Chapter 2
Me: The next chapter is finally up! Please review, and comment on any idea-
Leo: I have an idea!
Me: What is it?
Leo: Leo Dooley shall swoop in at the last minute, thus saving the day!
Chase: Come on Leo, i'm going to save Bree because I'm the smartest man in th-
Oliver.: Wnow!
Me: Guys! Can I just continue the story, because if I don't, Bree won't be coming home anytime soon!
Everyone: FINE!
I was handcuffed to a chair when Raphael (Evil Tobias) returned from whatever he was doing. I really hope they find me; I don't know how much longer I can survive. Raphael had beat me up pretty bad, and he somehow found a way to disable my chip, so now my family can't track my location, and I can't use my bionics to protect myself.
I snapped out of my thoughts, "What do you want with me?" I asked trying to seem tough.
"Your father…" he said " was going to hire either my self or Krane, to help take you out-"
" But he chose Krane." I said, finishing his sentence
"Preciously child; all of those years I was trying to devise a perfect plan to get my revenge… and then I saw that your dad had become good again; and I simply couldn't believe it. And that's when I came up with the idea to take one of his 'precious' children." He said in a stern tome.
I sat there for a moment thinking about how I could escape. Then, I looked back up at the camera, and I saw that behind it about ten feet away was a screen. On the screen I could see people standing around with worrying looks on their faces. If only I hear them!
So that's the end of the second chapter, sorry it was so short. but it was meant to be intense, not long. What do you think Bree will think of the BAU team? Will they end up creating Mega-Team!? Find out next time! ;)