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The New Girl
Chapter 2(intro)
First Name: Raven
Last Name: Roth
Nick Name: Rav/Rae (Does Not like Being Called by Theses Names)
Friends: Star and Jinx
Age: 16
Hobby: Reading
First Name: Star
Last Name: Fire
Nick Name: Starfire
Friends: Raven and most of the student body
Age: 16
Hobby: Shopping and making Friends
First Name: Garfield
Last Name: Logan
Nick Name: B.b / Gar / Beast boy
Friends: Victor
Age: 16
Hobby????
First Name: Victor
Last Name: Stone
Nick Name: Cyborg / CY
Friends: Gar and Robin
Age: 17
Hobby: All Sports and inventing/building things
First Name: Jinx
Last Name????
Nick Name: Jinx (
Friend: Raven
Age: 16
Hobby: Getting in trouble
First Name: Robin
Last Name????
Nick Name: Robby (only by Kitten. Kitten is Not Important Character)
Friend: Victor
Age: 16
Hobby????
"Intercom"
"'Quotes'"
'Thoughts'
"Talking"
Raven's POV
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"Miss. Roth!" shouted the principal "You're late for class. Come on, I'll bring you to your first class."
We came to a green door with a small window in it. The principal knocked on it and then opened it.
"Well it's nice to see students hard at work." the principal said
I looked around everyone was studying. 'Oh god' I thought
"This is the new student I was telling you about." the principal whispered to the teacher.
The principal left the room.
"Bojour please introduce yourself to the class." said the teacher
"Bojour, Je m'appalle Grand Corbeau Roth." I said
"Well at least someone in this class can speak French. O.k. class this is Raven Roth, she's the new student I was telling you all about. Raven please sit in the seat next to Star, Star please raise your hand so Raven knows who and where you are." the teacher said
I sat down next to Star. She was wearing a blue dress and blue boots. She had long red hair, all her books and pens were purple so was her bag.
Knock, knock, knock. Then the door opened and it was the same guy from lunch.
"You're late Mr. Logan this is the second time this week."
"Sorry Miss. Lemon." He said as he walked to the deck right next to me.
"O.k. Garfield we have a new student, her name is Raven Roth." I thought he looked very confused.
"And she's sitting right next to you." Miss. Lemon said
He turned his head and looked at me. I look over at Star she was now looking at me, smiling sweetly.
'Why are they staring at me?' I thought.
"Can Miss. Lemon Please Come To The Principals Office?" Said a voice over the intercom
"I'll be right back," said Miss Lemon as she was leaving the room.
"Hello, I am Star Fire. Will you be my Friend Raven Roth?"
"Ahm….." I was going to say maybe but I was interrupted.
"You're the girl I was talking to at lunch, why did you run away?" Garfield asked
"Ahm…."I didn't know what to say.
Where are you from?" asked Star
"What?" I asked
"I could've brought you to this class" said Garfield
What is your favourite colour? Mine is the colour Purple." Said Star
"O.k." I said feeling a little claustrophobic.
"Attention Students, Classes Have Been Cancelled For Today, All Go Home, Staff Meeting!"
"We're going home!" yelled someone in the class.
(OUTSIDE)
"How will you be getting home friend Raven?" Star asked
"Ahm…." I rally hadn't thought about it.
"Raven? ... Hey! How are you?" I turned to see a girl running toward me. OO
"Jinx?" I said
"What are you doing here? I thought you moved to Italy or someplace like that?" she said
"I did, and then we moved again."
"How was it?"
"In Italy?"
"Yah"
"Good, Warm."
"I am sorry to interrupt, but how do you to know each other?" Star asked
"We were Neighbours and best friends." I said
"Oh"
"HEY B.B.!" It was the loud Guy again.
"Hey Cy…" Garfield said
"Need a lift?"
"Um…..I don't know." He looked at me than back at the guy he called Cy.
I looked over at Jinx; she looked like she was in a Dream world.
"Jinx…. earth to Jinx….Is anybody in there?" I said waving my hand in front of her face.
"What….Raven did you say something?" She said coming out of her daze.
"Forget it…See you tomorrow, ok?" I said walking away from the group.
"What… Aren't you going to introduce me to your friends?" Jinx asked
"No" I said
"Come on, please?" She asked again
"No"
"Please?" She said in a sweet voice
"You know I don't like to repeat myself so stop asking."
"Please, or I'll tell them that secret I know about you. I know you wouldn't like that now would you?" she said playfully
'I know she wouldn't tell, but I might as well'
"This is Star, and that's Garfield" I said pointing at them.
"It's nice to meet you." Jinx said smiling again.
"I'm Victor Stone, who are you?" The loud guy asked Jinx.
"Jinx" she said
"What's your name?" he asked still looking at her.
"Jinx"
"Jinx"
"What?" he looked confused and annoyed.
"Jinx"
(5 minutes later)
"What is her Name?" he asked me.
"Jinx" I said plainly.
"WHAT IS YOUR NAME!" he yelled.
"Jinx, my name is Jinx, are you deaf? I only said it 16 times!" she said starting to yell
"And that's Raven." She said pointing to me.
"Can I go now?" I said starting to walk away.
"No, wait Raven. Can I talk to you…….Please?" Garfield asked very quietly, almost whispering. His head was facing the ground, but I knew it was him.
"O.k." I said
"Will we see you tomorrow friend Raven?" Star asked
"Yes, unless the school closed or I get a life threatening disease, I'll be in school tomorrow" I said
I walked a little ways down the road, when Garfield came up behind me on a Skateboard.
"Hey Rav." He said
"Don't call me that!" I said
"Why?"
"Because I don't like it"
"Why……Can I call you Rae?"
"Because I don't and No!" I was getting annoyed. "Didn't you want to talk to me?"
"No, I didn't" he looked confused again.
"But I heard you say "' no wait Raven can I talk to you….please?'" "
"I was going to ask you, but you were going home or something, but I was thinking that. How did you know what I was thinking?" Garfield was really confused now, so was I.
Silence
"Can you read minds?"
"What?" I was starting to think I was going crazy!
"Can you?" He asked again
"I don't think so?" 'I really hope I can't, my life is hard enough.' I turned around and started to walk.
'She has a nice…..' Garfield was interrupted.
"Don't you DARE finish that sentence!" I said/Yelled. I stopped walking and I turn around and was now sending Garfield death glares.
"I didn't say anything." He said
I started walking again.
'Cool she read my mind?'
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