it and I'll blow your freakin' head off"
Carlos obediently stood still, fearing for his life. Nobody knew where he was, nobody would ever find him in time.
"Turn around!"
Carlos slowly turned to face his captors. Neither of them were familiar faces, but they could be the last faces he ever saw again. There was no way he could escape, nowhere he could go. The fog was beginning to lift, allowing Carlos to see further down stream. There was a body in the water, but it was too far away, he couldn't tell if the person was alive or not.
"How much did you hear?"
"Paul….I don't think we should do this!"
"Shut up! Let him answer." The man going by the name Paul was clearly in charge. The gun stayed trained on Carlos' body. One false move and he was dead.
"Nothing."
"Don't bull shit with me boy! I know you heard something!"
Carlos tried to think of something to do or say but his mind couldn't focus properly. Suddenly the man at the back came close to him and gasped. That's not a good sign.
"Paul! I know this guy."
"What?" Paul replied turning slightly to face his accomplist.
"He's a paramedic, he was there when…."
The man trailed off, obviously affected by some characters death. Carlos felt so trapped. Paul turned to face Carlos again, lowering the gun, trying to recognise his face.
"Do you know Officer Bosco?" Paul demanded, picking Carlos up by his shirt.
"Yeah." Carlos replied. What does this have to do with Bosco?
"Make sure you say hi when you see him next."
Paul threw Carlos into the river and fired a few shots after him. There was no sign of life in the river.
Carlos swam towards the body. At least the fog had basically gone now. The water was freezing making Carlos shiver. The person was lying on their stomach. Carlos could see a gun shot wound on the hip. Carefully he turned the person over. His eyes widened with shock.
"Bosco."