Psst!
It's me, Dimiel!
I'm back with another rewritten chapter! Fixed some grammar errors from the previous, previous author and improved some scenes and grammars. I'm quite surprised at how this story got popular so quickly. Has already more than 10 favorite and follows. What? It did not seemed much? Well, it is! To me, at least...
Anyways, before we start the story, I'm gonna take a brief (long) moment in replying a review of someone who I acquainted with and whom I greatly respect...
flo463:
still a crossover or Naruto/Goku/Gohan/Goten steals the place and Rito's harem because he is "weak" I presume?
when it's not Naruto, it's Goku/Gohan/Goten... - '
I personally dislike the harem stealing unless the harem is split in two, which doesn't seem to be the case here!
the big weak points of the manga is that Rito remained human and a doormat all along the manga. I never understood why the author had not turned Rito into an alien?
Goku future king of the universe?
let me be skeptical about this ?!
Goku's passion is to fight and eat well!
I do not see him spending hours sitting on a throne listening to the grievances of people from all over the galaxy, leading a nation, commanding armies and fleets ...
it's not in his character!
I would rather see him fall asleep with boredom or run away as soon as he has important papers to sign!
the opposite of a king actually!
Sincerely, rather than Goku x Rito's Harem, I would have seen Goku train Rito or Rito descendant of Goku.
but I suppose that Goku would be much less "badass" if the story took a turn like this?!
Poor Rito, already the crossovers with Naruto, this one steals his place and his harem, the Goku's fans add a layer!
My reply: Look, man. I understand that you like characters and their harem. And I greatly respect that. But you're missing a lot of points here.
Goku gets the harem merely because Rito is weak?
You know that's technically bullshit to me, right? The only reason why Goku gets the harem is because he was the one who caught up with Lala's situation instead of Rito like in the canon, not because he's weak or anything. While Goku does get the harem in the story, Rito would still be with his first love, Sairenji Haruna, which might as well as what he had wanted all along.
Rito remain Human, yes, but I guess you're too ignorant to the fact that I said I adopted it? Let me repeat, ADOPTED. It's from another author, who adopted it from the original author. If you read that, you'll understand that Rito is still Human...with the fact that he WILL become the strongest Human alive due to him personally asked Goku to train him. He might be able to go toe on toe with Gid Lucion Deviluke or become even stronger. That's what Ki is capable of.
You don't need him becoming Saiyan, you don't need him to buff him up to the point of obtaining Super Saiyan transformation EASILY. Who do you think I'm feeling sorry here for, huh? Oh, the guy who had to lost his friend to become Super Saiyan, who had to DIE because of his son's arrogance just so he can protect Earth? You know, the guy who YOU always make look bad?
Yeah, that's him.
Son Goku.
And what's with the "Goku the Future King of the Universe", man? You know I'm not THAT stupid, right? I know who he is more than you know. I've watched him grew from a toddler to the strongest of the universes, I watched his sacrifices and the things he had to go through. I understand his feelings more than any average viewer would.
What do you know?
You only know how to sympathize a main character without having to take the account of what they WANTED. Does he want the Harem in the place? I don't think so. Rito only wanted to successfully confess to Haruna and I'm going to make that happen. You assumed here that I just take away Haruna for Goku, didn't you? I'm not that cruel and so does Goku. It's not "Poor Rito", here. It's "Poor Goku" since you just make him look bad. Does Goku want a Harem? I don't think so. This story is just for pure fun and fanservice who likes seeing Goku having a Harem.
If you want Rito with his Harem, hey, you got the manga and the anime.
Have fun with those rather than just reading through words here.
I personally am a big fan of Goku. But, do you see me reading through stories I don't like and desperately make a review just so to make the author and the main characters look bad? No, right? As for the Naruto, I understand that part. But I'm sick of stories that favored Naruto and bash the actual main character, that's what I dislike. But dude, I never reviewed those stories and just leave them alone. That's because it is not my cup of tea, not my preference.
Look, man.
I respect you.
I really do.
However, you did not only make me and Goku look bad here, you made the first two authors (shadowdispencer and UsebeniDragon) here look bad. That left a really, and I mean a REALLY bad taste in my mouth. I'm fine with me looking bad and all but don't you dare making them both look bad. Both of them are the people who inspired me to become an author. Even though shadowdispencer isn't really good with grammars and storytelling, he inspired me to make a Dragon Ball Super x Date A Live fanfic (which, by the way, is really bad). UsebeniDragon inspired me to make many, many stories and improve my writing. Don't you DARE disrespect those two.
Like I said above AND in the summary, I'm ADOPTING this story. I'm only changing the power level arrangement here and maybe some other things. The reason why people like this story is because the story is itself and was created by UsebeniDragon with the exception of power scaling. I can't change it to Saiyan!Rito x Harem with the same name of "To Fulfill a Promise". Your review is not about criticism here-no.
Your review here just shows how much you wanted to empower YOUR favorite main character with powers from other main characters. Do you see me empowering Goku with Nine-tail Sage Mode? Rasengan? Tetsugatensho? Bankai? Alchemy? Dragon Force? Dragon Roar? One-for-All? Detroit Smash? Black Clover? As far as I remember, I never did that nor will I. That's because I dislike it.
It just shows how you see that character, as if he can't do anything or anything more with those powers. That, to me, is greatly disrespectful. So, instead of Rito becoming Saiyan, here he learn how to use Ki. Everyone can learn Ki and everyone has Ki. This is not some bullshit Naruto fans make like the, "I don't have Ki, I only have Chakra." when in reality, even with no Chakra, the Humans can still live in the Naruto Universe.
What is Ki?
It's an energy that you use in your daily lives like walking, lifting things, washing cars and such. In short, it's a life force.
Simple, right?
He can do many feats just by training his Ki alone. You know who prove that being a Saiyan isn't everything in Dragon Ball? Picollo, Frieza and the Human representatives in the Tournament of Power; Tienshinhan, Muten Roshi and of course, Krillin, Goku's best friend.
He was able to fight off against Goku Super Saiyan Blue and even if Goku hold back a lot, it just shows you what Ki is capable of. You don't need to be a Saiyan, you just have to train yourself just like how I use Saitama's training for my To-Love Ru x One Punch Man story. He doesn't have powers, he just have feats.
Alright, that's all and sorry if I'm being harsh here, flo463. I just always see you berate someone else who does Goku/Gohan/Goten crossover and I wanted to say something for that. I don't know what you think of others, but if the story doesn't interest you, just don't read it. It's as simple as that. Why force yourself to read something you don't like and make a review about your own preference out of it?
It's pointless.
Anyways, guys. Sorry for that. Just had something pent up inside of me when I read some of his reviews.
Let's just begin the chapter, alright?
Chapter 1:
"The Appearance of a Pink-Haired Alien"
Two years later,
Yuuki Residence
"Rito! Goku-kun! Get up or you'll be late!"
A boy with black hair that stuck out at odd angles, slowly opened his eyes. Sitting up on the bed where he slept earlier, the boy stretched his arms above his head and let out a long yawn. Getting out from under the sheet, he moved over towards his closet and pulled out his clothes; the standard cream colored blazer, white button up shirt, and green plaid pants.
He didn't like to wear it since it was uncomfortable unlike his gi, but he has no choice.
Putting on his uniform Goku inspected that everything was in in order. The saiyan didn't want a repeat of two years ago when he first made his appearance in school, a girl who was known as the 'Tyrant of the Hall' had berated him for having his uniform not in proper etiquette. Since that day Goku made sure to wear his uniform right as to not be yelled at again. He could swear that the girl was already on her way to being like a mini Chi-Chi.
Releasing a sigh seeing that he wouldn't be yelled at, Goku reached back into the closet and pulled of a capsule containing one of his gi. The years he spent with the Yuuki siblings he would run off after school to train, before returning to have dinner with his friends. On Fridays he would take a break per Mikan's request so she and her brother can spend time with him. During weekends and times off from school, Goku would disappear with some of his clothes and wouldn't contact them during those times, simply leaving with a 'See you guys'. Goku then would return in time for school and act as if he didn't go missing.
The first time he did this, Rito and Mikan had come close to calling the cops in worry for their friend before he just returned and asked what dinner was going to be. For making them worry, Mikan cut Goku's dinner to half of what he normally ate, getting complaints from the boy as he tried to justify his actions.
Even though Mikan had gotten him to agree to tell them when he was leaving, she never found out where he headed. Herself and Rito tried to follow him once and waited till he walked out the door. A minute later they opened it and searched the area only to come up short, not knowing that he used Instant Transmission to quickly get to his destination.
Grabbing what he needed for school Goku made his way out of the guest room which became his room after moving in. Shutting the door behind him at the same time, Rito walked out of his room.
"Morning, Goku-san." Rito barely had his eyes open and his movements were sluggish as he made his way down to the kitchen with Goku.
"Mornin'!" Goku greeted back with a grin before observing Rito's state. "Hey, you feeling alright? It looks like you didn't get enough sleep." Goku pointed out to Rito who only nodded in response.
Walking into the kitchen the two are greeted by the sight of a table stacked with food for the three, mostly for Goku. Mikan was over by the counter making bentos for the two. If one were too look closely they could tell which was for whom. Rito's was just a regular sized bento with a green cloth wrapped around it, Goku's was a large bento box with four equal size bentos stacked above it. To finish it off, they were all wrapped in one large orange cloth.
They both sat down at the table after giving their morning greetings to Mikan. Goku didn't hesitate digging into the plates before him while Rito and Mikan slowly ate theirs. Goku finished his first and watched as the siblings ate their meals.
Mikan seeing an opportunity to mess with her brother looked up from her food and leaned over to Goku, cupping her mouth as if to whisper something.
"Hey, Goku-kun. You know who Rito's crush is, right?" Mikan spoke loud enough so Rito could hear their conversation.
"He has a crush?" Goku asked, not really staying around long enough to notice.
Rito looked nervously between the two. He didn't want Goku too know of his crush on Sairenji Haruna, if Goku found out he might slip up and mention it to her. Thinking about it now, it might be better if Goku knew. Rito looked up to the alien as he was strong dependable and was able to express his feelings honestly. Goku was someone he hoped to be and in his belief, when he finally asks out Sairenji-chan he would have made a step closer to being like Goku.
"Of course, he does! Have you never seen him act weird while in school?" Mikan continued as she snake a glance at Rito, who was nervously sweating slightly.
Goku thought about all the times he hung out with Rito in school. Rito would often not pay attention to class and his eyes would wander to a certain short purple-haired girl class representative. He would also try to follow her with a letter in his hands but would often get stopped by an unworldly force. He was once hit by a bus and ran over by a herd of elephants. There wasn't even a vehicle in sight before the bus hit him, and Goku had no idea where the elephants came from.
"Now that you mention it, he does seem to lose focus in class..." Goku leaned his head back trying to remember the girl's name.
He knows that he spoke to her a few times before, a purple haired girl? He only knows one person with the color of violet for their natural hair color and that was Sairenji Haruna.
"Wait, Rito you have a crush on Haruna?"
Rito was having a mini freak-out in his seat has he watched his best friend figure out who his crush was. Now that Goku found out he might end up telling her before he got the chance to confess. But seeing as the jig was up, Rito resigned to his fate and the teasing from Mikan that was sure to follow.
"Yes..." Rito trailed off as he looked down at his now empty plate before meeting Goku's eyes. "Goku-san, please promise me that you won't tell her!"
"Okay, sure." Goku shrugged. "I won't tell." Rito sighed in relief knowing Goku won't go back on what he said.
"Is Onii-chan afraid that Goku-kun might scare away Haruna-chan?" Mikan teased, getting Rito to shake his head furiously.
"Goku-san! Shouldn't we be going!?" The orange haired boy called out in a hurry, quickly grabbing his bento and marching for the door.
"Oh, you're right..." Goku stood up and grabbed his bentos, tossing it over his shoulder.
He made his way after Rito, slipping on his shoes when he reached the door.
"See ya, Mikan!"
Walking out into the sun Goku took a breath of fresh air as he relaxed and followed Rito. Catching up to the boy they walked in silence enjoying the sound of nothing before reaching the school gates. Rito was content before he caught the sight of a brown tail waving back and forth lazily in the wind behind Goku. Goku was humming to himself ignorant of Rito once again while trying to capture his attention.
Rito was trying to get Goku's attention before the sound of a group of girls made itself present. They had little time before someone where to see Goku's secret. Thinking fast, Rito ran up behind Goku and grabbed his tail hiding it from the girls that passed. They stared weirdly at Goku who stopped in his tracks staring wide eyed head of him.
"Goku-san! You forgot to wrap your tail!" Rito whispered quickly while simultaneously letting go of the tail when he saw the girls walk away.
When the appendage was released it wrapped itself around Goku's waist on instinct. Goku sighed as the wave of pain washed away, no matter how much he trained, his tail would always be a weak point. Even if Rito's grip on it wasn't enough to cause harm, it still had his body cease up without much of a struggle.
"Hehe. I must've forgot." Goku chuckled as they continued along their way to the school.
When they reached at the shoe lockers near the entrance, the two put their shoes away inside the locker and put on the school mandatory ones readied in the locker before heading to class. Their morning classes went on as usual. Rito kept glancing at Haruna and Goku was trying his very, very best to take notes while keeping up with the teacher's lecture.
End of School,
Sainan High, Hallway
'Sairenji-chan…' Rito dreamily thought as he peered around the corner, watching the girl of his dreams chatting with her friends. 'Today is the day! I'll finally ask you to go out with me and be my girlfriend!'
Rito was about to approach her before two people made their presence known behind him.
"Finally going to ask her out?" Kenichi asked as he stood behind him causing Rito to scream in shock.
Grasping his chest trying to calm himself from the heart attack he experienced, Rito turned around to see his two friends. Looking at the two he saw a huge grin plastered on his face and Goku smiling at him with his arms crossed.
"What the hell, guys?!" Rito yelled at the two, gaining the attention of the other students in the hallway including Haruna's group.
Rito shuffled around in embarrassment as Haruna walked by them not paying them much attention after his outburst. Goku watched as she walked away wondering how and when Rito was going to confess his feelings to her.
"You know, Kenichi is right. You should tell her soon, Rito." Goku threw in his two cents worth.
Rito knew what Goku and Kenichi were saying was true and he knew that today was the day that he confessed his true feelings to Sairenji-chan. With a new founded determination, Rito pulled out a small sealed envelope and held it tight in his hands.
"You guys are right! Today is the day Sairenji-chan will know exactly how I feel!" Rito exclaimed, getting a cheer from his two friends.
"That's the spirit!" Goku clapped him on the back while pushing him forward to follow after her. "Now, go!"
Goku watched as Rito followed Haruna outside before moving over to the window to watch his friend. Somehow Rito made it out before her and stood in her path before the gates, she still didn't notice him as she was reading a paper in her hands.
Rito was shaking in his spot as he watched Haruna approached him. He held the letter before him, trying to hide the fact that his arms were shaking wildly. His heart was pounding in his ears as Goku and Kenichi's encouragement fled from his mind. He thought nervously at how Haruna would respond, one of them would involved Haruna's foot contacting his family jewels.
Haruna kept moving forward, none the wiser, to the boy's troubles as he tried to work up the nerve to confess. His time was wasting away each second and he knew that his chance would be wasted if he didn't act now. So taking a few deep breaths to calm himself he prepared for whatever her answer would be.
"Saire-"
Looking up from the paper she was looking at a moment ago, Haruna stared ahead of her at the empty spot where she thought someone had called out to her from. Looking around a bit she blinked before continuing to walk home from school.
"Strange. I thought someone called me." Haruna mumbled, not noticing a bush off to the side rustle.
Rito hid behind the bush as he watched Haruna walk off the school grounds. He was breathing heavy while looking at the envelope meant for his crush.
'I...I couldn't do it!' Rito yelled in his head while he tightly closed his eyes. 'Why can't I do it!? Something either stops me from telling her or I just can't! I'm a coward...'
Rito was too caught up in his mental berating of himself to notice Goku standing behind him looking over the bush. He was still waiting, until Rito finally noticed him before they started walking home. It was a little after they started walking when he realized that Goku was wearing his orange fighting gi and blue weighted shirt underneath. Seeing as Goku has changed that would mean he would be leaving to go train instead of heading right home.
"Why?" Rito sighed as he looked down at his feet asking himself and Goku.
"Hm? 'Why' what?" Goku asked not knowing exactly what Rito was asking about.
"Why couldn't I tell Sairenji-chan?" Rito kept thinking back to when he ran to the bushes after screaming her name. "I'll never be able to tell her, will I?"
"Don't talk like that." Goku tried to cheer the boy up while patting his back.
He didn't really know what Rito was going through because he promised to Chi-Chi at a young age that they'ed get married. He didn't remember the promise at first when they meet years later but they still got married. He was just telling Rito what he thinks would be right.
"But I mean it! I never will be able to ask Sairenji-chan to go out with me!" He exclaimed foolishly believing what he was saying.
"Maybe it's just timing." Goku said, thinking of a reason why Rito can never tell her. "Maybe, you just need to tell her when no one else is around."
Rito thought about what his friend told him, gaining some hope that he still had a chance to confess his feelings to Haruna. Maybe they would run into each other on their way to or from school, or maybe in the hallways. There are tons of chances that he could run into her without anyone to witness him spilling out his heart for her.
"How about this..." Goku stopped and raised a finger accentuating his point, getting Rito to look at him expectantly. "Next time we see her, you tell her how you feel. And if there are people around I'll clear them out."
Rito was happy that his friend would do something to help him get Haruna. So with his new found resolve, he agreed with Goku's plan and waved at him and heading home. Goku said his goodbye and waited for Rito round the corner before he started walking in the direction of the edge of the city. Powering up his Ki, Goku soared into the air and made his way towards his usual training ground...
Goku's Training Grounds
Arriving towards a clearing, he set himself on the ground and started his usual stretching. The area was far enough from the city that no one would feel the aftershock of his attacks, and was out of view of anyone who tried to follow him. At the edge of the clearing was small stream where he would catch his dinner and take a bath during a holiday.
Finishing off his stretches, Goku started off his training with a few combos. Going from punches to a series of kicks in a second and repeating it. These times were peaceful for Goku as the Earth was just a planet that would harbor aliens that wanted to escape from their old lives. How did he knew this? Well, he found someone that was an alien who also someone close in school.
It was the nurse at his school, Mikado Ryoko.
When he had to have a 'mandatory' check up, he confronted her about it. She didn't tell him much aside from what she was doing on Earth. Apparently, she was a doctor for any aliens that came to Earth seeking help. He then told her about his heritage which she believed after seeing his tail and declaring 'A horn dog like you can't possible lie to me'. He was confused what she meant by that but didn't pry. Now, whenever he had a problem that required seeing a doctor, he would go to her and pay for the check ups with senzu beans, and on occasion she would try to grope his arms.
"Okay!" Goku began. "Next, I'll work on holding the Super Saiyan G-" He immediately stopped his words the moment he felt a Ki Signatures powerful enough to endanger many lives, make its presence known in the Earth's orbit.
There were four in total with the strongest being the one at the front of the three. The other three Ki Signatures were powerful as well, but not as strong. One of them felt too peaceful too hurt anyone so he focused on the other three.
Taking a few more moments to observe them, he decided that they were no threat to the planet but stopped his training there to make sure that he wouldn't somehow bring a threat to this Earth. He would rather fight without Rito, Mikan, or anyone else on Earth being put in danger. With his mind set, he placed his middle and index fingers on his forehead and used Instant Transmission...
Yuuki Residence
Walking inside the house, he caught the attention of Mikan, who sat on the couch while reading some kind of magazine. She was surprised to see him back so soon from his training. He usually returned a little after she started making dinner. But she didn't complain. She was still happy to see him home early. Talking to him was just as fun as teasing Rito about his crush. Mikan put down the magazine she was reading and approached Goku, who smiled at her.
"Goku-kun, what are you doing home so early?" Mikan asked as she started sniffing the air when she came close towards Goku.
"It's not that early. It's dark outside." Goku replied nonchalantly with a shrug.
"Yeah?" Goku nodded. "Okay, then. You smell by the way. Go take a bath and I'll start making dinner." Mikan ordered him as she walked into the kitchen.
Raising an arm to smell himself, Goku recoiled at the stench before rushing towards the bathroom. Entering the room he quickly disrobed and entered the tub. After cleaning himself of the stench and thoroughly washing his tail, he leaned back and closed his eyes. He lost track of time when he started sensing all the Ki around him, he just followed each one be it a human, animal or a plant. Goku felt happy that the planet was peaceful, even if his Saiyan Instincts were telling him to go out and find strong opponents to fight. Still, peace was something Goku loved and he would do anything to preserve.
As Goku started humming, he was oblivious to the bubbles that began to form in the middle of his bath. They began to increase as a bright light started to form getting Goku's attention as he felt a Ki vastly building up in front of him. Opening his eyes, he was blinded by a bright light, covering his eyes with one arm he reached out in front of him grabbing something soft in his hands.
"Ah~!" When he squeezed the object, in response, he received a moan clearly belong to a female.
Opening his eyes, Goku saw a girl with long pink hair that reached the small of her back. She had a cheerful smile on her face as she stretched her arms above her head pushing her chest further into his hand. As she opened her emerald eyes to the feeling of someone grabbing her chest, she ended up looking into the eyes of a boy her age.
"Hi." She greeted with a wide smile.
"Hello." Goku returned the courtesy before stepping out of the tub.
As he got out, the girl couldn't help but notice the monkey tail connected to the end of his spin. Goku put on a fresh new gi before heading down to the kitchen to see Mikan preparing their dinner. Getting her attention, she stopped what she was doing and washed her hands before turning to him.
"Goku-kun. Dinner won't be ready for a couple more minutes." Mikan told him while drying her hands off.
"Hey, Mikan?" He called, making her tilt her head in response. "Did you or Rito brought a friend over?" Goku asked, wondering if the girl was invited over for dinner and he walked in while she was preparing to get a bath.
Mikan gave him a curious look before shaking her head as a sign of "no". Goku just hummed at himself in wonder before heading back towards the bathroom seeing it now empty. Searching for her Ki in the house, he found her in his room. What was weird for him was that it was the same Ki from earlier, from when he was training. It was too peaceful and too innocent that he didn't have too worry about her being a threat.
Then again, Majin Buu acted innocent but he killed every human on earth.
Entering his room, Goku was greeted to the sight of the girl sitting on his bed with only a towel wrapped around her form. While humming to herself, she was so focused in drying out her hair she didn't notice that Goku entered until he shut the door.
"Oh...I'm borrowing your towel." The girl said smiling at Goku.
"That's alright. I didn't need it, miss...?" Goku trailed off, waiting to hear the girl's name.
"I'm Lala." She answered him simply before staring at him expectantly.
"Nice to meet you, Lala. My name's Son Goku." Goku introduced himself before putting his hand on his chin in thought.
He contemplated on calling her out on being an alien, but she doesn't seem the type to freak out when her secret was revealed. So, Goku decided that he should just going to be direct with her.
"What planet are you from, Lala?" He asked.
Lala's eyes widened for a second before she smiled again and stood up, walking over towards Goku. She stopped before him and turned around raising the towel, Goku was going to look away before he caught sight of something interesting. A black tail that ended in a heart shape tip protruded from her tailbone. It was waving around showing the girl's current mood. Lala then turned around, smiling brightly at Goku.
"I'm from Planet Deviluke. Goku-kun, how could you tell I was an alien?" Lala asked him knowing that he didn't see her tail before a moment ago.
"Your Ki is different from a human's." Goku told her getting an 'oh' from the girl. "How and why did you appear in my bath?"
"How... I used this..." Lala held up her hand and showed a silver bracelet that looked like some weird animal. "Pyon-Pyon Warp-kun!"
Goku examined the bracelet thinking that it was something that Bulma would make. He returned his attention to the girl as she began to explain her invention to him.
"It can warp someone to any random location from a short distance. The only problem with it, is that it can only transport organic matter or in other words, living beings." Lala finished with a sigh as she started thinking about how to fix the obvious bug.
"That's why you're naked?" Goku asked, crossing his arms and getting a nod from Lala. "But why did you use it?"
Lala gained a troubled look as she stared at the bracelet. Goku didn't say anything and waited for the girl to continue.
"I'm being chased..." Lala said softly.
Goku's eyes widened when he heard that fact.
"I used Pyon-Pyon Warp-kun on their ship to escape...that's when I appeared in your bathroom."
'So those guys from earlier are after this girl…' Goku thought as he stared at Lala in sympathy.
Lala though was staring at the brown belt around Goku's waist. She saw the tail in the bathroom and was curious as to what the boy was.
"Do all humans have monkey tails?" Lala asked pointing towards the appendage wrapped around his waist.
"Uh, no. I'm also an alien." Goku unwrapped his tail and showed it to her as she began to examine it.
"Even though I have a tail, I won't transform during a full moon." Lala said cheerfully before taking a thinking pose which Goku thought was cute. "Do you transform on a full moon?"
"Lala-sama!"
Before Goku could answer her, the window in his room opened, and a small white 'thing' with swirling eyes entered his room while screaming out Lala's name with the honorific of "-sama". The two aliens looked at the object as it flew into Lala's open arms. She then hugged the object while her tail started to sway happily behind her.
"Peke!" Lala hugged Peke close to her as it did the same. "I'm so glad you managed to escape, Peke!"
"Yes, Lala-sama. I used the confusion of your disappearance to escape." Peke told her master before looking over towards Goku, who watched the two with a happy smile. "Lala-sama, who is this buffoon?"
"This is Goku-kun! He lives here!" Lala said as Peke gave her greetings to the man as he just examined Peke from top to bottom.
"Hey, Lala? What is Peke?" Goku asked not sure of what, Peke was.
It didn't look like another alien species. Could be some kind of android...or some kind of bio-android like the one he encountered back after he came back to Earth.
"Peke is a costume robot that I made." Goku mouthed what she said, still not understanding what a 'costume robot' was. "Peke can you please…"
"Right Lala-sama." Peke got what she was asking and started to glow.
Lala ditched the towel, showing her naked body to Goku as he turned his head to give her privacy.
"Dress form."
Goku didn't know what happened next, but when he thought it was safe to look back he saw Lala dressed in form fitting clothes that resembled what Peke wore. To top it off she wore a hat with wings and swirled eyes that resembled Peke's head.
"How is it, Lala-sama? Is it too tight?" Peke's voice came from the hat peeling Goku's eyes off of Lala's new attire.
He was lucky that neither of them caught him staring.
"Its perfect! Thanks, Peke." Lala then turned her attention to Goku and started taking up different poses. "What do you think Goku-kun?"
"It really suits you." He admitted, getting Lala to spin around happily.
Goku could admit that the girl was really cute and her personality was something that brought a smile to his face. Before anything else could be said, Goku tensed when he sensed two powerful Ki approach towards his room. Grabbing Lala's arm, he pulled her behind him just as two men in black suits with matching glasses entered his room through the open window. They also had tails like Lala but they ended in a spear tip. Goku was ready for a fight but then remembered where he was. He couldn't fight in the house in risk of dragging Rito and Mikan into it.
"What a troublesome lady. I should have restricted your movements even if it meant tying your hands and feet until we left Earth…" One of the guys said as they looked past Goku at Lala.
Lala stiffened when she saw the men before she gained a serious expression on her face.
"Peke..." Lala said softly, unnerving her clothing.
"Y-Yes, Lala-sama...?"
"Didn't I tell you to be careful about people following you?" Lala asked, getting a shaky yes in response. "Geez! You stupid robot! Now every plan went down the drain!"
Goku glanced behind him, seeing Lala shake her arms in exasperation. He smiled, finding it quite funny before returning his gaze to the two men. The two men approached Lala not acknowledging Goku's presence.
"L-Lala-sama, why not use the bracelet again?" Peke stammered out, trying to find a solution to their problem.
"I can't! After I use the bracelet once, it takes a whole day to recharge its energy." Lala was literally backed into a corner with only Goku between her and the two men.
Hearing their small conversation, Goku knew that it was his time to intervene. He stood his ground and held out a hand getting the two men to stop and look at him.
"I'm sorry, but I won't let you take her." The two guards looked at the boy in slight shock now, officially realizing that he was there all the time.
"Goku-kun..." Lala whispered, watching the boy she just meet proclaimed that he wouldn't let them get to her.
"Move, Human. What's going on here is beyond your understanding." One of the assailants demanded.
Goku backed up closer to Lala as the guard smirked thinking that he scared off the boy. As Goku got closer to Lala, he quickly prepared to use a Instant Transmission to the nearest place where there aren't any people.
"Goku-kun?" Lala was confused why he was bringing two fingers up to his forehead.
Turning around he gave her a son grin before reaching his hand out to her. She looked at the hand before back up to his smiling face. A light dusting of red covered her cheeks before taking his hand.
"We'll handle this somewhere else." Goku said looking back at the two suited men confusing them. It then shocked them as Lala and Goku disappeared from the room using without a trace.
Sainan Park
Goku and Lala reappeared seconds later in the middle of Sainan Park. Taking a look around, Goku smiled seeing that no one was around before he started stretching, preparing for his fight. Lala was staring flabbergasted that they were not in Goku's room anymore. Looking herself over she was even more astonished that Peke was still on her instead of her being naked. She immediately ran up to Goku and started asking question after question getting Goku to chuckle lightly.
"How did you do that?" Lala was hoping from one foot to the other with a large smile on her face.
"I used a technique called Instant Transmission." He told her with a smile.
Seeing her mouth the word repeatedly he couldn't help but chuckle more at the girls curious nature.
"But Goku...why?" She asked, calming down from her excited curiosity state and getting a little serious while lowering her head. "Why did you help me?"
"Because you were in danger and needed help." Goku replied truthfully. "I also haven't had a fight in a long time!"
Lala thought about his answer before they heard two people approaching from the entrance of the park. Goku got in his turtle hermit stance while Lala adopted a worried look when she saw that the two caught up so fast.
"We told you not to interfere." The man with blonde hair said, glaring heavily at Goku.
"How couldn't I, when you were threatening Lala's freedom right in front of me?" He returned the glare full force.
"If you're looking for a for a fight, Earthling. Then you found one." The other said. "We did asked nicely."
With that the two sprinted at the boy who moved in front of Lala, ready to receive their assault and return it. The two reached Goku at the same time and started throwing out high-speed punches. Lala was worried that the two would really hurt or even kill Goku. But all the doubt left as she saw Goku block each punch with his forearms effortlessly. She was surprised to see a wide smile on his face as he managed to make the two jump back to gain some distance.
"That wasn't bad." Goku smirked. "But, now's my turn!" Goku called out, moving fast towards his two opponents.
When he got in front of them, Goku disappeared shocking the two as he reappeared behind them. The closer of the two threw a punch only for it to go through him shocking the group.
"Goku-kun!" Lala called out as she saw the man's fist go through the boy.
To their surprise, he disappeared before the same guy had his legs kicked out from under him. Goku stood up looking down at the man before looking at the other guy. He smirked before dashing towards him. Goku slammed his elbow at him only for the guy to catch it, grunting from the force behind the attack.
They began to trade blows, none successfully landing on Goku due to his superior speed, defenses and experience. The assailant wasn't so lucky as he received most of Goku's attacks, barely blocking some of the more powerful ones. The man whom Goku tripped got up and ran towards his back aiming to hit him while he wasn't paying attention. Goku anticipating this moved around behind the guy making it seem like he disappeared. Goku then delivered a sharp kick to the man's back, launching him onto his partner. Lala was amazed at the fight happening before her.
She could barely follow Goku's movement!
And his attack were even more powerful than the two chasing her. The assailants slowly stood up from the ground, panting from the damage that they received from what they thought was a human. They were staring at Goku for a couple moments, shocked that he wasn't showing any signs of exhaustion before looking past him at Lala, causing Goku to tense his body. He thought that they were going to target her if they couldn't beat him.
"Lala-sama, please. Quit this now..." One of them begged, getting a confused look from Goku who still didn't know why they were after Lala. "Please stop running away and come home."
Goku was shocked when he heard that Lala had run away from home.
She was running away from home? But why? Is she someone important?
These were the thoughts that ran in Goku's mind. He shook his head and regained his composure a moment later. Who was he to judge why she ran away? All that mattered is that she didn't want to go back.
"I don't want to!" Lala yelled at the two men. "I've had enough! I don't care if I'm a successor or whatever! I'm tired of meeting future husband candidates every day!"
"But Lala-sama...this is your father's will." The two argued back weakly.
"I don't care about Daddy!" Lala pulled out a flip phone and started to press random buttons on it. "Go, Vacuum-kun!"
What appeared from Lala's phone was an octopus shaped machine with the size of a house floating above the group. It had two glowing yellow eyes and a mouth that protruded from the rest of the machine.
"Crap! It's one of Lala-sama's inventions!" The men yelled as they started to back away.
"Go suck them up!" Lala commanded the machine, getting it to open up its hatch and start sucking up anything in its path. The two men were immediately pulled inside the machine from the force of the suction.
Goku had already retreated into the air above the invention before it had a chance to catch him as well. He watched with a curious look as the octopus sucked up benches, trashcans, and branches. It was pulling in anything that was not held down onto the ground. The machine then started pulling up trees and everything that was still stuck to the ground, which included the tiles and flooring of the park as well. Seeing the damage the machine was causing, Goku turned to look at Lala who hovered in the air beside her invention with the help of Peke.
"Lala, you can turn it off now." Goku called out over the wind.
Lala didn't respond as she stared at her invention with a hand on her cheek and contemplative look on her face.
"What's wrong, Lala-sama?" Peke asked, her worried as to why she was so silent.
"Hmm...this...how do I stop it?" Lala asked herself, getting a chuckle from Goku at how cute she looked.
"I'm sorry but I have to destroy your invention, Lala." Goku said before landing on the ground before the machine, fighting against the pull of its suction.
"Goku-kun...?" Lala was curious as to what he would do and worried that he might get hurt.
Goku pulled his one arm backwards as he charge up a Ki Blast on his hand with high concentration of Ki Control. Peke picked up on the change of energy levels and looked at Goku in wonder, before stating her observation to her master.
"...A massive amount of energy is building up in his hand." Peke stated as Lala continued to watch, her eyes not leaving Goku's form.
She did not want to miss what he was going to do next.
Goku closed his eyes as a light-blue ball of energy began to form in his hands. The blue ball grew larger as it outgrew Goku's hand and continued to glow even brighter. Lala's inventions suction was diverted from Goku as wind pressure started to build around him. Finally, the solid ball of concentrated energy reached its full growth as it shined brighter than before. Suddenly, as Goku opens his eyes, it condensed back to the size of his palm.
"Haaa!"
Goku threw his palm forward, releasing the pent up energy outward. The attack shot forwards at great speed before coming into contact with the octopus. Goku's Ki Blast pushed the machine high into the sky above Sainan before piercing through and rising higher. The machine exploded when the attack made its exit through its back, causing debris to rain down over the park.
When Goku's Ki Blast reached its limit of ascension passing the orbit, it exploded in a bright blue light, shining over the city. Lala looked on in amazement at the destructive power of the attack before landing in front of Goku who had a huge smile on his face.
'Been a long time since I ever blast anything...' He thought, relieving a nostalgic feeling he hadn't been met from the two years he's been here.
"That was awesome, Goku-kun!" Lala cheered while she started acting out his technique, and claiming how cool it looked.
Goku smiled. "Hehe, it's nothing." When he realized where he was, his eyes widened. "Oh, no! The dinner!"
Mikan would be pissed that he missed dinner and just left without telling them where he had gone. He turned around and started to run back to his house, waving at a curious and confused Lala.
"Sorry, Lala! I'll see ya around!" Goku called out before disappearing into the night.
Lala just looked off into the direction where Goku ran off to. Peke was confused as to what her master was thinking and decided to voice her thoughts.
"Is there something wrong, Lala-sama?" Peke asked as Lala replied with a head shake.
"Nothing's wrong, Peke. I'm just thinking that I found the person I was looking."
End of the Chapter:
"The Appearance of a Pink-Haired Alien"
Yup.
You guys can see changes, alright.
When I was editing this chapter and fix some things, I remembered that Goku blew the octopus vacuum with Kamehameha in the original fic. Since I'm focusing on fixing the power scaling, I changed it into a Ki Blast.
Kamehameha, even in the beginning of Dragon Ball, was capable of destroying the Moon. That was way back and this is GT Goku we're using, who, as I mention in the prologue, is stronger than DBZ Goku Super Saiyan III. I thought to myself; "Why the hell does he use Kamehameha when he can just destroy it with a simple Ki Blast? Was he show-offing his cool attack?"
And so, I changed it. Sorry to those who liked that part. And sorry if using a Ki Blast was also a show-off of how strong he is, but I can't help it, bruh. I'm a power scaling guy.
Anyways, since I wrote this, like, stopping once in a while to do some things in real life, I've received some reviews. And so, I wanted to reply to some of them.
Ronnie Byron Valenzuela Meza:
ronnie: esta bueno por favor no tardes de actualizarlo ademas el migatte no gokui es dificil sabiendo que no hay un enemigo poderoso que lo orille a usarlo y si piensas que es gid es imposible suponiendo creo que el poder de gid estaria a la par con el super saiyajin fase 3 o el super saiyajin fase dios
Translation:
Ronnie: It's good, please do not delay updating it. Besides, Migatte no Gokui (Ultra Instinct) doesn't need to be obtain knowing that there are no powerful enemies in To-Love Ru enough to push him to use it. If you think about it, it's impossible since the power of Gid Lucion Deviluke would be on par with the Super Saiyan 3 or the Super Saiyan God.
My Reply: Yes, it does not need to be obtain. However, you seemed to have come off in a wrong footing here. Have you read the first story of this adoption? The author, UsubeniDragon, wanted to remake the whole Resurrection F Saga in the story.
Just so you know, I'm going to respect it.
Also, your power scaling here is off. Gid doesn't even come closer to Super Perfect Cell. At most, he could be multi-star buster which doesn't hold a candle against Super Saiyan III much less Super Saiyan God, which is a universal buster.
Translation:
Sí, no es necesario obtenerlo. Sin embargo, parece que has salido mal. ¿Has leído la primera historia de esta adopción? El autor, UsebeniDragon, quiso rehacer toda la Saga Resurrección F en la historia.
Para que lo sepas, voy a respetarlo.
Además, su escala de potencia aquí está apagada. Gid ni siquiera se acerca a Super Perfect Cell. A lo sumo, podría ser un destructor de estrellas múltiples que no sostiene una vela contra Super Saiyan III y mucho menos Super Saiyan God, que es un destructor universal.
Guest (A fan from my other and older fics):
My friend, not to rain on your parade but you have fics that you haven't updated for almost 2 years and you adopt other stories? Please don't make this the first and only chapter. And updated your fic DBZxHOTD
My reply: If you had seen my bio, where I tell you about myself, which story I'm continuing and which I dropped, as well as my status in real life, you will know more about me.
The DB/Z/Super x HOTD fanfic of mine is dropped.
Reason?
It sucks.
As an author, we all grew and became better than who we previously were. When I had more experiences and more knowledge in writing and creating FanFictions, you won't believe how much I cringed when I reread my old stories. Also, I'm an Inspirational Author. If you do not know what it means, there is a definition on my bio. Go and check it out.
I thank you all for reading this story. While I do welcome flames and hate, I am not afraid to respond. You insult me, I insult ya back.
Karma's a bitch, you know?
That's all from me, and...
Bye-cha!