Review time :)

Umbra8191: great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

Thanks. Wasn't too sure about it myself. At least someone likes it =p

Drenn: Huzzah! The prodigal son returns. The long awaited sequel. The Jinx appears to have Jinxed herself! Well.
An interesting first chapter. I'm defiantly seeing the beginnings for a big hero vs. villian conflict with Raven and Jinx. Not to mention the Joker showing up. Which means, possibly the Batman? The seeds of doubt and change have been planted. Now we wait for it to grow, (and YOU to update).
Huzzah!

So I take that the first chapter was okay? It has been quite long awaited hasn't it (oops)

Eagle wolf05: I have to tell you the truth I don't think I like it I'll have to read more to see if I like it but even if i I don't like it I'll read it till the end Becuse I like your stories and I loved Friday the 13

Ahah I would be interested to know exactly what about it you don't like. I am unsure about writing this because 1) I haven't written anything TT based in months, 2)I've never written a whole story based on Jinx and 3) I'm not used to writing characters like Gizmo and Mammoth. It is a bit daunting.

Random Peep: Ahh I loved this idea! Lol Jinx vs Harley, gotta say that would be interesting to listen to their bickering against each other while fighting... well more Jinx kickin butt. Hee Hee but yes! Awesome job, can't wait to see what happens! xP

Thanks :) I'm glad the idea isn't a total flop :) And yeah those are two girls in the DC universe that do know how to talk xD Well… comic Jinx is a little more silent but whatever :p

black rose-raven angel: And here I was thinking the name came from you hearing a bunch of people saying "get your mind out of the gutter" or something like that.
Wow... the Joker's getting involved? This should be interesting... I can't wait to see what you do. Also, I really think switching from Raven to Jinx will be a fun change.
Till the next update
~Rose

Ahah! Well, that and some other reasons I guess. My mind isn't the healthiest out there. I'm glad you think so! I think it'll be something fun to play around with too. Heres to hoping it isn't a fail!

LilithRyoka:Well! Look who's back from the dead, and with a brand new name, no less. Welcome back, Mistress!
Now, let's get to business. Review won't be as long as usual, and all that jazz I'm sure you already know by now.
First of all, my sincere congratulations. I did not catch a single misspelling or error in this chapter. Not a single one. And I checked twice. Compared to your early works, this is a major breakthrough! Nice!
Aaand it seems you've changed the very concept of this sequel. I'm not sure exactly why, but am anxious to see these changes more closely nonetheless. Specially with the focus on the zany witch. THAT's going to be interesting!
So far so good with all the characters. I had a very tiny problem with picturing Jinx through her lines, but it was gone as soon as it started, so no worries there. And there's not much from all of 'em for me to review properly, this being a small chapter and all.
Really? You're going to involve the Joker in all this? Well, I sure do hope you know what you're doing, Mistress. The Joker is a really hard, complex character. And it brings joy to any work, when done properly, so I'm excited to see how things are going to play out!
Ooh, ooh, and Harley! Let's not forget Harley. She's also deliciously complex and insane.
Mmh. Insanity.
Well, I think this closes it for now. Will be checking on the site for your next updates and-oh dear, I've fallen behind on my reviews. Have to go now, Mistress.
Ta.

Thanks. Glad to be back!

Yay! No misspeallings! So far anyway haha. Wow. I am happy to hear that. I was writing the chapter up at about two in the morning as well! Well as for why I've changed the concept… I was looking over my old planning/ideas and… I just didn't like it. Too many places for plot holes. You never know, the idea could go towards a third instalment?

Yeah I'm a bit out of practice with writing them in character and all. Hopefully that'll improve again. As for the Joke… I know. I'm as nervous as anything about writing him. It'll be a challenge. Yeah. A nice, long, fucking chalange. Same with Harley really. Here's hoping there's enough insanity in me to be able to write them to some… reasonable standard.

Eagerly awaiting your next review!

AN/ Thanks to those of you who reviewed. It does help. Oh yeah, if my updates slow down, please keep in mind I am in my last year of College (for you Americans out there, I don't mean university. I mean the English version of College.) Half term is here, but I have lots of word to do for a deadline, and my Driving test coming up, so I may be short of time.

For added fun, how about a short story about what my immune system has just done? Yes. I'm ill. Again…. Please note they all have bad American gangsta accents :)

"So boys, it's been two weeks since that last chest infection. An' she blamed it on stress! Not only that, but she's got 'er drivin test coming up. Yah know what I'm thinkin'?"

"We'll show her who's really messin' with her?"

The Boss nodded, the end of his cigar glowing bright orange as he took a drag. "Right you are, Antonio. So. How are we gonna do that?"

"There're some bacteria in 'er throat. We could give her Tonsillitis! She aint had that in ages!"

"I like your thinin' Bruno. Alert the boys in the control room. I want every white blood cell called away from 'er throat."

Yup. That's my Immune system. A week off and I fall ill -_-

Jinx smiled slightly as she caught sight of Raven maker her was towards her. She'd done something, as usual, to make her hair black. Jinx undeniably preferred her natural violet, but understood why the empath chose to be discreet about their relationship.

She tried to scan the park without making it obvious before moving to meet Raven. The meta human was used to her girlfriend being cautious almost to the point where she acted paranoid, however Raven wasn't accustomed to Jinx acting as such, and picked up something was wrong after she received nothing more than a quick kiss. The meta human always had some flamboyant greeting waiting for her.

"Is everything okay?" Raven frowned.

"Sure. I mean, yeah. Everything's fine." She grabbed Raven's hand, offering her a small smile. "How are you, anyway? I mean, I'm not the one who almost died recently."

"I'm fine." She started walking, Jinx falling into step beside her. "More than fine. I've not no lasting damage." She glanced sideways at the girl. "Thanks for looking after me."

"Sure, just don't do it again. Your friends are nice and all, but I feel way uneasy in that tower." She replied, watching Raven frown.

"I suppose… it would go against all your instincts as a villain."

Jinx could feel the moral bomb was about to explode, so quickly tried to move past it. "I was worried bird brain would try to throw me in jail." She chuckled. "I had images of him hiding behind every corner with some… net."

The empath smirked. "Did you steal anything?"

"I am offended that you would even ask!" She gasped dramatically. "I'm going to give it back, all nice and gift-wrapped. I'm sorry, but bird-brain asked for it."

Raven frowned for a moment, before her eyes filled with disbelief, and amusement. "You stole a fork didn't you? I can't believe you!"

"He asked for it!" She repeated, laughing. "And if I give it back, it means I just borrowed it." She shook her head. "What's the plan for today anyway?"

Raven shrugged. "What do you feel like doing?"

She glances around the park. It was fairly empty of people. Too empty, as far was Jinx was currently concerned. "Why don't we see what's playing at the cinema?"

"Are you sure they'll let you in?" Raven asked, looking the villain up and down. Unlike Raven, she'd done nothing to attempt to blend in more.

"Nope, but it's worth a try."

"And if they don't?"

"I'll kick they guys out and we can watch a movie at mine." Jinx smiled.

"Oh, I'm sure they'll be pleased." Raven muttered sarcastically.

"They'll be delighted! They need to get out more anyway." They slipped off the park, the sidewalk a lot busier than the stretch of green had been.

"How did they take your sudden reappearance?"

"They were shocked." Jinx grinned. "They thought I'd left them for good."

"So you're staying with the Hive Five?"

"Yeah…" She looked at Raven. "Is that a… problem?"

Raven's immediate response was a shrug, but the meta-human could tell she was putting some thought into the answer. "Well… it would complicate the fights against you guys, and don't expect me to visit you in prison." She smiled slightly. "Honestly, I'm not happy about it, but if that's where you feel you belong then… I'm not going to try and change that."

"You're being surprisingly… compliant."

The empath laughed. "We're managed like this so far haven't we? Just." She added, upon recalling one of the reasons she had gone after that creature in the first place. "Why change anything?"

"Almost dying must have given you some sort of brain damage. Before the incident I never heard the end of how wrong it was, and how you shouldn't be with the 'bad guy'."

Raven nodded slowly, before shrugging again. "I'll worry about that when I'm on my own." She stopped them in front of a large building, and pointed at the showing list. "Anything worth watching?"

The villain pursed her lips as her eyes scanned the list. "Nah. Let's go watch something at mine." Jinx grinned. "After we've gotten rid of the guys."

"See Mr J!" A blonde woman pointed towards a couple stood on the side walk, rocking forward on her toes as though it would point them out better. "That's her!" They watched as a black sphere surrounded the two and they disappeared. "And that's the Raven girl. She's part of that team Robin made after he left Bats."

The man watched the now empty pavement a moment longer, before he burst into a smile. "It's been a long time since I've seen dicky-bird."

"But we're going to get the pink-haired bitch too, right?"

He turned to shout at her, his had raised, but stopped mid-motion. "Yes. If we get her, the little friend will be distracted and that will mean one less person to get in the way. Wouldn't want anyone to interrupt our reunion. There's no time to waste! We need to get a BIG supprise ready for Robin." He laughed, turning to walk back down the side walk. "We wouldn't want to disappoint him."

"And what about Bats?"

"Oh he'll probably show up eventually. He never misses out on the fun. And if he does turn up… well, the more the merrier! It'll be like a family reunion!"

AN/ Everyone should know who the last two characters are. I told you I had changed waay from the original idea. Let me know what you think. Where are those critical minds?

Oh yeah, and thanks for reading :)