1Me: I need reviews people!

Roxas: Why me! Why not sora!

Me: Cuz she likes u better. Oh and u read and dont reviwe a fawn dies! Abd u dont want that now do u?

Day 1

Sora wandered around the backyard, which was a forest. It was very VERY cold. Amaya and Riku cam along too.

Riku: U ever get that feeling something REALLY bads about to happ

Sora: Kewl!

Amaya and Riku looked at sora and he was looking at some roots that looked like a skeleton hand. A saw it had a ring on it and pulled it off and looked at it, then put it back on.

Amaya: That seems so...

Then suddenly she heard Sora screaming..like a girl.. Riku and Amaya spun around and saw that the 'root' had grabbed him. Riku and Amaya grabbed onto Sora and tried to pull him lose. When they did the hand was still holding on tight to him. Then the ground started to crack and anther hand came out of the ground.

Amaya: Mother...

Then a body rose out of the ground. Everyone stared at it for a second and screamed. The body was a bride, a corpse bride. Oddly she looked like Amays dead sister, M. Then the trio screamed and ran for the house with the corpse followed. They banged on the door until Fru fru answered. They ran in and screamed at Roxas...

Trio: Roxas there's a corpse and the bang sora screamed like a girl mother! Help!

Roxas: ok what are you spazes...

Then the room got dark and the corpse appeared. They all screamed at the top of there lungs.

Corpse: Roxxxasss...

All; Mother...

Then a portal appeared behind the corpse. She then grabbed Roxas and tried to pull him in. Then Tay kicked the door open.

Tay: WTFH!

Then Roxas and the corpse disappeared. Amayas eye started to twitch, cause she hated when people took Roxas from her. Everyone took a step back ad cowered in fear.

Amaya: that little.. IF I EVER GET MY HAND ON HER SHELL BECOME A RE-DEAD! I SWEAR SHE HURTS HIM ILL MURDER THAT LIL SON OF A..

Then Bryan covered her mouth to block out what she was saying. He looked at Fru Fru

Bryan: We have to get him back! Unless we want her like this forever...

Tay: One day.. ONE DAY WEVE BEEN HERE AND SOMETHING BAD HAPPENS! Whats wrong with place!

Amaya: Did you notice she looked a lot like my sister?

They all stopped and thought for a second, Amaya was right. The corpse did look like her sister. They thought, " Yet, how did she die? She was only 15!wait Amaya has a sister?"

Bryan: You have a sister?

Amaya: Noddes Yea, before I met I met you guys I had a sister, she was 15 when she died...

Everyone sat down, for they knew it was going to be a long story

Amaya: She was supposed to get married, but her father said she couldnt. So her and her lover were supposed to meet in the woods and run away, but he never came. So she died under a tree in the cold, with a broken heart.

Sora: Ok, 1 thanks for not making it a LONG story..but why dose she want Roxas?

Amaya rolled her eyes and sighed. She went into her room, got a picture and walked back in. They all looked at the picture and gasped.

Tay: What is it!

Amaya: This is what my sisters lover looked like...

Fru Fru: He looks just like..

All: Roxas..

It was So ever true. He looked just like Roxas. Tay said they were twins..so Riku hit her in the back of the head.

Kairi: This reminds me of something...

Riku: Yay! Flash back!

Flashback. Destiny islands

Sora: Sitting by water Come on Fluffy the waters great! ( oh and fluffy is a slug..)

Kairi: Sora! Thats salt water!

( Fluffy dies)

Sora: NOOO!

( One slug funereal later..)

Sora: Whimpering and crying

Riku: well adleast we got the raft done, no thanks to you and all your mourning for stupid Fluffy.

Sora: Whos fluffy?

Kairi: never mind.. Flashback starts to fade lets just get some rest..

End

Sora: Hey! I was watching that!

Amaya: Ok.. How did that remind you of something?

Kairi: I dunno I dont write this..

Me: Laughs like a hyena Yea, I do! So shut it!

Tay: ok.. You creep me out,,

Me: what else is new?

Bri: Can we get on with this!

Me: Oh, well excuse me miss fancy pants.

Bri: R u back sassing me!

Me: You dont eve know what that means!

Bri: so theat dosent mean...dosent mean I cant say it!

Kairi: Anime sweatdrop uh..guys..

Me: oh what now!..hey.. standing next to Bri Howd I get here?! Jeff! I hate you so much!

Jeff: Now im writeing this story baby! So zip yea lids!

Kairi: Whos he Again..

Me My names KiKi My X...

Bri: Ouch..

Not gonna get us music plays

Kiki: What the hell...oh my cell.. Picks up phone hello?...Stop calling me!

Sora: Hobo?

Kiki: hobo..

Amaya: Hey! Roxas! Remeber!

Others: oh yea!

Bryan: we need to go down staris!

everyone runs down staris

Bryan:..i mean the under world!

Other: oh!..oh..

Underworld

Kiki: this place creeps me out..

Bri: A sign...

All: Walk over and read sign.)

Bri; id turn back, ifs I were you..

The others shook there heads no but Bri tried to runaway. Amaya and Bryan ran after her and grabbed her arms and dragged her back. Bri mumbled.

Amaya: Dont worry, it wont be like Clinton road when those guys in black hoods chased us.

Then they heard a voice and saw a man in a black hood.

Bryan: Yea HAD to jinx us, didnt you..

Voice: Hey wait I sec!

They all were going to turn to run yet turned back and looked at them. The walked up to the group and asked Kiki a question

Voice: I know why you're here..

Bri: Oh yea? Then why are we here?

Voice:..For the one reason all come down here, DEATH

Bryan: excuse me..

Then a bunch of hooded people surrounded them all, grabbed them by their shoulders. Then one came towards them holding a knife. They all started to scream at the top of their lungs. The figure stood in front of Bryan and held the knife up.

Sora: He was so younger! Whyd he have to go!

Kiki: Bryan! Nothing even happened yet! And jeff are you trying to kill us!

Jeff: uh..duh!

The knife went down. Bryans world went black. Everyone screamed as he fell to the ground, lifeless. All of them looked at the figure, but Kiki looked around. She saw glass, and A LOT of it. Ignoring the death cries of some she closed her eyes. When she re opened them her eyes were compltly blue. the others who remained stared. The figure who was holding her screamed and disappered. Then ghost appered and flied all around, singing in a creepy chorus, " Hes there, the phantom. Beware, the phantom is there."

The figurs disappered, yet all were dead. Then the ghost disappered and Kikis eyes went back to normal. Then her eyes closed and she fell to the ground.