AN-Hey guys Deus Here :P may I say that HOLY FUCK one and a half days and the same likes and follows as my most successful fic XD
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Mexican ninja1996: I'm interested whis in the harem
well Mexican ninja1996 Whis shall not be in the harem for he is in dbz :/ XD ok in all seriousness Who shall be in the harem That is for me to know and you to find out I shall only Reveal two, for now, Rukia + Orihime but there will be no males in Ichigo's harem sorry no offence to Yaoi but I just cannot write it XD
Alright here's the second chapter it's a bit longer and it is Pretty Decent if I say so I have even added a slight mind fuck :3
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Bleach: Second chance of redemption
Ichigo's eyes burst open, he was breathing heavily, He looked around to see his room from when he was 15 years old, He looked to his chest noticing Hogyoku was still embedded in him. Ichigo sighed
'Hogyoku I don't know why had to fly into my chest like that but I have a request, just in case Kisuke or my dad notices you could you situate yourself inside me, or at least under my shirt' A female voice played through his mind it had a hollow sense to it but it sounded woman
"So You want me under your shirt huh? Naughty child though I'm willing to comply and do anything for you I-chi-Go" she partitioned the words to sound almost..sultry, Ichigo was Heavily red in the face, "I..Is that you Hogyoku?" Ichigo heard the voice laugh "Yes Ichigo It is I Hogyoku though last time you heard me I was incredibly male-sounding" Ichigo was intrigued "why do you sound different Hogyoku?" the Hogyokou was quivering in his chest W..Well while you was out I was fighting for dominance over Aizen's Hogyoku, I managed to subdue it ,but it seems to have turned my gender and my mood to a rather provocative female much like Aizen's Hogyoku itself" Ichigo Absorbed that info like a sponge and had only one question "Hogyoku Why was Aizen's Hogyoku a female?" Hogyoku laughed in his head "Why that's Easy Ichigo, Aizen was a lonely man filled with grief and sadness, He needed a Friend. A Friend he could talk to so he chose a hunk of crystal that just so happened to be magical and it talked to him, Though from gaining her memories Aizen's Hogyoku was ignored the more powerful he got, As soon as he became a captain he completely Ignored her"
Ichigo's Hands trembled "I..Il Kill him" Hogyoku felt shocked " IL KILL HIM! ,How could he do that to a Friend ,as soon as I get through that portal I am going to make his illusion a Reality" Ichigo calmed down "S..Sorry for the outburst Hogyoku but that raised another question" Hogyoku was intrigued "Why do I feel like I have no powers?"
Hogyoku sweated and coughed "Uhh.. I couldnt save your powers, your completely powerless at the moment, I tried all I could to get them back" Ichigo sighed "So how am I getting my powers back?" Hogyoku's mood did a 180 " Why thats Simple Ichi, you will go through your timeline like normal, and gain your powers back the way you did, BUT ,when you gain them they will be to the point of where they last was" Ichigo smiled "Hogyoku You did your best But Unknowingly you have helped our situation more than you think" Hogyoku was confused Ichigo could feel her confusion " Aizen is completely watching my every move right?" Hogyoku nodded "wouldn't he think something would be wrong if he one day saunters up to whatever he used to keep tabs on me and noticed im practically stronger than the Soutacho?" Hogyoku understood completely "Your first powers will come soon infact...keep your window open"
Ichigo opened his window only to be met with a face full of midget, "is near" the midget said as she passed through Ichigo, he simply Smirked before aiming a well-timed kick at her ass " For a burglar your a pretty crummy one at that, and what's near? The safe!?" The girl looked heavily confused about how a human just kicked her "Y..You kicked me? You can see me?" Ichigo was smiling on the inside on the outside however his frown was on full force "you tell me since that was my foot I just planted in your ass" She looked to be in a thinking look "I wasnt told of any spiritual aware people..You must be defective" Ichigo feigned anger "Il show you defective!" The girl jumped up and jumped past him by kicking off his arm "who are you" he lied inwardly. The girl smirked
"I am Rukia Kuchki Unseated officer of the Gotei 13 or for all you should know I am a Shinigami"
Ichigo looks on passively "sure I believe you" He then flipped his table in the air "Along with the toothfairy" Rukia looked shocked but gained anger when he put his hand on her head " Run along little 'Shinigami' and play your game somewhere else" the girl pointed her hand out as a spell played on her lips "Bakudo #1 Sai!" Ichigo finds his arms behind his back unable to release them "wha...What have you done to me?" ichigo asks in faked panic while rukia smirks evily " Oh silly me you cant move try not to move too much or you might hurt yourself 'Little boy' I have lived many of your lifetimes so who is the child now?" ichigo shut up as rukia sat down "You see this is the job of a shinigami" She unsheathes her blade pressing it on a familiar spirits head "off you go to the soul society"Ichigo looks on sadly remembering he had to pass on all his friends
Ichigo suddently hears a knock on his door the door swings open to a girl but not just any girl her legs was thin in skin tight jeans a not too tight shirt on her chest with the number 91 on her shirt looking up she had saddened amber eyes and long orange hair she looked in an almost saddened fashion "Ichi Nii-San Why are you on the floor and...Who is this girl?" Ichigo's jaw dropped
Ichgo began talking in his mind to Hogyoku 'Hogyoku You didnt send us back in time...' hogyoku looked shocked and saddened "What makes you so sure?" She looks and is shocked "Shes a Female version of you? Ichigo why is there a female version of you?" she is obviously shaken in her words ichigo looked on passively "You didnt send us to back in time We are in a parallel universe" Hogyoku looks confused "Whats a Parallel universe?" Ichigo mentally facedesked "a parallel universe is much like our universe except theres different changes For all we know Aizen could be after her and not me!" hogyoku slowly realized "Or he could be good in this universe and Gin's the evil one" Ichigo momentarily was mind-blown to notice his sister has gone to talking to Rukia.
"So Who are you and what happened to my Nii-san" she looked on with her head tilted Rukia was shocked two people could see her "well as I told your brother I am a shinigami" She looked on passively before smiling widely "Wow a Shinigami! you look so much different than what I thought, I was expecting shinigami's to have grey skin and monster like appearance with yellow eyes no nose but little nose holes and tight black clothes."(cookie for the reference?)
Rukia had wide eyes trying to process that One, the girl believed her. and two her description of what she thought a shinigami Quickly shook out of it, however, Ichigo was now back to earth and listening in hearing the hollows roar "Umm Ichi-nii, Rukia, do you hear that roaring" Rukia was shocked that she didn't hear it sooner as she noticed a human crawling up the stairs hurt "Kyuu-Nee, Ichi-Nii S..Save Karin" Yuzu said before collapsing Kyuu ran over to Yuzu before running downstairs to see Rukia had jumped out the window to fight the hollow.
Ichigo however easily broke out of Rukia's Sai to pick up Yuzu to put her in her bed then he ran outside to see a hurt and bleeding Rukia with her sword near his female version of himself "Human" Rukia said "Do you want to save your family" Ichigo's female version nodded "Then take my blade and run It through your heart you will gain my powers" Ichigo's female counterpart looked hesitant but said " give me that blade Rukia" Rukia smirked "My name Is Rukia Kuchiki" Ichigo's female version smiled widely "and I am KyuuIchi Kurosaki Nice to meet you" she then put her blade through her heart.
Ichigo was shocked to see that one KyuuIchi had gained powers, and Two, that Rukia Has still got her powers, he watched with a smirk as the hollow had been cut once down the middle by a Large But thin Katana, Its handle was a Beautiful with white bindings around her handle, the Guard Wis in the shape of a circle with a few Moon patterns on the tsuba, and the blade was shining silver, she looked back smiling "Look Ichi-nii I'm a Shini-" She suddenly fell over from exhaustion
"So Rukia now what?" Rukia looks to Ichigo "how did you break free from my spell" Ichigo smirked " I was worried for my sister so I broke it through Determination" Rukia looked Intrigued" I must now Erase your family's memory of this even happening and heal them" Ichigo smiled "Sure just...Let me keep my memories okay? Don't worry my lips are sealed" Rukia smiled and nodded.