Disclaimer: I do not own pokemon. I do own Eleanor Willow.
Note: I changed the first chapter so now it makes a little more sense. And the main character is not as much of a Sue.
Eleanor Willow: The Outcast
The Disaster Zone
Eleanor opened her eyes, her pokedolls were blinking; or was she just imagining things? She heard Puffy chirp.
"Puffy?"
"Swa-blu?"
"You're real" Eleanor smiled
She looked down, the pokedolls weren't on her lap anymore and they were running around on the floor, playing some form of a chasing game.
"Cascade, come here!" She called to her mudkip
"Mud…kip?" Cascade stared at her for a while, confused then water gunned her in the face
"Bad! Very naughty, don't do that" Eleanor said to Cascade, in an attempt to discipline it
"Woof, woof, woof!" Midnight barked and jumped on Eleanor's lap
"Zigzag" Autumn growled and pushed Midnight off
"STAY! ALL OF YOU!" Eleanor yelled at her pokemon
Her pokemon stopped and looked at her, then ran and jumped up on her, Puffy sat on her head.
"Okay, you will all-"
Her phone rang
"Hello?" Eleanor said "Oh mum, that swablu doll was enchanted it… well… made all my pokedolls real"
"Oh, yes Ellie" Her mother said, not believing her
"Why did you ring me?"
"Ellie, we have a dinner party tonight, your old friends are coming to visit"
Eleanor Screamed "Oh… YAY!"
"My old friends are… I've got to go; Midnight is playing with my CD player" Eleanor said as Midnight put on a Heavy Metal song
"Bye honey"
"Bye mum"
It has been five years since she has seen her friends except her mother had mentioned she got a present from them yesterday but she wasn't listening. Eleanor ran to her cupboard and grabbed a cardboard box of memories of her and her old friends; one was a present that was newly put in there; it was cube shaped and wrapped in silver-blue wrapping paper. There was a note on it from her mother. It said.
14/7
Ellie,
Your friends posted this in the mail and we got it today when you were asleep with your new pokedoll,
Love from mum
Eleanor threw away the note. She saw noticed stuck on it was a card with a milotic on the front of it. Written in it in silver ink was:
To Ells-a-bells,
I missed you a lot but I'm finally gonna see you,
From your best friend/big brother (just kidding),
Steven
And written in marine coloured ink was:
Dear Eleanor,
I miss ya Ellie,
I'll be seeing you soon,
But for now,
Bye,
From Wallace
Eleanor smiled; she put the card on top of her drawers and put the present in her hands. Eleanor unwrapped the paper and the box was covered with velvet, inside was a pokeball that was cyan on the top and clear on the bottom, she pressed the button and it got bigger and engraved on it was her full name, including her middle name. She threw the ball and with a flash of red light came a small, magenta pokemon with spikes on it
"Nido" It yawned
"Awww, a Nidoran male; he is so cute" Eleanor said picking him up
"Niiiiii!" he squealed
"I'll name you Amigo, because you are a gift from my friends"
"Niiiiii" Amigo cried as he used water pulse on Eleanor's face
"I'm not good at this"
"Poochy! Poochy! Poochy!" Midnight howled as he rammed into Eleanor's leg
"Ow! Midnight, don't do that! Autumn, please stop eating the dust bunnies! Cascade, don't drench my clothes! Puffy stop pressing play on my CD player!" Eleanor said, in another attempt to discipline her pokemon "Do what Amigo is doing!" She said pointing to her Nidoran
"Zzzzzzzzzzzzzz" Amigo snored, sound asleep
Instantly, her pokemon fell asleep on the spot.
"That was easy" Eleanor said walking over to her cupboard again.
She opened the door and on a hanger; there hung a red, flamenco-style dress with the frills going diagonally down from her left knee to her right ankle. She held it in front of her as if she was wearing it, as she span around gracefully as the dress flowed in the same direction.
"What will they think of me?" Eleanor quietly mumbled to herself "What if they find me a freak?"
She thought for a moment, her thoughts were going somewhere. She looked at her reflection in the mirror, she began to wonder if she will look pretty enough or not. Her thoughts were running freely.
"Maybe he will…" Eleanor said quietly as she began smiling; thinking of him…
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Okay, that was the second chapter (Story line hasn't completely changed). Okay, there will be fluff and more mentions of zigzagoons eating dust bunnies (I love that word, Dust bunnies) Please R&R and also No flames please.