Eragon wated in the forest for his dragonrid to get don but couldn't not get don wating. Then sunddently, he herd it a noise and there was a beutiful elf woman "ARYA!" she said, because that was her name. eragon loveds her at the first time she saw and reched to kisis her because she was the good. but when his lips were near to hers she was gone and he awoke and saw that it awas all his nothing but him a dream. "No!" he cried and hit the ground with fists. He awake Saphirea and told her that they had to found Arya. "But Galbatrorizs will get us if we dont get him1"
"Its a chanse Ill have to take I lOve the ARya."
"Yes little on"
And tey went into fliing into the skies "O no a demon!" she said, bt Eragon used blade of mMght and kiled it strongly. Thety continue to fly around but and found no more troubling them. "Hello I' name is Murtag."
Eragon did n trust th Murtag. He wached him closer, but then trusted him more. "Hi I am eragon thsi dragon is named spahira."
And they contined on theur jounrey to fite Galbrotiscga and Eragon learned some ancient languge tricks to. "EXPELLIARMUS!" he was one day training and thats what he said. He prakticed with Murtag on a dark, sunny day. "Bjargarzlfartherndu!" said Murtagh and he assidentlly killed a rabbit. "Why YOU DO THAT!?" asked eragon, crying. "You kiled a pore innocent thing"!
"I'm sorry."
"No you of not! you are and evil creture Saphira killed him,"
"No i am yor brohter!" but itwas too late and the eragon was killing murtag with her fists.
Tehn Eragon died too because Murtag was his brohter.
The end?